This story is so cute! To be honest, I almost didn’t check out this story because it seemed childish(and I’m not a huge slice of life fan) but I’m glad I gave it a chance! The customization options are actually insane. Though, when their mother gave the twins their lockets, the star locket is given to the curious and precocious one; seeing that the children are 5 years old(if I remember correctly) at that time, I would’ve thought they would ask what that word means. It is a “big” word for a child. Though I can just be nitpicking, haha.
Moving on, I love my twins and their bond. I named them Cassandra(Cassie) and Cameron(Cam), with Cassie having the heart locket and Cam having the star locket. I was never particularly close to my older brothers, so it was nice to put myself in Cassie’s shoes and be best friends with Cam(he’s the older twin). I now wish I had a twin of my own…
Besides that, I do agree with some of the posters here. The pacing is nice at times, but there’s some parts I did skip over since it didn’t seem super relevant… An example is when you find out B used to be part of the friend group and afterwards you and your twin go and hang out with the others, I wasn’t really interested in Wayne and Rosie’s argument, I was more interested in finding out if B was telling the truth and what went down to cause the rift. Though that’s just my nosy side coming out.
I’m interested to see where everything goes and leads up to! I did read the sidestory so it was nice to see the little references and connections here. I don’t really post much since I’m a big time lurker, but I was compelled to. It’s an actual crime how underrated this WIP is with how customizable it is and I can only imagine how time consuming it must be to code it, as well to write an engaging story and characters; especially ones as young as the cast… Kudos to you, truly.