Hello First topic here… Yikes.
So I might just be embrrassing myself here but I thought why not? My game involves the MC discovering they can control the elements and is basically about them attending an Academy with others like themselves. There will be a war and your character will end up unintentionally playing a major role in it due to matters out of their control. Which side you take is completely (mostly) up to you though.
-Play as ‘good’ or ‘evil’ or somewhere in-between
-Currently 3 male and 2 female romance options
-Pick your main element
Including code I currently have about 15K words altogether along with the basic outline and would like to make sure it’s worth me putting much more time and effort into it.
I’m far off a pro writter and I expect there is a load of grammar/spelling issues that I would be really grateful to have pointed out. There is also likely to be a problem with tense as I decided to change half way through.
But please let me know what you think! I do want to improve it as much as I can. Whether that is simply in spelling/grammar or more complex. E.g. making it flow better/ adding certain choices or just scrapping the entire idea
EDIT: Chapter 1 is now complete https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/s/p0p1nutclo3z7x8/Elementals.html?dl=0
30k words including code
I hope the link works?
This is more nerve-racking than it should be…