Cyberpolice (Minor Update: 9th of November 2024) (WIP)

No update today.

Deadline for current update: Varies. During this month, in small parts.

Whew, it’s a lot of work to go over the text properly and test it. There’s over 30,000 new words after all(used to be 10k, so new total is over 40k).

The added stuff to the gala segment works well enough, but I’ll still need to tinker with the stuff at the apartment(a few changes to the context depending on what you say at the balcony, and some more work on the sex scenes themselves).

At present the “fade to black” is a bit too dry for my taste, and the implicit version is entirely passive, and I’d like to add some more dialogue there if I can.

Plus, I’ll need to “rebalance” the explicit things a bit more, even after the changes I made earlier there’s still some bias in some of them, word count wise.

There’s 5 different sub-versions(essentially “who’s in charge” of what’s going on, ranging from a balanced approach, to either of you guiding the happenings either in a gentler or rougher approach) with internal variation depending on a bunch of stuff you choose, and those especially are a bit tricky, since it’s WAY easier to write certain things than others, and I’d hate for there to be a massive difference in the amount of content for the variations(essentially you choose your erogenous areas which are used as the basis for the descriptions, but I can’t come up with good enough stuff for some of them, and I’d rather not divide them into primary or secondary choices, but in practice some are vastly more represented than others so it’s pretty awkward, especially if the player chooses nothing as erogenous). <— Longest rambling sentence I’ve posted here so far? :stuck_out_tongue:

Why is it so elaborate? So I can know as precisely as possible what works and what doesn’t for the other 3 one night stands. I’m not entirely sure they’ll be THIS elaborate, but each should be around 20,000 words I’d assume. Hard to say for sure. But they’ll definitely be in the same format, if it proves appealing to everyone.

Anyway, hopefully tomorrow. If not, soon. The beginning of next week isn’t terribly busy for me(busy season is 22nd-27th), so it should be good for progress. Again, sorry for the delays, I just can’t get rid of my two habits of being too optimistic with what I can get done, and expanding on stuff at the very last minute as I get second thoughts just when I’m testing stuff. A deadly combination for sure. :stuck_out_tongue:

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