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hey, I know you are a bit unsure of the wyverns right now but I drew a picture of a wyvern for fun (and to see if the image will appear on a forum :smile:) so it may come out a bit TOO big just to warn you. but yeah this is what one looks like in my view.

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Wyvern for life they sound awsome

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I always thought that wyverns seem a bit ungainly so I’ll skip on that new type and stick to the gold haha

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I don’t know I’ve just always like how they look more then dragons. I’ve always thought they looked a little more slicker but everyone entitled to their opinion.

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It just seems impractical that they need to use their wings to walk around (since they also serve as their forelegs). It makes me wonder if that makes their wings unfurl more often, making the already-vulnerable parts an even bigger target (whereas dragons can just keep those suckers tucked)

Then again considering how Daenerys Targaryen’s dragons are technically wyverns, I guess I can let that minor issue slide =P

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I think wyvern and dragons could sometimes be a relatable species depending on what angle you look at it. Like of instance a Dragon breaths everything apart from poison, but a wyvern on the other hand only breaths poison. Also a Dragon can have wings for fore arms is just not that common since they are always seen as having their wings on their backs, but wyvern always have wings for fore arms since it helps them to catch the thermals better.
Hope this has been useful in some way :dragon_face: :dragon:

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Cool pic @moonwalkerdragon!

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Thanks :smile: :smile: :smile:

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I absolutely loved everything about this! I take it there’s no chance of romance with Kale? xD don’t judge me I like older males haha

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Aww thanks @Inessy for the nice feedback! :smiley:
Probably not with Kale I’m afraid, hadn’t had that planned in when I was setting the story up. Sorry!

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Sorry about the lack of updates, have had a really busy few weeks. I’m currently mainly working on fixing some existing issues, grammar + coding in for a wyvern option which is a bit of slow going. The wyvern changes haven’t been uploaded yet but you might see them creep in there as I update files but will be incomplete for now. I’ll let everyone know when there’s a large enough update of note happening. In the meantime if anyone has any comments by all means let me know good or bad :slight_smile:

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Yay, I got the gold dragon! :hatched_chick:

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Oh man game of thrones has got me pumped for a wyvern.

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I want a wyvern to ride on.

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Unless you’re the author, please do not post on WIP threads that have been dormant for more than fourteen days.

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Hi guys, sorry for the inactivity on this thread. It’s still being worked on and is probably about 20-30,000 words up from the last update but there’s a hole in the story that I skipped due to not being 100% sure how I wanted to write the scene and needs to be filled in before it’s able to be updated :slight_smile:

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I love this game SO much!! Thank you for making it <3

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I would like to have a text where it says my health goes up or down.

the story, everything was very interesting

also, you’ve got my support. I think this would be sold in the future by the Choice Of Games or something (I’m only 14 years old I have no idea about this lol) The story was good too good that I felt like “I feel it, I can see the world in this story” in other words I could imagine it with the way you describe them I want to see this when its done!

also the stats were good, the only thing I found is… at the main character list

“Name: Kale Cyra. Gender: Male. Occupation: Dragon Trainer. (Retired High Level Dragon Racer.) Residence: Training Facility outside Duareen. Age: Late 40’s. Appearance: Average height with a slim, muscled build. Weathered, lightly tanned skin. Greying brown hair. Light grey eyes. Dragon: Raxus: A large, solidly build blue dragon with silver highlights. Male. Racing Colours: Silver and Cobalt Blue.”

shouldn’t it be

Name: Kale Cyra
Gender:Male
Occupation: Dragon trainer
Residence: training facility

and other characters

downwards and not to the side? I think it would look better if you do that

also, when I finished the game (to the point where its supposed to end)

I encountered, No bugs none at all.

oh and… I’m just starting in writing my own story called “Reincarnated to another world” that only has 500 words for now, I’m trying to learn everything first before risking it do you know where I can get some help or something?.. by help i mean someone I could talk about not just the wiki or something

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