Good luck! You got this!
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Well,here’s the poll for Mob.
- I like his character.He’s a charming and interesting character.
- I thoroughly tapped his thicc booty.
- I dislike him.The guy needs to get some confidence.
- I am neutral.Need to find out more before making a decision
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I get that he was tramatized by his own strength, but you can’t expect to be a hero just by trying to save people. If a hero loses then he just added to the number of casualties. You need a balance between Warrior and Guardian if you really wanna make it. I like (no homo)guy ,but I just can’t respect him the way he is.
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For Hour 1, 540 words. Hour 2 might be slower because I have to feed/water my kiddos but I’ll report that number in an hour.
And @The_Otaku_Dragon_Sla, I definitely want to explore Mob’s philosophy more in Part 2. Can you be a hero merely by playing defense? Isn’t it better than nothing? Maybe we’ll find out!
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I disagree. All of the homo. 
Also, if a hero messes up and kills hundreds of people because he doesn’t know his own strength, that’s also bad, right?
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That is going to make for an amazing read!!! 
Can’t wait to see how Mob evolves as a hero and person
THANK YOU!!! The longer he lets his power go untamed the higher the chance he has of punching a hole in someone’s chest crushing someone when he tries to catch them.Super Strength is what you make of it, and if he sees it as a curse it will become one.
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I am all for more Mod! I can’t wait to see him evolve more as a hero, grow into his powers. Really, I can’t wait to see that for all the heroes but I have a soft spot for Mod. 
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Hour 2 was a wash. Those rascally kids!
Hour 3 back on track (somewhat) - 333 words.
Hour 4 - let’s get serious!
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that’s what downfall said, so be careful with broken arms for the next hour 
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Poll for Nil:
- I like him.He’s a mystery who might help me get the dirt on the Smarts.
- I dislike him.He is just 2spooky4me.
- Undecided.Need more information.
- There’s gotta be a way to bang him…
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Hour 4 - 351 words. At this point, I’m rewriting existing stuff more than I am writing new stuff. I swear, I’ve rewritten one scene three times. I think I like where it’s going now though.
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Hour 5 - 297 words. Again, it was mostly reworking stuff. I moved the of the party scene in another file so I can focus on cleaning up what I have and getting an update out. Working on that now.
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Okay new update is UP!
https://dashingdon.com/play/ericmoser/community-college-hero-2-knowledge-is-power/mygame/
Please point out typos, spacing issues, and especially continuity errors! For example, many scenes will appear differently depending on whether your MC or Tress is team leader. I want to make sure those scenes are coded correctly.
I have some party scenes typed up but not in notepad yet. Still, the update is pretty big. The next update, probably in late January, should get us through Issue 6.
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Thanks man, can’t wait to read this
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I note that Mom still starts at 0 relationship…
(And I’m still not convinced by the Wyvern fight: he gets to attack three times before I can do anything but taunt… I think a *fake_choice could work quite nicely here just to break up the constant hurt we’re taking.)
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Yes I will make Mom nicer to start (if only this had real life applications).
And let me read the Wyvern fight again. You may be right about breaking up the onslaught just a bit.
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And also, losing Yay for “running” seems odd, given that the sole witness was a homeless man, and I basically shouted “Come and catch me!” as I was running off…
(I know this isn’t the bit you want me to test, but it just feels weird to me.)
Also, I noticed another “pour over” that should have been “pore over”. (The latter is studying, the former involves water.)
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"He clinches his first. -You’ll be permanently silent when I’m done with you.- "
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This isn’t exactly amazing feedback, but I loved the reference to the Community. The scene where Quickie complains how everything is about their special study group. I nearly died of laughter. Thanks for that.
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