# Dao Ascension (WIP) \[(10-11-2026) {Rewrite 960K—\>980K Words} | {1022K—\>1048K Words} Patreon (07-11-2026)\] \[High Fantasy, Overpowered Protagonist, Chinese fantasy, Cultivation world, Xianxia, Jianghu\] **URL:** \ **Category:** Works In Progress\ **Tags:** nonbinary-inclusive, gender-choice, high-fantasy\ **Created:** [April 22, 2025, 10:21am UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/dao-ascension-wip-10-11-2026-rewrite-960k-980k-words-1022k-1048k-words-patreon-07-11-2026-high-fantasy-overpowered-protagonist-chinese-fantasy-cultivation-world-xianxia-jianghu/168293 "2025-04-22T10:21:50Z")\ **Posts on this page:** 20\ **Page:** 2
**Author:** ![devil](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/choiceofgames/user_avatar/forum.choiceofgames.com/devil/32/203570_2.png) [@devil](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/u/devil)\ **Post date:** [April 22, 2025, 7:48pm UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/dao-ascension-wip-10-11-2026-rewrite-960k-980k-words-1022k-1048k-words-patreon-07-11-2026-high-fantasy-overpowered-protagonist-chinese-fantasy-cultivation-world-xianxia-jianghu/168293/21 "2025-04-22T19:48:12Z")
Hi! I hope you don’t mind me asking but I never knew that Cogdemos was accessible for blind people more than itch, I’m curious on how that’s the case, and in general how do you go about playing IFs? ---
**Author:** ![Moonwalking\_Moon](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/choiceofgames/user_avatar/forum.choiceofgames.com/moonwalking_moon/32/250072_2.png) [@Moonwalking\_Moon](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/u/Moonwalking_Moon)\ **Post date:** [April 22, 2025, 8:49pm UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/dao-ascension-wip-10-11-2026-rewrite-960k-980k-words-1022k-1048k-words-patreon-07-11-2026-high-fantasy-overpowered-protagonist-chinese-fantasy-cultivation-world-xianxia-jianghu/168293/22 "2025-04-22T20:49:11Z")
Ts so tuff 🔥🔥 keep up the good work ---
**Author:** ![Jonathan\_Taylor](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/choiceofgames/user_avatar/forum.choiceofgames.com/jonathan_taylor/32/207277_2.png) [@Jonathan\_Taylor](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/u/Jonathan_Taylor)\ **Post date:** [April 22, 2025, 10:10pm UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/dao-ascension-wip-10-11-2026-rewrite-960k-980k-words-1022k-1048k-words-patreon-07-11-2026-high-fantasy-overpowered-protagonist-chinese-fantasy-cultivation-world-xianxia-jianghu/168293/23 "2025-04-22T22:10:20Z")
Alot of grammatical errors but otherwise the wip is great. waiting for the next update ---
**Author:** ![Christopher\_Bull](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/choiceofgames/user_avatar/forum.choiceofgames.com/christopher_bull/32/106136_2.png) [@Christopher\_Bull](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/u/Christopher_Bull)\ **Post date:** [April 23, 2025, 12:34am UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/dao-ascension-wip-10-11-2026-rewrite-960k-980k-words-1022k-1048k-words-patreon-07-11-2026-high-fantasy-overpowered-protagonist-chinese-fantasy-cultivation-world-xianxia-jianghu/168293/24 "2025-04-23T00:34:36Z")
It was fun to play. I mostly just fooled around hiding my real power. No one better threaten my sister or it’s a death sentence. That boy who saw in a vision isn’t smart if he came alone lol, what was he expecting. ---
**Author:** ![Elemental](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/choiceofgames/user_avatar/forum.choiceofgames.com/elemental/32/134281_2.png) [@Elemental](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/u/Elemental)\ **Post date:** [April 23, 2025, 1:23am UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/dao-ascension-wip-10-11-2026-rewrite-960k-980k-words-1022k-1048k-words-patreon-07-11-2026-high-fantasy-overpowered-protagonist-chinese-fantasy-cultivation-world-xianxia-jianghu/168293/25 "2025-04-23T01:23:19Z")
this is really good and just out of curiousity who are the MC’s love interest ---
**Author:** ![Christopher\_Bull](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/choiceofgames/user_avatar/forum.choiceofgames.com/christopher_bull/32/106136_2.png) [@Christopher\_Bull](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/u/Christopher_Bull)\ **Post date:** [April 23, 2025, 2:07am UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/dao-ascension-wip-10-11-2026-rewrite-960k-980k-words-1022k-1048k-words-patreon-07-11-2026-high-fantasy-overpowered-protagonist-chinese-fantasy-cultivation-world-xianxia-jianghu/168293/26 "2025-04-23T02:07:37Z")
The problem with that is they only view each as siblings even if MC is overprotective sometimes. It’s just going to be weird seeing as she basically raised MC even when her mother came back. Some things aren’t meant to be. I could understand why you want it. This is just my opinion ---
**Author:** ![DaoImmerser](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/choiceofgames/user_avatar/forum.choiceofgames.com/daoimmerser/32/250755_2.png) [@DaoImmerser](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/u/DaoImmerser)\ **Post date:** [April 23, 2025, 2:39am UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/dao-ascension-wip-10-11-2026-rewrite-960k-980k-words-1022k-1048k-words-patreon-07-11-2026-high-fantasy-overpowered-protagonist-chinese-fantasy-cultivation-world-xianxia-jianghu/168293/27 "2025-04-23T02:39:37Z")
Currently there are two confirmed RO, Xu Yan and Li Hua. ---
