I know exactly why he chose the Wombat! It’s becau- * Crash* wait what’s going on?! Who are you people?! *Bang, bang, bang. Gurgle, cough. * l…should’ve known he’d…send you… … *Thud. Footsteps *
HornHeadFan the job has been taken care of. You all have a nice day.
Argh! Let me in your pants, Crook!
XD can that be a dialogue option?
OH…MY…GOD! THIS NEW UPDATE IS AMAAAAZING! B.T.W. I found a error!:
Stunner nods to Dirty Girl, “Hell it wont’ hurt to try. Hey Dark Detective, you can go firstif you want. What kinda combo do you want to try?”
(firstif)
P.S. found a Hi-Jinx emoticon! 
Oh! I found two actually
(should be won’t)
can’t wait for the next update!
@HornHeadFan
Let me follow up on that You mentioned a lunatic wanting to make a name for herself." — "Let me follow up on that. You mentioned a lunatic wanting to make a name for herself.
Crook: typo shut up You flop back on your bed. So much happened in one night. Your mind races to process everything. — Crook: typo shut up. You flop back on your bed. So much happened in one night. Your mind races to process everything.
What topic do predict will cause the most trouble for Tress? — What topic do you predict will cause the most trouble for Tress?
It would have been helpful livin’ in California or something, but it was a sucky power to have Birmingham…oops!" she immediately clamps her hand over her mouth. — It would have been helpful livin’ in California or something, but it was a sucky power to have in Birmingham…oops!" she immediately clamps her hand over her mouth.
The back rows errupt into cackles as the fifth_grade teachers swoop in to restore order. — The back rows erupt into cackles as the fifth grade teachers swoop in to restore order.
The Hedonist scolds the majority if the class who keep their hands down. — The Hedonist scolds the majority of the class who kept their hands down.
Stunner and Dirty Girl have convinced Tress into joining your Breaking People & Things study session since that will allow your group to recreate the Team B squad that first squared off against Crook;s group almost three months ago. — Stunner and Dirty Girl have convinced Tress into joining your Breaking People & Things study session since that will allow your group to recreate the Team B squad that first squared off against Crook’s group almost three months ago.
When he sees Tress stting on the hay, he emits a warm glow and beams. — When he sees Tress sitting on the hay, he emits a warm glow and beams.
After we spend another two weeks freezes our asses off out here in the middle of nowhere? — After we spend another two weeks freezing our asses off out here in the middle of nowhere?
Fifteen minutes later, you emerge from Hedonist’s office. your heart racing and your skin flushed. — Fifteen minutes later, you emerge from Hedonist’s office. Your heart racing and your skin flushed.
Origami executes an elegant arching loop and settles like an oversized leaf about twenty feet away… She has a satisfied look on her face when she turns and spots you… She playfully pokes you on the arm…
Speaking of failed relationships, stupidly I tried to sit with Uni and her group after a failed dinner date. Surprisingly, I wasn’t allowed to sit with them. I believe at one moment Uni cited some “honesty issues”. Anyways, would it be possible to add a “fourth path” for those of us who found ourselves traveling along the road less traveled? Maybe have time to study for one more class? Or maybe going to investigate the church alone and getting arrested? I later went with the group [Uni’s, the neutral group] to the school, but why would I even accompany them when they basically kicked me out? I don’t know, maybe I’m missing something.
Edit: Question, there’s no [school] class that raises the stat zap, correct?
@Flux, Crook’s relationship may be the most complicated of all of them (but secretly I anticipate it might be the most compelling)
@Drini7, I would say the update shows 85% or so of the story.
@WizKid, I think that path may be available down the line. DG probably needs some steady influences in her life.
@WaterOracle, poor Shine is a punching bag it seems, but he does get an interior cover page with Rain so he gets some love!
@Razgriz, your post cracked me up and made me lol in real life as I sit here at intermission of a play. Well done, sir.
Love the new bits. The whole close quarters, in the middle of bumfuck nowhere angle is kind of fun, especially seeing how it impacted other students.
Something I’ve been wondering though, are you going to put in a save option somewhere? I’d really like to keep my file and hop straight back to where I was without forgetting some options I picked (for example, the breaking things and people class exam I passed with an A on my initial playthrough, and I forgot how to beat it this time when I skimmed through and had to restart.)
Either way, I’m really excited to see more development with Stoic and Crook. My two favorite characters by far.
@HornHeadFan which one? The one where I am brutally banged to death by one of your goons (hey! Get your mind out of the gutter!) or the insistence that the words “Argh! Let me in your pants, Crook!” Be put in the game for any players who wish to be sexually frustrated pirates? Really now, you must be more specific with your words. 
Nevermind, found out the breaking things class does raise zap sometimes.
Since the game mostly written, I’m guessing that my long hoped for Stoic romance won’t happen, huh? Also I do hope we can kick Hedonist’s ass at the end, he is beyond creepy.
I also noticed that you reworked a lot of it since the last time I played, the entire intro is redone, more backstory added, and two classes were cut. Still, at least Detective got the Thermal Goggles and Listening Device so I’m happy. In terms of most enjoyable little ‘groups’, the first defense is fun (against the football players) and the second HELL is great (mock court case)
Awwww yiss
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Just finished my playthrough of Justice Angel (who is trying to screw everyone) and laughed at how many options I had when we first arrived at the campsite.
I’ve been trying to date Crook for 52 YEARS.
He won’t let us into his pants ;(
Hmmm, did you try saying “Argh!” Before you asked him?
Couple of typos: “they seem to have masted the art of mixing business with pleasure.”
"I think we need to speak more directly and honestly, and I might involved at the press conference to make sure that happens.
“so they know you’re not some judgment-proof college kid.”
Best thing I liked about the update was seeing another side of Hedonist, Origami’s ‘court’ and more Stoic time <3
I’M HERE AND SO ARE MY FEET /dances
Well I could have…
But where’s the fun in that ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)
Error encountered when dating Tress and kissing Uni:
line 2898: Invalid expression at char 2, expected NUMBER, STRING, VAR or PARENTHETICAL, was: EQUALITY [=]
“Uni’s glossy pink lips gently press against yours for a few seconds
before she gently breaks the kiss, resting her hands on your upper arms.
She whispers to you.”
Well damnit that’s quite a tease to have an error message occur THERE. I shall investigate.