“My soul feels calm to see his words and yet, my years of training and fighting against the powerful cultivators are urging me to attack $[him}, to fight and find a chance to escape from here.” It appears when you choose “Are you okay?” and “Stare at him”
When you choose either of those two options it also skips “I come here with the mission of bringing the Divine Physician and her imperial princess to the capital, the emperor himself has commanded me.” and goes straight to “A boy who hasn’t even lived past 10 has delayed my mission.”
“At the mention of her mother, the girl who didn’t shed a single tear after getting slapped by you can no longer control her emotions.” I didn’t slap her, I slapped her brother.
I really like the story so far. It would be great if there were consequences if we treat commoners better than nobles (except Xu Yan, obviously, she’s an angel).
The first two option was later added to the game (last week I think) so I think I missed adding some of the dialogues. Now along with the second error you mentioned I’ve corrected them.
Speaking of consequences of treating commoners better, you will see later in the story once you begin getting famous.
I’m pretty sure I mentioned that she is sent to live with the maids, also one of the option in the current public version also mention why she is sent away.
The universe will collapse.
I remember writing this scene but for some reason I can’t find this in the story, can you share a screenshot of this scene?
The old version already has this option and once the rewrite proceeds further you will see that option again.
That’s probably one of the coolest things to ever happen if a MC ever used a full power swing. It was far above my expectations. You continue to kill it with this genre.
some parts of the early game still have the mistaken pronoun issue, the leader of the group that kills the sanziyan in the forest still called me “him” even while i was playing as a girl
The new plotlines in the palace are really good! The set up for our MC talking about reinforcing the walls works really smoothly
And that cliffhanger???! I’m sure Ruolan will be fine but the perpetrator of such thing will have to sleep with one eye open if MC finds out who it was lol
So quick question if i save at the end of the update when it tells you to will i be able to start there from the next update.Because ive been saving before it and having to restart not that im complaining
I followed it seriously all the way up to just before this latest update, but I have a vague memory of having read it when it had just begun, because I remember the beginning of the story.
I’ve been a lurker here but I must come out of my cave just to say thank you for allowing more use to leg related attacks and such things. It’s been fun being a little demon child who sees everything as a toy to break.
This rewrite is certainly a great improvement and that is saying something! It was already a fun read before that, you’ve came a long way in your writing and I hope whatever plans you have in mind to this story goes right.
so yeah!
