Heh, I was hoping to keep all my reports to one edited post.
During the ride chatting with the alchemist:
“Afraid so. I was sickly as a child so my father ordered that I remain inside at all times least I bring shame to the family. It’s why my skin is as pale as the moon despite being from a working class family. My lack of ability to work was why I was sent to the Alchemy Guild.”
Should be “lest”. Grammarly suggests working class should be “working-class”.
“Oh, most defiantly.” I add while thinking that Lin Ninghong is aware of how her conflicting views will be seen by those loyal to Lord Xiang Yu.
Should be definitely.
At the very least this tells me that she’s somewhat willing to hide her beliefs for her own safety, granted that doesn’t mean she’s a threat.
Did you mean “not a threat” there?
“It’s been regulated to myth if I recall correctly… Heaven comes to you in the form of something rare, correct? What was it?” Xiang Yu asks.
Wants to be “relagated” I think.
While he effects me senses, my abilities still work. So far, he’s telling the truth.
Should be “my”.
No word has reached us yet of his progress nor have I received any messages from Master. I sent out a messenger myself, not only to update him on my progress in this rebellion,
He might not voice his findings but his face is most expressive and give away what’s on his mind
Should probably be “giving away”.
risk insulting them and needing to deal with the political fallout from offending a king, even if they’re disposed kings
Shouild be deposed.
Morale is high, despite the pompous attitudes of the disposed kings