Demon: Recollect (WIP) Sentinel path is done

gender-choice
low-fantasy

#1018

Oh I see. You’re already dead. That’ll be cool to watch. And hopefully our sword will swear less also.


#1019

There’s a reason why Godsin keeps swearing, but it’s a spoiler


#1020

@Bathala
I have now read the original and reworked version and I must say that I prefer the original. It may not make as much sense or have good character development but it was one out of only a few WIP that actually made me laugh. I hope you continue to work on the original. Maybe make it a pardy of the reworked version.


#1021

This. Is. Why. I rewrote the damn thing. The pacing was off, characters were rushed. But the humor was…well…there.

Anyway, I think the reason why you prefer the old one is because it has the fun parts, the new one isn’t on the fun part yet, I think, I don’t know.

You got my last 5 brain cells thinking.
:thinking::thinking::thinking::thinking::thinking:


#1022

so if sing 100 ways to die mc will not die


#1023

Even if you throw the MC into a blackhole, MC will not die…because I say so :grin:


#1024

What if I throw the Mc into the sun


#1025

Still, MC will not die…

don’t make me kill scarlet/max :shushing_face:


#1026

What if scarlet leaves him/her?


#1027

Ehr…cough cough COUGH COUGH


#1028

well shit this ajin to 5000 of not death what. wait … old ago


#1029

Scarlet wouldn’t leave the MC. She love’s him to much… at least she should or it will end bad for certain someone.

:skull_and_crossbones:
Ups who left the skull and these bones here?


#1030

Alive but crispy


#1031

Who left that skul there?


#1032

It was the tooth fairy…