First off, I need to get this off my chest:
“I’m surprised you chose Binny over me. She’s just a secretary.” …Is she she stupid? I thought the whole office knew about our relationship by now. I mean, Binny’s my wife, what the hell did anyone expect?
Obvious typo there.
Missing the end quotations.
There. Now I can say what I wanted.
With the bugs fixed, I was finally able to launch the Reckoning. I completely forgot it was going to switch perspectives at the end. Damn,that section there is so well written. All of it. Not only does it inspire an incredible sense of accomplishment (as I, well, pretty much saved humanity), but it also effectively sets up another adventure, and shows the player that this is not the true end. The reason this is a big deal is because, well, frankly, it didn’t feel cheap whatsoever, as most sequel set-ups do in games. I still felt rewarded, and merely looked forward to the next game, instead of wishing it didn’t end. Props to you guys for that.
Welp, that’s it. I accidentally skipped by a few other typos that I will seek and destroy later. For now, I’m going to reflect on my choices. Like that time I made a fucking robot police force.