This game got me very interested so fast. You’re doing a great job
I loved the idea of a parent MC and that you can control the kid, you don’t see a parent MC in most cyoas around here. What age would the kid be?
Either 15, 16, or 17 (you choose).
Thank you
As for the age:
What Isabella said.
The age will have a couple of effects down the line, such as how people react to the kid.
Yup, ‘they’ has been used in English to refer to a single person already in the 14th century. (Such as Shakespeare and in Cursor Mundi (e.g. row 62), which uses þer, it being Middle English.)
English is fascinating, as is language history as a whole.
Stuff has happened, so I’m putting things on hiatus again.
Sorry.
Ahh…sad to hear that, hope things get better soon!
Doubt it this time.
Sorry
Good luck, we understand.
It’s alright. Take your time.
Thanks to all.
This might seriously take a bit longer than last time ._.
Though if anyone has questions/feedback, go ahead and ask. I’ll try.
Been in such a place where it all looks bleak, so please do take all the time you need. We’ll be here, eagerly yet patiently waiting for some more delicious cuisine.
I’ll make a note of this, and once possible I can rework things.
EDIT: Alright, alternate scene (code) below.
Summary
The man chuckles. “Neither did I, $!{parent_address} $!{lastname} @{(gf_parent = “true”) . It was $!{parent_address}, today, correct?”| ."}
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“Yes.”
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“Nicholas Prince.” the man introduces himself, sweeping a light bow. “I hope your day’s been going well? Did everything work out as it should with the keys?”
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“You seem interested in the cafe, Mr Prince,” you say, brow quirked. “Very interested.”
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Mr Prince laughs. “What can I say? The old thing holds a special place in my heart.”
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Oh, hold on a second… when did you… how did he…
You glance towards ${kid_firstname}, who’s looking at you rather disturbed, mouthing ‘Let’s move’.
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You nod at ${kidthem} carefully.
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“Is something the matter?” Mr Prince asks, noticing your look.
I could go and alter the bit in the technology exhibit too
Wow. That was HIGHLY entertaining. Hats off! Awesome dialogue, great choices, and very humorous. I think the genre blending is genius!
I’m being sorta back on track.
Currently writing the last two possibilities at the museum (featuring Marcus and Starlight), and fiddling with the code for the cooking contest.
So: any more q&a questions?
Faceclaims? Comments so far
No I don’t, but while looking for faceclaims I looked up “teenage redheads” and I would NOT recommend that.
So, anyway…
Oh dear.
Well… i can as well reveal who is the faceclaim for my “placeholder” MC while writing:
Fanart? Yay or nay?
i also don’t know why i want some of possible background characters to be named after edible things. (i blame Gourmet Hound for this urge.)
Fanart is always yay =D
(As for the second thing… with all the puns and innuendoes in the game… might that be too much? What d’ye people think?)
That’s true. You did mention that you have some references and shout-outs planned out. i can’t wait to see them!
(you did mention Sergi before so we’re going to see a heroes rise reference?)
yep. In fact there already are some. There’s also several CCH and Hero Unmasked ones alongside refs and shoutouts to tv shows etc.