**Author:** ![Carloshmc2812](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/choiceofgames/user_avatar/forum.choiceofgames.com/carloshmc2812/32/249194_2.png) [@Carloshmc2812](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/u/Carloshmc2812)\ **Post date:** [April 23, 2025, 2:40am UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/dao-ascension-wip-10-11-2026-rewrite-960k-980k-words-1022k-1048k-words-patreon-07-11-2026-high-fantasy-overpowered-protagonist-chinese-fantasy-cultivation-world-xianxia-jianghu/168293/28 "2025-04-23T02:40:37Z")
I’m not the person who wrote it, but blind people use screen readers that allow them to use cell phones or computers. ---
**Author:** ![MadAdam](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/choiceofgames/user_avatar/forum.choiceofgames.com/madadam/32/116546_2.png) [@MadAdam](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/u/MadAdam)\ **Post date:** [April 23, 2025, 3:09am UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/dao-ascension-wip-10-11-2026-rewrite-960k-980k-words-1022k-1048k-words-patreon-07-11-2026-high-fantasy-overpowered-protagonist-chinese-fantasy-cultivation-world-xianxia-jianghu/168293/29 "2025-04-23T03:09:57Z")
Interesting premise but pacing is a bit frenetic and so much is just not developed. Even from the first choices, you pick your mothers eyes and your fathers… list of colors which I assume is hair but doesn’t say, nor does it clarify as you just pick a color and it goes unacknowledged directly into more narrative. Idk, it feels like a commercial, and is a good commercial with nice highlights, but we need the in between to really buy in to the characters and world. A great start but I would encourage you to explore/expand the plot and character development so we can establish sufficient back-stories/motivations to propel us forward. ---
**Author:** ![DaoImmerser](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/choiceofgames/user_avatar/forum.choiceofgames.com/daoimmerser/32/250755_2.png) [@DaoImmerser](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/u/DaoImmerser)\ **Post date:** [April 23, 2025, 3:17am UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/dao-ascension-wip-10-11-2026-rewrite-960k-980k-words-1022k-1048k-words-patreon-07-11-2026-high-fantasy-overpowered-protagonist-chinese-fantasy-cultivation-world-xianxia-jianghu/168293/30 "2025-04-23T03:17:29Z")
I’ll try to improve the story in my free time, but these days I’m a little busy and as I promised I’ll also be busy updating the story every week for my patreons so it may take a while before the already written scenes will be rewritten. Still I’m aiming to complete this goal within a month. ---
**Author:** ![HeroHankPropane](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/choiceofgames/user_avatar/forum.choiceofgames.com/herohankpropane/32/45135_2.png) [@HeroHankPropane](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/u/HeroHankPropane)\ **Post date:** [April 23, 2025, 3:51am UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/dao-ascension-wip-10-11-2026-rewrite-960k-980k-words-1022k-1048k-words-patreon-07-11-2026-high-fantasy-overpowered-protagonist-chinese-fantasy-cultivation-world-xianxia-jianghu/168293/31 "2025-04-23T03:51:41Z")
is Ruohan a RO? ---
**Author:** ![Ominking1](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/choiceofgames/user_avatar/forum.choiceofgames.com/ominking1/32/235136_2.png) [@Ominking1](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/u/Ominking1)\ **Post date:** [April 23, 2025, 4:24am UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/dao-ascension-wip-10-11-2026-rewrite-960k-980k-words-1022k-1048k-words-patreon-07-11-2026-high-fantasy-overpowered-protagonist-chinese-fantasy-cultivation-world-xianxia-jianghu/168293/32 "2025-04-23T04:24:06Z")
Bro have have been looking for this type of game bro thank you so much for this game if I was a billionaire I would give you 5 million and I am not joking bro keep this masterpiece up and please don’t be like the others and abandoned it bro right I wish you could see me I am jumping around with joy 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏 ---
**Author:** ![GenericUsername](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/choiceofgames/user_avatar/forum.choiceofgames.com/genericusername/32/211314_2.png) [@GenericUsername](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/u/GenericUsername)\ **Post date:** [April 23, 2025, 5:17am UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/dao-ascension-wip-10-11-2026-rewrite-960k-980k-words-1022k-1048k-words-patreon-07-11-2026-high-fantasy-overpowered-protagonist-chinese-fantasy-cultivation-world-xianxia-jianghu/168293/33 "2025-04-23T05:17:53Z")
Okay, the writing is a bit… rough. At the start there’s a heart emoji/emoticon in the dialogue, the option when you choose your hair color doesn’t even specify that this choice is FOR your hair color, there’s some grammar/dialogue I’d take another look at to try cleaning up and making it more readable, etc. I think a proofreader or maybe a partner helping you to structure things would go a long way. I do like overpowered protagonists, and Xianxia stuff is