In general, I enjoyed the demo! I think it’s an entertaining story and the MC is interesting.
A couple things I noticed:
- In the affair exile option, doesn’t that have sexual orientation implications? It didn’t bother me any because I’m a straight woman and prefer to play as straight women, but idk if it’d bother someone who isn’t? (Alternatively. See 3)
- I kinda would’ve liked to be able to respond to Evie’s “Don’t you feel guilty?” Or at least be given the option to (and have staying silent as an option as well). Because no, my MC doesn’t really feel guilty lol. So why would I spare her feelings?
- I felt a little weird about the whole commentary that MC doesnt want to get married because MC doesn’t love that way/have those kind of feelings for people. It was giving me aromantic vibes… that could be a place to let the player designate their sexual orientation, actually, including same-sex if you put stuff like “I’d always been attracted to x and being with y confirmed that” and/or “I realized that I didn’t have feelings for y because I’m attracted to [other gender]” - and maybe also give an option that MC DID have feelings during the affair by having an option like “I’m attracted to [gender] and found myself falling for him” and an additional option like “even though I’m attracted to [gender], I never had feelings for him” or something like that?
- (Shouldve been earlier in the list but oh well lol) In one of the earlier sections, I think the first time the MC’s full title is mentioned??? there’s a typo that said Barontess instead of Baroness.
I hope that stuff makes sense?
Hope your computer is fixed soon because I’m definitely excited to read more!!