My gosh I am so happy to see this back up! I am still currently not finished with reading the demo but GenecoInheritor is correct, I’d love to see you chill and not overwork yourself. I am supporting your work either way! And I’ll definitely give some insight once I’ve finished the chapter
Though I must say I love the additions to the prologue recently, it really is more natural than the previous prologue and it is more handy how you handled the pronouns! Slight suggestion though, maybe add a handy He/She option whenever we pick Spouse when talking about our child’s other parent? It really isn’t needed by me, it’s just kinda as tedious as before since I do know that some non binaries go with traditional pronouns. But like I said, I’m just kinda lazy to type sometimes so it’s ok if ny suggestion isn’t a priority.
So yeah! Glad you’re back and as I always say, keep enjoying writing!