interesting to me so I played through but there are some thoughts I’d like to share. The morality in the game is pretty black and white, with you either being a very nice saint or absolute psychopath with very little middle ground. Some examples being to save two children from being kidnapped by a creepy man and some other guy or… ignore them to boost evil- no option to just help them purely to shut everyone up or use it simply as an excuse to kill then leaving the kids alone (if you wanted to be evil, just with limits like not hurting kids) Save the old lady from drowning for a large boost to good, or just… sit and watch for evil. There’s not much middle ground. I want to be a cocky asshole, but that doesn’t mean I’m not going to kill some creep that’s actively talking about lopping a little girl’s limbs off, y’know? I also sorta struggle to retain names, since characters kinda fade in and out without much development or time getting to know them. I can barely recall anyone beyond Ruohan, and I don’t even think she’s an RO. ---
**Author:** ![Gowalk](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/g/85e7bf/32.png) [@Gowalk](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/u/Gowalk)\ **Post date:** [April 23, 2025, 5:29am UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/dao-ascension-wip-10-11-2026-rewrite-960k-980k-words-1022k-1048k-words-patreon-07-11-2026-high-fantasy-overpowered-protagonist-chinese-fantasy-cultivation-world-xianxia-jianghu/168293/34 "2025-04-23T05:29:26Z")
agreed it’s way too black and white would love more neutral options. i love to be a cocky asshole that’s just on the edge of both. I do love the options to hide your true strength tho love just fighting on their level. ---
**Author:** ![Ominking1](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/choiceofgames/user_avatar/forum.choiceofgames.com/ominking1/32/235136_2.png) [@Ominking1](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/u/Ominking1)\ **Post date:** [April 23, 2025, 7:08am UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/dao-ascension-wip-10-11-2026-rewrite-960k-980k-words-1022k-1048k-words-patreon-07-11-2026-high-fantasy-overpowered-protagonist-chinese-fantasy-cultivation-world-xianxia-jianghu/168293/35 "2025-04-23T07:08:28Z")
Dose any know any more cultivation game that are like this ---
**Author:** ![Ronin\_101](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/choiceofgames/user_avatar/forum.choiceofgames.com/ronin_101/32/160884_2.png) [@Ronin\_101](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/u/Ronin_101)\ **Post date:** [April 23, 2025, 8:24am UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/dao-ascension-wip-10-11-2026-rewrite-960k-980k-words-1022k-1048k-words-patreon-07-11-2026-high-fantasy-overpowered-protagonist-chinese-fantasy-cultivation-world-xianxia-jianghu/168293/36 "2025-04-23T08:24:15Z")
Can we have a pole that decide if Ruohan is Ro or not ---
**Author:** ![versanius](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/choiceofgames/user_avatar/forum.choiceofgames.com/versanius/32/155010_2.png) [@versanius](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/u/versanius)\ **Post date:** [April 23, 2025, 9:28am UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/dao-ascension-wip-10-11-2026-rewrite-960k-980k-words-1022k-1048k-words-patreon-07-11-2026-high-fantasy-overpowered-protagonist-chinese-fantasy-cultivation-world-xianxia-jianghu/168293/37 "2025-04-23T09:28:41Z")
There is quite some typos but overall its a fun light hearted IF ---
**Author:** ![DaoImmerser](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/choiceofgames/user_avatar/forum.choiceofgames.com/daoimmerser/32/250755_2.png) [@DaoImmerser](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/u/DaoImmerser)\ **Post date:** [April 23, 2025, 11:25am UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/dao-ascension-wip-10-11-2026-rewrite-960k-980k-words-1022k-1048k-words-patreon-07-11-2026-high-fantasy-overpowered-protagonist-chinese-fantasy-cultivation-world-xianxia-jianghu/168293/38 "2025-04-23T11:25:19Z")
I’ve still not decided yet. ---
**Author:** ![DaoImmerser](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/choiceofgames/user_avatar/forum.choiceofgames.com/daoimmerser/32/250755_2.png) [@DaoImmerser](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/u/DaoImmerser)\ **Post date:** [April 23, 2025, 11:28am UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/dao-ascension-wip-10-11-2026-rewrite-960k-980k-words-1022k-1048k-words-patreon-07-11-2026-high-fantasy-overpowered-protagonist-chinese-fantasy-cultivation-world-xianxia-jianghu/168293/39 "2025-04-23T11:28:23Z")
I don’t wanna spoil you but this is gonna be important for the story in the future. ---
**Author:** ![DaoImmerser](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/choiceofgames/user_avatar/forum.choiceofgames.com/daoimmerser/32/250755_2.png) [@DaoImmerser](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/u/DaoImmerser)\ **Post date:** [April 23, 2025, 11:29am UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/dao-ascension-wip-10-11-2026-rewrite-960k-980k-words-1022k-1048k-words-patreon-07-11-2026-high-fantasy-overpowered-protagonist-chinese-fantasy-cultivation-world-xianxia-jianghu/168293/40 "2025-04-23T11:29:03Z")
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