Working now, once again thank you for your help.
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Hello @HarrisPS
Thank you. I try to make a viki but looks like it’s only done by Leaders amd Moderators.
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Hello @DaoImmerser
Sorry for the late answer but I’am all ways happy and ready to help.
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Out of yinshan is not xianxia. It’s wuxia. Murim based story.
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True but unless someone is a reader of those genres than to the casual observer they might as well be the same thing.
Hey, just saw this. A little suggestion. Maybe add more to the synopsis. Because a lot of these were implied by the Xianxia genre. I’m still going to read it since it’s a third ever Xianxia on this site.
I konw,I meant the four horsemen of east asian themed martial arts stories
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I’m gonna do this in the next free update.
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Added 13K words update for my patreon, making the patreon version 85K words long.
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A power fantasy plot is always a hit.
I’ve read a good number of MTL xianxia novels, this is similarly interesting. As a suggestion I would recommend improving the grammar, along with exploring better structure and vocabulary as there are many spelling mistakes and the text can be a little bland, especially after the first few pages.
On the plus side, the plot moves at a good pace and doesn’t bore.
As a personal request, I would also like to play a more nuaced character who speaks little and prefers actions. The current options can sometimes make my character too cocky and cringy.
Most importantly, please have fun writing!
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I’ve already made some changes which you’ll see in next free update, though I’m not able fully commit myself to improve the grammar as most of my time is spent writing new content for patreon weekly updates. Maybe someday I’ll try to complete my weekly goal earlier so I can work on improving things.
I’ve already added such choices, wait till the next free update and you won’t be disappointed.
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