Do you intend to rewrite everything?
As far as I know only grammar is being corrected and some scenes are being added, other than that story is more or less the same.
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No its good on my end.
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the way he described it on patreon a while back suggests that he isnt “rewriting” everything but is going back through and doing changes and additions to the previously written content to make it flow better and correct spelling mistakes and things like that
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The overall story may will be the same but apart from that, this is a complete rewrite.
I intend to improve everything that readers have pointed out so far, this includes: pacing, grammar, mc’s age, character’s personality and many more.
In this rewrite version you can expect the game to be more refined then before and new events are also getting add in between the old events.
You can say the rewritten version may look unrecognizable from the old version, but in a better way.
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I just finished the public update
I loved it, this is PEAK but i now hate the fact that it’s finite…with all that being said @DaoImmerser thank you soo much for creating this story I really appreciate it and I think we all appreciate it as your fan’s
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I finally got to the update and I couldn’t help but notice a very noticeable increase in both descriptions and grammar in the new chapter! It’s honestly so cool to see authors progress in their skill 
That ending got me a bit emotional, I can’t wait to see how everyone gets stronger after the time skip, all of them are going to be badasses on their own way
Thank you for all your hard work!!
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How long would the time jump be? Would it be until the MC is 18 years old?
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So it ends when you enter the chamber or am i just experiencing a bug
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It ends right there.
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“You wonder if it’s a blessing for him to meet Xu Ke or a curse.”
This nearly got me, somehow. 
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Long time no write.
I found this in the last update.
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I don’t do that a lot, but this one is sticky. I try the part of {son} {daughter} and conclute that the {child} too have this bug.
Think i don’t get this scene.
How many are in front of you ? How many people ki you absorb ?
Did you absorb other people ki on the moutain ?
This one is for the difference of height, an adult women pass one arm around a five year old shoulders and can walk. That impossible !
Hey about the rewrite. First don’t love that. The correction of grammatical work, yes but that it.
The story now dump a lot of background lore on readers. That make the story not fun to read.
At first i read the story and the world through the hero and his surround. The lore make sense and believable. The rewrite add too much. A lot of time is take to describe the carpet and the furnitures. I my point its a lot of focus on things people will discard, the second they read about it.
why not focus on what help the story ?
The story is original in the sense that it don’t lose the reader. Its let the reader take place in this universe. The reader can create the rest of the universe around the hero. It like in comics book.
The life between panels.
A good story teller let its listeners take place in the story. That how you get everyone.
Shhh don’t spread this around 
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I am extremely happy to know that you have liked the story so far. Readers like you are the reason why I am able to keep going despite facing numerous challenge in righting and troll.
Truly thank you for your words!
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After the rewrite the mc will be 14-15 years old before the time skip and the time skip will be 1-2 years long. So the mc directly wouldn’t become an adult.
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I have already fixed this before your report, there was a little missing command here that I have added later.
The mc didn’t absorb other cultivaror’s QI, and about their amount; I think I have already wrote about that in the mountain chasing scene.
Mc in this scene is 10 years old and it is very much possible to take support of someone mc’s age. After all she was not fully leaning on mc, but only taking a support that can also be done by placing her hand on mc.
Now about your words on the rewrite, I’m positive that most of the readers like reading about the story lores to know more about the world the story has taken place in.
And I don’t think I have taken too much words to describe the background and it’s only for one time, to give readers an idea about it. Someone even requested me to add more details on this since not everyone’s mind can fill up the gap with their imagination. Some of them needs a little support here to imagine the story scenario.
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Last weekly update of november 2025 for patreon is here with a total 22K words of new + rewritten content. Making the current length of rewrite 68K words long.
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Hey author tell me how or what stats are needed to identity shadow cat aka famous thief real identity and how would I interrogate him to make him admit his real intention for being in palace instead of crap he tell to our mc (to increase his reputation more he want to steal emperor seal), which was I think is that he is working for someone and against the emperor or something like that kinda forgotten.
You will get more info on him in the rewrite, though I wouldn’t say things are as complicated as you may have thought.
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What scene is this?What scene is this?
Considering the game will often tell us directly if someone is lying as it’s something the MC can sense I figured the thief was telling the truth ¯_(ツ)_/¯
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