Thanks alot
coff.
All lowercase, with a period.
Pronounced like cough? That doesnât sound like a place Iâd want to eat or drink anything at
coff
Australian hip slang for coffee.
gr8 m8 no d-b8 I r8 it an 8/8 no h8 but its my f8
Alright, updated the broken part.
Rest to come later. Itâs going to be a lot again.
RANDOM-Check: kitchen 1, living 1, bed 2, bath 1
Um�??
Also
lay an arm around Her
Gods damn it with the stray !.
As for the other thing:
thats mainly for testing purpose to see if the random bits from the cafe visit carry over correctly
Is there any characterterâs gender decided by my former parterâs gender?
Nope.
All characters either have their gender set or the game will let you pick.
- Donkey Do Nuts
- Sweet Little Thin Little Sweets
- The Art of So Tasty Yums
- Cafe Que
- The Corner Café Almost at the Corner But Not Quite
- Singular Culinary Art
- Yum
- I Could Not Think of a Good Name So I Went With This Instead Which Was Probably Not the Best Idea I Ever Had To Be Honest As It Probably Wonât Make For a Very Good Sign Seeing As It Would Need To Be So Many Characters On It That It Would Be Really Difficult To Read It From Anywhere Other Than Really Close Up
Java Cafe.
Cafe, Not Coffee.
Cafeetness.
Cafeelings.
Café With à Because Latim
We Donât Sell Cups
Thanks. Those should do x3
Now back to the usual feedback xD
1.Donât be Latte
2.BREW-tiful CafĂš
3.Thanks a Latte
4.JUST BREW IT
5. TEArrific
MORE PUNS
I love these puns a latte!
Iâm sorry please show mercy
Hey, have you seen what puns are already ingame? This is harmless
Based on the floor plan you showed us and picture: The Tiny Nook
Cafetalism or Coffetalism
First off, the level of effort you put into character and background customization (about stuff that matters too, for background. I donât mind the game recognizing that my hair is brown, but thanks for giving more than that) is awesome. But you probably donât need me telling you that. Still, I had a lot of fun just clicking through to check out the possible combinations of backstories.
Also, the way you juggle the player handling two characters keeps things flowing nicely. Iâm enjoying building the dynamic between my father and his daughter.
So yeah.
Typos
Caught a typo/tense problem with the âI hate my family backstoryâ when discussing the Safety Deposit Box:
âWell, theyâre big enough a bunch of asshole, but this is too absurd to be whatâs going on.â
Also
âTell you what. If that box turns up empty and them being behind it, Iâm calling Aunt Gloria and apologize to her.â
Grammatical hiccup at âand them being behind itâ. Should be âtheyâre behind itâ/âthey end up being behind itâ etc.
When looking at the photo album in the hotel:
âIt werenât all just bad times.â
An error when trying to watch Spirited Away
Happy to hear you enjoy it.
I fixed the error and the sentence in the same scene, but Iâll be going over the other typos once the chapter is finished.