False Ancestry (WIP) [26K Words | Prologue Act 1]

I’ve begun work on my first WIP False ancestry.

You are the child prodigy, the star of the town, the next in line to be captain of the football team. You are the dream that other people want to live, you have always been great at whatever you put effort into. However, that is no longer the case, you have been suspended from the team for the rest of the school year. All because of an incident involving you and a former teacher of the school.

Now you have to deal with the consequences of your actions. You are still the star of the town, but things are different now, even if ever so slightly. That isn’t the only thing that has changed. The other star of the town, the queen bee, who’s been missing for the last three weeks, has been found and safely returned home. Except there is only one problem, she has lost all memories of the last ten months of her life. You are the person who knows her the best, so you have been tasked with helping her regain her memories.

Maybe if things had continued along this path, maybe if things had been different, then everything would have returned to normal, back to the status quo. The Troubled Star and the forgotten star would have returned to normal, but fate had different plans for everyone. A monster is hiding in the woods, stalking and hunting, someone wronged and calling for justice. A child who lost everything.

Spurred by a murder and a thirst for vengeance, a series of events unfold, and it’s only then that you are truly awakened to the world around you, filled with monsters and things that can’t be called human. Do you have what it takes to overcome your instincts, the thing that drives you to destroy everything around you, to save the people closest to you, and retain your humanity?

You have seven days until prom arrives to make your decision, whether as a wolf, a vampire, or a man. Seven days to overcome your past and your trauma, seven days to decide where you stand in this cruel world, seven days until you are a man or a monster.

Details
  • Play as either Male or Female.
  • Play as either a Werewolf, Vampire, or Human
  • Investigate the creatures terrorizing your town.
  • Deal with your new changes and the twists in the relationships around you.
  • Manage your human life with your team and your new life as a monster.
  • Interact with seven distinct romance options, each having their own role in the story and side stories.
Main Love interests.
  • Rachael Von Liechtenstein.

Vice captain of the cheerleader team, overall great friend despite everything. She is a bit weird with how she acts sometimes, you wonder how much of her is the real her and how much is an act.

  • Skye White

Nerd, weeb, and, surprisingly, the captain of the volleyball team. President of the school anime club as its only member, not for lack of trying to get people interested. She is one of your childhood friends and the one that you are closest to, is your best friend despite her odd behavior.

  • Irene North

Queen Bee, Captain of the cheerleading squad, one of your five, four childhood friends. She can be considered your biggest rival in life and your second biggest defender. Both of your parents work together to manage their collective finances. So it has allowed both of you to be close, both as friends and enemies.

  • Jamie Mayors

A victim, that is the best word to describe Jamie; he has always been bullied for as long as you have known him, and it can also be said that you have always been the one to save him from those bullies. The reason for him being bullied is simply because he is feminine, from the way he looks, the way he talks, the way his body curves. The issue is only made worse by the inaction of his parents, his father doesn’t care, and his mother almost enables it. He isn’t like Irene or Skye, but he is still one of your childhood friends, even if you have drifted apart.

  • Ryan Ashford

The most annoying yet charming guy you know, Ashford, for all intents and purposes, is a clown that marches to the beat of his own drum. Which for some reason, works out in his favour every step of the way, and that makes him the best captain that you could ask for. He is the main reason that you gave football a second chance, and the main reason why you haven’t been expelled yet, besides Irene.

  • Charlotte Jenkins

Misguided? That’s the best way you can describe CJ, you can’t blame her too much, as she actively tries to be better than her family, but she is somehow still a bit tone deaf with half of the things that she says. She is that one friend who says something unintentionally horrible with a dumb smile on her face, she reminds you of someone you knew sometimes.

  • John Smith

The new transfer student, you haven’t personally met him, but word travels fast around the school. He is the archetype of transfer students in movies, cold, quiet, and distant from everyone, but the first two descriptions of him could be because he’s rumored to be mute. The one thing that is constantly mentioned besides his muteness, is his sheer arrogance despite being unable to speak. All bite, no bark. As they say.

  • Dante Ericcson

You haven’t met him yet.

