Demon: Recollect (WIP) Sentinel path is done

low-fantasy
gender-choice

#712

I just figured out where ur profile pic is from xd

@Bathala


#713

“Dishonor to your family!”
“Dishonor to your Cow!”

Anyway, I just realized that, there’s a lot of grammatical errors and it’s hurting me. I’m having an inner conflict. Should I edit the 30k words? Or should I write the rest of Chapter 2, then edit the 30k words?
I am so confused right now. :dizzy_face:


#714

Write the rest then finish though that’s just my opinion I just really enjoy the story


#715

Okay, I’ll do that. I still feel like stabbing my eyes after reading my shit.


#716

Dude fix it first if you want it’s your story I’ll approve either way


#717

I’ll write the rest until Chapter 4, then I’ll edit it through beta testing. Thank you for helping me get my shit together. :hearts:


#718

Bounty hunter path first plez


#719

Hahaha, don’t worry. I’ll have it up in… uhm… I’ll have it up. Heh


#720

:smiley:


#721

I’ve been reading your story. So far great dialogue and interacions between the characters. The setting is intriguing. Congratulations bro!


#722

The updates they’re… too… fast!


But seriously, I wish I could write that damn fast.


#723

I have a lot of free time and have less booze :sweat:


#724

It’d be cool if we could choose the sex of our sword. Also you’re really making me miss Whisper.


#725

Godsin’s gender is the same as your MC.

Also, I might as well tell this since this will be included. Once you retrieve Godsin, you can change it into another kind of sword. Short sword a katana etc etc.


#726

I like this Idea lol…like you could have a straight laced male sword,a sassy female sword…or a cold sword that barely talks that uses they pronouns


#727

Oh yes, that’s the reason why I removed the trait stats. The player may choose what kind of attitude Godsin will have. Stoic, Asshole, Sassy, Mischievous, Mother hen and more


#728

Katana for the win. Also, why is it named Godsin? Godslayer would make more sense, considering.


#729

Oh there will be a juicy reveal. rubbing hands intensifies

Also Godslayer, Godkiller seems too common for me


#730

God’s Letter Opener


#731

Pardon my ignorance but, whats a “wheres francis” thing ?

:fox_face: