Dawn of Heroes (WIP) (Updated 05/14/25)

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Demo is ending after power customization

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I’m not able to reproduce this, is it still happening? Which powers are you giving yourself?

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Sorry I’ll have to reproduce it in a bit but I had all the powers and cheats were active since I wanted to do a cheat run

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My understanding is. With cheats = bugs galore

You did without cheats to see if same results?

Would be nice to cheat in some of these, but extremely difficult as can’t get to code lines myself.

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I was very careful with implementation of the cheats I added to avoid bugs that wouldn’t pop up in a normal run. I’m not saying they can’t cause problems, but I’m doubting that’s the problem here.

I have done some more attempts with both cheats on and adding every power and I still am not able to replicate it. Sorry, it is hard to say if this is a code issue or a hiccup from the site. :confused:

Please let me know if this continues happening.

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A few questions I have…

  1. Do any of the heroes have increased lifespans?

  2. How did all these Heroes get their powers? Was it from the lightning storm like the MC, or otherwise?

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Yes, but I doubt it’ll ever need to appear in the story.

They came from the source of what created the storm, but I’d rather not say too much because of minor spoilers for the future stories.

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Is the Demo supposed to end after the group name and breaker not wanting to be part of the league?

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Save before that and select play again, now load the previous save and done but this is only until you leave the page(edit:page as browser page not like show stats and alike) again.
I had the same problem and Sorry the bad english

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It’s hard to say. Do you know which chapter this is happening in? The demo should end around Chapter 26 or 27. What you’re talking about sounds like Chapter 5.

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Oh this was one of my favourite IFs, a decent story. Are there new romances in? I’d love to have villain romances.

Can’t wait to read the new demo.

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That depends on when you last read it. If I recall correctly, the last time you posted in this topic was before I rearranged the chapter orders, which means I eliminated two of the romances and added Hyginn as an option.

There are no villain romances in this story. I do have plans for some in a future installment, but one step at a time.

Oh yeah, thanks for the response.

Btw is Poly romances available? Harem romances are rare in IF games but definitely the best.

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I think there was a small discussion about a year ago about the possibility of poly romances. One of the first hurdles is finding characters who would be okay with that kind of relationship. In this story though, there won’t be. I’m not against developing an option in a sequel, but I’m not comfortable with adding one in this story.

You can have two romances at the same time, though, one in the mask and another outside of the mask.

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Puggy > Pudgy

Tirshary = Tertiary colour

Argus > arduous

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Out numbers > outnumbered

Edit: I think you can get away with a few mistakes. But the current level of misspellings is a bit high for publication. Would recommend organising a big spellcheck campaign with your readers.

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Thanks for the feedback! I will make sure to get those fixed in the next update.

I am in the process of editing, which should fix most of the spelling errors. However, I didn’t have any physical description of the main character reviewed, so thanks again for this information.

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No worries, it’s a lot to check all of it yourself, maybe for a few weeks or a month, just concentrate on asking for and requesting small lower level feedback from readers. People should help out with what you need in return for reading your work. :smiling_face:

Btw,

The Debating Team would sound better than Speech Class.

2.When choosing to describe your MC’s skin tone. Instead it’s asking me what NPC’s skin tone is?



For brown eyes, the two descriptive run together and blur meaning. Either separate down to earth + welcoming bit - ā€œWelcoming brown eyes, down to earth…

Or could use welcomingly?

Also for hazel eyes, do you mean the first thing people notice? Or yourself?

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I’ll consider this.

This is a typo with a variable. I’ll have it fixed for the next update.

Thank you for pointing this out! I’ll address it.

People, I’ll fix it.

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It’s one of the best superheroes IF I’ve seen on COG so far, I’m really gald It’s finally completed…i just have one issue there’s no save slot and it’s really annoying cause if i leave my browser in anyway I’d have to start from the very beginning and make the choices i made before again.