REQUESTING FEEDBACK
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Username: Wannabe_Human
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Name of Project/Game: Wonderland Noir: Through the Looking Glass
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Genre: Horror, Magical Realism, Depression, Surreal, Mystery
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Timeframe in which you need (or would prefer) feedback: Indefinite
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Type of feedback that you are seeking (eg characters, pacing, worldbuilding, stats, choices, spelling/grammar): Pacing, writing quality, dialogue, general thoughts on story, spelling mistakes, really whatever you’re willing to give
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Any content notes/warnings that readers should be aware of before starting (eg explicit content, gore, etc): Hoo boy. Graphic violence, drug abuse, depictions of suicide attempts, implied sexual assault, depression as a primary theme, PC in prior established sexual relationship, explicit content, VERY DARK
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Link to the WiP thread, or other means of direct contact. Be sure to indicate if DMing is allowed: [WIP] Wonderland Noir: Behind the Looking Glass (Disco Elysium meets Tom Waits' Alice, 18+) NEW CASE ADDED (67k words)
DMs allowed.