Update One
Merry Christmas! I seem to have luckily finished the prologue/chargen on time. Check it out in the original post above.
All C&C appreciated, of course! I do have a stylistic question, though, about CamelCase words. I know that some developers abhor it, but how do you feel about them as a reader? Should I replace or keep them in this work?
Also, I plan to have Chapter One finished on January 31st. Actually, I’d like to have each chapter be done at the end of each successive month. Not sure how sustainable that’ll be, but it’ll be a good challenge. I plan on this story being at least 5 chapters.
Enjoy!