Citadel WiP (Updated: 3/11/2022) - A Medical Drama with Romance

Is there a way to not arrive late to the procedure? I felt like my MC would have kept aware of the time but there is no warning to the player before MC is already late

It was annoying as the player that we are expected to remember random small details like exactly how long ago the patient was diagnosed when MC is the doctor and trained to remember those details unlike me

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I didn’t note any typos, I just wanted to say that I love the fact that you test the reader’s ability to recall information about the patient. In a real life situation this is how it’s supposed to be, and I appreciate how close to the real thing you’ve written this. It shows your knowledge within the medical field, which I find fascinating.

I’m scared and excited to see what my intern encounters next!

Thank you for the wonderful read ~

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I got this area after clicking the link but it seems to be working again.

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Why would doctor in “real life situation” suddenly not know that those details will need to be recited later? It could help to add some hint to the player while reading about Ms Lin like those detail will be needed later to prevent Dr. MC suddenly out of nowhere forgetting how to do job

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I loved the vic dlc

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Literally me af :joy:

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Finally played this again AND did the DLC and mmmmm goodness

Victor pls-

What is it with me and almost always going for characters like Victor? I love him. But I also love Jean, too… even Sloan, although I’m also kind of like “:eyes: big sister vibes” or “you’re not MC’s mother but I want to make MC annoy you as if you were her mother”. I still love this WIP. It’s great, it’s wonderful. I really expected Grey to have Victor’s personality (I didn’t read the profiles beforehand) so it was pleasantly surprising to see he wasn’t. I mean, I’d understand, because my god, this career is so damn stressful and I expect at least one of MC’s coworkers to be a little jaded. Him being as friendly and pleasant as he is was just… really nice. He may not be someone my MC will be romantically pursuing, but he’s still so endearing that I can’t help but side-eye him curiously.

Somewhat of unrelated question that I suspect the answer to but I’m genuinely curious:
of course, don’t answer if it’s spoilers, but will MC or anyone they work with experience a life threatening situation of any kind? I doubt this is a thing, and if it were to be, it’d be side/DLC content.

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Aww, thanks for the lovely comment (and thank you to everyone else, too!) :smiling_face_with_three_hearts:

I think if you looked in the dictionary, Dr. Grey’s face would be next to the word “pleasant” lol

To answer your question, yes–the MC will have the opportunity to work with patients in life-threatening situations. I was being nice with Ms. Lin, but the kid-gloves are off now…

Cheers!

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The story and “After Work” (The Vic DLC) is sooo damn good. Thanks for writing this masterpiece! Have a nice day!

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I don’t usually comment that much but damn did I love it!!! I was literally hoping chapter 6 would never end :pensive: plus everyone is so pretty my bisexual self cannot choose!!! here’s to replaying it again and again.

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The Vic DLC was honestly a pleasure to write lol (who doesn’t want your hot chief resident draping their jacket across your shoulders :rofl:)

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Awww, thank you!

It’s a running joke in the Citadel Discord that Citadel only hires very attractive people :rofl:

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Well…I like Jean and Elliot more. :wink:

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Will you be doing romance DLC’s for the other Romance Options too? Also, loving the story :+1:t2:

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Revamped Chapter 6 is here! Now you can actually eat alone in the cafeteria + Vic will now evaluate your performance at the end of the surgery + more.

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The Vic DLC was released as part of an April Fool’s joke, but the other ROs will have plenty of romantic moments in the main game so I’m leaning towards no. Doesn’t mean there won’t be other DLCs featuring other characters, though :wink:

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Ahh. I only noticed dlc today. But i thought it was good.

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This is a great game, damn. Love the characters, love the plot, love the style! Can’t wait for more ;3

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It would be better if player is warned beforehand they have to test their memory for patient information or procedures, or MC with extra preparation (like reading the case) should get extra hint. While it adds stakes to the choices, it breaks my immersion as I can’t answer what my MC is supposed to know, resulting in frantic save load unavailable in future

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SURPRISE DROP!

Enjoy Chapter 7!

Link here: https://dashingdon.com/go/7731

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