Just sell his body parts on the black market. That both disposes of the body and gives you money!
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Pigs.
Feed them to pigs.
Seriously.
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Hm, nice idea. Also could help the illegal part of Zenith power research…but it has a pretty high risk, don’t you think so?
Maybe I will just bury his corpse at the grounding of some new building.
Dirty Girl got my back.
Also:update planned for today.My body is ready.
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Waiting squad lol xD we are too early lads.
You think we’ll get to modify Zenith powers to?
You know like focusing your super strength on your legs to move faster or make force field constructs like Armor?
Wow I’m super late to the whole Hedonist thing but I figured I’d just throw my opinion out here. Personally I think his character is one of the most interesting ones in Part 1 for a lot of reasons. The biggest one would have to be, for me at least, that there are hints thrown in throughout the entire thing that there’s a lot more to him than just his highly questionable grading tactics and his status as high profile eye candy. When Combat Wombat challenges him there’s a line the Hedonist says about being indestructible after he’d won. And then there’s the whole Nil thing.
Also if we take what Captain California mentions in the epilogue to heart, about having to adopt a persona for Savior School, is it that far of a stretch to make the connection that a lot of the Hedonist’s overly exaggerated characteristics could be part of that?
Honestly I may be reading too much into things because I just thoroughly enjoy his character and the air of mystery around his motives and all that.
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Nah man you’re good. You could easily be right about him being a cool guy deep down. After all he did save us from The Manipulator
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Okay, a small update is live! It’s over 7500 new words, but it’s rather broad and not very long. It marks the start of Issue 6 (although I forgot to label that as such).
I’ll schedule the next update for late September that will get us farther into Issue 6 (hopefully 50% into Issue 6). I also need to add some romantic scenes that are still under construction in Issue 5.
I keep feeling like the story is getting bigger and bigger! (I’m not sure this is a good thing). I’m over 62,000 words so far and things are really just getting started storywise. We haven’t even seen Jacob yet! And when will the MC get some time to pursue the MC’s special path? (Hint: It should be included in the next update) And then there’s the lawsuit against the MC, the leadership issues with the MC and/or Tress, the Wyvern kicking everyone’s ass, the MC’s mom (you know she’ll factor into the plot somehow), sidekicking with Stoic, and I haven’t even mentioned the “Big Bad” who’s supposed to return and basically kill everyone in four months. Good times!
As this is a small update, no detailed feedback is necessary, other than the normal bug-spotting.
https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/267555110/web/mygame/index.html
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"Shine nods his head, managing a week smile. " week->weak
when tolly is giving news about rains condition in hospital.
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Great so far!
Some sort of type here: The Hedonist brushes against your , whispering in your ear. "It pays to be my pet."
Pretty sure there isn’t an apostrophe for thumbs up: His golden hair flops over his forehead as he gives everyone a thumb's up with his free hand.
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When researching the Dr. Stench gear, it should say “An old newspaper clipping” rather than “And old newspaper clipping”
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Will four months be enough for our heroes to reach the level of skill needed to survive against the manipulator?
Will the MC’s route be go enough to help him save his remaining cohorts?
Find out next time on “Community College Hero”
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Mob’s name is still wrong when asked if you are going to keep dating this year.
When volunteering in the hedonist’s class as an acrobat you still get the soldier’s gear line.
(there is still no carry over of funds from book 1)
@Nancie, Okay I just fixed the whole Luca should be Rey thing. That will be updated correctly next time.
The carryover of funds is tricky. I’ll have to add a question in the questionnaire about how much money you spent. Then I can set money to the correct amount instead of it starting over at zero. EDIT: Heck, I’ll work on this right now before I go to sleep!
And the Acrobat/Soldier language is correct. Those archetypes have the same defensive gear for each upgrade so I didn’t differentiate there.
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It’s all fine and we’ll.
Also,you still can’t pick the subcommittees.I am sed .
I plan to have the whole 7-member study group meet in the library in the next update as a homage to NBC’s “Community.” I’m using it as an ongoing device to let me wrap up, create, and summarize the various plot threads as the story moves along. There may or may not be subcommittees this spring.
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Put it on spoiler!!!
Hey, I’ve just played it a couple of times and I really liked it.
I love the fact that we can give a pep talk to our team at the end, and i think it’s awesome you took the time to write different variants of it that, if i’m not wrong, depend of the persona of the main character.
However, if that’s the case, It seems that I’m not able to get a brooder variation of it,is there even one? It seems that I’m stuck with the traditionalist one.
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You need at least 61 of a Brooding to do the Brooding speech.
@Eric_Moser
Mob grabs your grapple line and accelerates the rescue with a series of mighty heaves. With one last tug, he returns Bbth Tress and Dr. Hover to earth, gently easing the still unconscious Dr. Hover to a prone position on the frozen lawn.
Who is Bbth? 