Why not have them just throw the food they were just eating? It wouldn’t be as effective but definitely more insulting than just a vase. Just a thought.
Ah, cause the food hadn’t been brought yet (unless I messed up continuity)
Wahhh! My kid is going to have ROs too? Aw, this is so cute!
I found myself more curious than scared about The Gloom. what is exactly the ‘Nightfall’? What’s Odium’s power? How does it feel inside The Gloom?
I feel Francis will said, “My mother will hear about this!” next edit: he’s not
audibly > visibly
with > of
people all around you/all around you, people
you could combine it with the previous sentence
You blink, a little concerned
you could remove ‘the area’, and add comma after 'city’
you could combine both sentences
Thank you again
Typo fix update is up (well, all but those where everyone is telling me different things bout what’s correct and what isn’t… english, how do you even Dx )
Glad you all enjoy it so far.
Next update should introduce you to Lesley, and provide the option to set your sexuality (maybe).
Also, out of curiosity:
Of those ROs met and described so far… who is intriguing you the most so far?
RO's I'm interested in and why
Valentine got my attention because she looks like my type, but I have pyrophobia I don’t get too comfortable with fire not even in fiction.
Besides that, Lesley really got me interested too. First, because it’s not everyday I can romance a n-b character. Then, I got a soft spot for reporters and outspoken people. I’ll have to see the secret ROs before deciding anything, I guess, but so far probably Lesley will be the winner. Also, a question about them: they’re asexual about everything or just sex? I mean, will we be able to hold their hand, and kiss them or nothing at all?
As for the kid:
I’m interested for equal in Marcus and Trudie. They both look sweet and I’m definitely into shy people because I’m also shy so I can relate better to them. I like their background too.
Izzy got a bit of my attention too because I tend to prefer pessimistic people over otimistic. If you can make the system you said you’re trying to make I think I’ll hook them up to either Marcus or Trudie, depending of who I’ll choose
I really hope you can make it, because this system looks awesome.
So, uh, what exactly does “male leaning” means?
So, one question: I loved the option we get to call our child by a nickname, but if we choose to call them by a nickname, everytime our MC calls the child they’ll say the nickname? Because I named my child Winter, nickname Snowflake, but I like both of them so I was wondering if picking a nickname means giving up the parent calling them by their real name
They are panromantic, so while they don’t feel sexually attracted to anyone, romance is definitely an option.
Male leaning here means male characters (cis, trans, presenting) will have it easier hooking up with them.
Occasionally the parent will call them by their name, it doesn’t replace it
Again about Lesley
Yes, I get it, I am asexual myself. But, like, I don’t have any problems with holding hands and have non-sexual physical contact with my boyfriend, althought some ace people don’t like kissing or holding hands at all, they don’t feel like it even if it’s not sexual contact. That’s what I’m asking
Oh, good to know then ^^
I usually separate sexual and romantic attraction (added that to the other ROs, now, sorry), so Lesley and Izzy are both asexual and panromantic.
For parent MC im so far intrested in rival Haggerty (Her/his gender is based on our choices,right?)
for MC jr. its Trudie they both seem like they went/Are going thought some difficult stuff in their life. and ,well,obviosly the mysterious romances
Others for me personaly dont hold too great of interest
Haggerty’s gender will be random per playthrough. At least thats the plan atm
I really want to like Ian…but the text…hurts my eyes
and I haven’t see Lesley and Haggerty, so…
For the kid, Marcus! his puns are but I’m still waiting for other ROs that haven’t show up!
A question, the secret ROs, they’re secret in what way? Are they romanceable after you finished the game once (like most otome ) or?
the secret ros are only available if you manage to unlock their plots
so would it be stat-dependent? or you have to choose specific choices?
the plan, as of now is both. Thats why i wont name the secret ROs yet, as that might give away how to get to them
Quite interesting, this one.
Query, though – could you put in another line feed for the paragraphs, to help make it easier to read?
Quite enjoy the writing otherwise, do keep it up, please.
Probably will be doing a complete formatting overhaul for the next update, including a slightly longer first scene
Cooking is not normally my kind of thing and I’m likely the opposite of a “foodie” (I’m usually more interested in the bar then the restuarant. ) however your attention to the RO’s has convinced me to give this a look.
Next update will take a while, as I decided to get everything done up to the point where you can name your Café (which would probably be where the demo would end?)
- Reworking the stats page
- Polishing the text layout
- Expanding some scenes
- Putting in the groundwork for superpowers
You can expect the following with the next update:
- Meet Francis and his father (again)
- Get… well, not lost, in the Old Town of Cornucopia
- Catch a glimpse of a mysterious stranger… or two?
- Meet the new brain behind Cooking Cornucopia
- Make new friends and enemies