indent preformatted text by 4 spacesThough it’s currently at the expense of the save option - I will work to get that back in As it turns out, nothing to do with the coding and everything to do with the files
Goddammit, that’s one hell of an update! That cliffhanger though, AAAAAAH! It made me course you my breath out. Which means it was great. Can’t wait for more!
How come we can’t just blast away the dust cloud Rose sends up if we’re an air elemental? Why do we have to resort to the other elements when her methods CLEARLY put her at a disadvantage when dealing with that element?
There’d be little to no actual change in order to keep the plot moving.
Cloud goes up, wind blows it away and MC engages Rose. roots/whatever happens or Rose gets outclassed momentarily, cloud goes up to cover her retreat, MC breaks free, or moves after her while clearing cloud out. . . .scene transition.
I noticed something that I can’t believe I never noticed before.
It’s not really important, but:
It rages like air through your veins, calming your soul and aching to be let free; to leave a path of destruction in it’s wake.
Same for the fire version, too.
Okay, now for something more relevant.
When you first wake up and the Headmaster explains how elementals usually discover their abilities earlier, there’s a choice with only one option. Is there actually more than one(and I have to use a different playstyle), or is it just a choice-with-one-option?
-I gained evil points for letting loose my power but I chose the reasons behind it that I wanted to see what I could do.
-The moment where Ciro tries to kill Dante, all three options either leaned toward evil or good. I decided to stop him and I was hoping to throw fireball at Ciro’s shoulder to break his concentration, not a vital spot to be evil nor crying out like a goody two shoes. Plus, Iris likes throwing fireballs at people XD
Favourite points:
-Iris and Rose both being stubborn asses and having a battle of wits and submission, that was such a great battle XD I was half expected Iris to surge her fire in all directions when she was blinded but then I remember, she isn’t that advanced into her powers yet.
-being unimpressed by Lily’s prank. I really like Lily but Iris isn’t so easy to impress
All in all, I love this update and continuing to intimidate people without trying xD
I loved the update, However I felt like I couldn’t be evil enough. I love Dante and Lilly. I would love could give Lilly a idea to make her sister felt even worse. And I successfully sneak Dante, I would love could saying him something about it. In the Ciro Dante Darth Vader stuff. I would love choose I want learn that and attack both while are busy, using my syth powers of drain live and then my main elements.