Trigger warnings

Abuse, Suicide, murder, bullying, Racism and usage of slurs, themes and mentions of SA. more will be added.

Links: Demo, Discord, patreon

(The patreon will only have additional content in terms of character povs and early access)

No — This project does not contain the output of Generative AI
Yes — This project contains the output of Generative AI

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Ayyyy, congrats on your first WiP

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I love this

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Thank you

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Also thank you for the love

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If you’re human what’s your monster? Is it a Jekyll and Hyde situation?

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If you pick human, the monster aspect will be how far you have to go to survive.

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That’s actually pretty cool

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found this wip random as i was checking cog website like it could get intresting some grammas (like ashford slaps me on the chest as a female mc feels a bit wrong?^^) but that has time cant wait for more will do 1 or 2 more runs later on

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Ashford isnt supposed to slap the female mc on the chest, I will fix that as soon as I get the chance.

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This felt like a harem anime

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In what sense?

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Act 1 RO popularity poll.

  • Rachael
  • Samantha
  • Irene
  • Maria
  • Ashford
0 voters
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Agreed. This definitely felt like a harem anime or VN. First the “girl next door”, next the mysterious new transfer student, followed by the childhood friend, and then wrap it up with the queen bee. Ashford is the rebel troupe, to bad he’s not gender variable too.

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Has a whole lot of potential but definitely needs some polishing and grammar edits.

I feel like there’s a lot happening in a short time frame in game that just makes things very confusing.

And I feel like there are scenes that are meant to not have to much screen time are dragged out versus things/scenes that pass by to quick that deserve explanation.

For example, in the prologue ? when MC is in the office we learn about the exploding car but you don’t talk about whose car it is nor why the team blew it up. There’s a single sentence that talks about some dude who molests another guys sister but again there is 0 clarification.

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Has a whole lot of potential but definitely needs some polishing and grammar edits.

Indeed it does, but I will try to fix things as I go along and I improve, I been writing this since last year and I have nothing to really show for it.

For example, in the prologue ? when MC is in the office we learn about the exploding car but you don’t talk about whose car it is nor why the team blew it up. There’s a single sentence that talks about some dude who molests another guys sister but again there is 0 clarification.

Ah, this isn’t something that I really thought about it and it can be expanded more on as the story goes on as that was the original plan but I see what you mean. I will try to make some quick edits here and there to make the scene more clean overall. (Edit, I will fix it eventually. Working on act 2 rn)

but the the molestation is the reason the team did it and they targetted the molesters car.

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Why isn’t everyone voting for Irene, shes clearly the best option in the game. (Don’t take this statements too seriously, its just strong agenda at play. All Ros will be written equally but some are more equal than others.)

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she is not bad (first impression wise and not much so far to tell) but i honestly have something against divas^^ cant stand them in real life and i only tolarate them in some Wips if they are well writen but for that the story still to short that it can be a choice (no offense just i need first to see more from her if there is something hidden behind her) samatha i think will go yandere i fear what i dont shy away but could also mean trouble for my mc what already happend in the past if did read correctly^^ Rachel is still a mystery for me and i like that a lot there is something hidden behind switching personas and i want to see where it leads^^ ashford i will see how it goes.

in the end i will play anyway more runs to get all routes once atleast but i need first to see more of all of them before i can really pick my fav but rachel leads so far

just my opinion about them so far you did write them well so far so i am still open where it will all lead

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Thank you for the kind words, the prologue is mostly focused on introducing the world and some of the ROs, each act is focused on one and act 1 was Rachael’s. Act 2 will be maria and hopefully she actually gets a vote then, but I will always try my best to write all of them to the best of my abilities and I hope people enjoy them.

So who is your favourite so far?

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about maria i really rack my brain since my post early where she was but i just cant remeber was she the cheerleader or something? ah well i have to read later again when my nap is done need some sleep long day ^^ ah now i rember she was the latin girl, to be honest her impression was so far ok but from all ro she is far boring for me (ok that sounds rude but just not memorbale enough for me to consider her) but that can change when more acts come out with more content from her.
cant wait for the others acts.

1 Rachel,2 Sam,3 Irene 4 ashford 5 Maria

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