I really liked your writing! The humor bits are really good and seem original, and the sword is arguably the funniest HG character
Typos and bug ish
You’re brain is having one of those ‘Error 404’ messages—reply not found.
Blur smirks. “I like where this is headed, unfortunately Ember will kick my ass if she finds out that I’m interested with a future member. But I think it’sbe worth it,” she reluctantly leans back, her gaze dances from your eyes to your lips.
Scarlet perks **upâ€”**standing behind you as she takes a peek. What you expected was a squealing Scarlet, running around the HQ, taking pictures at anything with ‘this item was touched by a hero’ sign. Surprisingly, Scarlet is well **behavedâ€”**almost too well.
You glance at Scarlet, face all red as she avoids her gaze at Blur, eventually her eyes lock with **yoursâ€”**screaming with ‘help, I don’t know what to do!’
Oh and these weird symbols appear in few more paragraphs I forgot to copy