Choice of Rebels: Stormwright (XoR2 WIP)

Long overdue, I finally got around to migrating the XoR tropes that used to live on the CoG page to their own work page. Needs some love, but it exists now.

EDIT: to be clear, I did not write these tropes, I’ve only made some edits for lore and spelling in the transition. Anyone who objects or has more to add is welcome to edit the page.

@Havenstone would you happen to have a full size copy of the Uprising cover handy? Not the zoomed in plektos, but the full sized one in the forest with the cowering helot.

I didn’t notice the typo until after making the s page, its pending deletion.

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Why is there a “VideoGame” page and a “VideoGames” page with the same text

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Slightly related, in that Tamran’s part of the conversation. One thing I definitely didn’t expect (but should’ve expected in hindsight) from Irduin was for its title “Dance of Shadows” to at least partially allude to Plato’s allegory of the cave.

Ulmey has taken enough wine to start showing off his erudition. “Did you know the ancient Karagonds taught that we should consider ourselves as fire-thrown shadows? Not just us humans, but, but all this material world.”

“Shadows?” The Telone frowns as if already sensing some heresy in the making. Across the room, Tamran’s ears have pricked up; she walks over, eyes bright, and seats herself with you all.

Ulmey gestures away from the fireplace, toward the dancing shapes you’re casting on the far wall of the Chesnery. “The True Light of Order emanates from Xthonos into the glorious realm of Ideals…and we see the outline cast by that Light through those truths, all the way down to our muddy little level of reality.” He hiccups. “As represented here by…the wall.”

“The world is a fermenting dung-heap, into which the Angels seed some semblance of order,” Baldassare counters with sepulchral relish. When Ulmey wrinkles his nose, the Telone adds, somewhat defensively, “It was spoken by an approved philosopher of the Erezziano court. And useful things may grow from a byre if well-tended.”

“So the Angels spend their time looking downward, talking to us shadows in the dung-heap.” Tamran leans forward, chin on her hands, to watch the wall with a faint smile on her face. “Is it a flaw in Them that They care, do you think?”

“The philosophers of old Karagon wrote before the Codex, so they’re no help when it comes to matters Angelic.” The priest drains his glass, still looking with distaste at Baldassare. “The Polyomphalos who taught me didn’t use metaphors half as coarse as a dung-pile. But he would still have argued that the Angels don’t care for us, as such. Their compassion is purer than ours, closer to Unmoved Xthonos. They teach us lowly shadows that we owe each other care and compassion…but They don’t feel it, not as we do. Their ‘care’ is reserved for more perfect things. For the beauty of Order, not for us.”

Tamran gives a slow nod. “Do you credit that?”

“I don’t know, lass.” Ulmey smiles a little sadly. “I know your dama wouldn’t. But for all that I love him, sometimes…sometimes I only half-believe in his tinkering, all-attentive Angels, with a word ready for every farmer with a lost lamb.”

“And what do you think, good${woman} ${alias}?” Tamran turns to look at you. "When an Angel hovers close and observes us squabbling here…do They care for the folk They watch? Or do They only care for the Order They mean to create—or the flawed order They mean to destroy? No matter how many of us innocent shadows may be unmade along the way?"

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Oh yeah thank you for grabbing this, my syncretic rambling earlier was partly hunger fuel but yeah like, the potential here is obvious to me. There are a lot of easy parallels between the Seracca faith and Hegemonic faith, it just needs the right rebel to make them kiss.

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If the Angels (or equivalent) are real and intercede indirectly, you’d expect similarities in the religions because they’re all directed at the same underlying truth, which people do have limited experiential access to.

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If the angels are real, maybe the theoi are also real but unrelated entities. And if they were real, there’s a good chance they would be labeled Xaos-demons by the Ecclesiasts. Same with the forgotten gods

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Oh, its own TV Tropes page? Nice.

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Thrilled to have our own TVTropes page-- thanks so much! I’m in the middle of moving deeper into remote west Nepal (my wife’s research permissions finally came through) but when the dust settles I’ll try to find the full cover image.

I should note that ADAT the pun rebellion led to Ch 3 being replaced with a vowel-free zombie stub. Irduin would be particularly incomprehensible in that world: Lss, Gs, Ch, and Lc d Rd, with their priest Lm.

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Not a problem! It wasn’t all that much work, I figured I’d port it over.

In other news, I’ve made the first entry for XoR on a different site, Archive of Our Own. A while back I talked about wanting Aletheia de Arquin’s POV during a certain scene, and then I remembered I’m a writer who can just make stuff, so…

https://archiveofourown.org/works/64658530

Hopefully this isn’t a brutal character assassination of the lady, I had to do a bit of extrapolation from the one scene she’s in. Hope you enjoy!

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Love. It.

:slight_smile:

Couldn’t have written it better myself.

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I should frame this tbqh (I did, I pinned it in the discord lol). I’m glad you enjoyed it, I figured that particular theorizing would honestly come to the fore with any “goetic” rebellion. Certainly after such a dramatic, clearly skillful revelation. Honestly hearing some rumors and conspiracy theories about the rebellion in Irduin would be fun (ala Lady Pelematou thinking the aristo MC is mind controlling helots, which sadly never gets a helot MC equivalent), perhaps as a bit of flavor around the rebellion management.

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Wow, very impressive, well done!

It was lovely reading it, just like all your other work! :hugs:

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Hi, question on an old post I missed back in the day, uh… doesn’t this mean every full Harrower is a bomb on wheels? As we grow into effective terrorists I’m imagining channeling the aether in a Harower tank to do some very serious and dramatic damage to theurges and spectators. How frequently do the nobility of Grand Shayard observe local harrowings? For that matter, do full harrowers ever make their way through the noble quarters of the city, even if just for transit?

How are these vials spent? Is it possible to wean the aether piecemeal out of a super-vial without destroying it, or are you still doing one change with one vial and expected to make it count?

The Thaumatarch’s Nine:

Ennearch Ocharsis, responsible for the Lykeion.

Ennearch Thaïs, responsible for the Mystikon.

Ennearch Anakilos, responsible for the Hegemony’s armies.

Ennearch Lacevra, responsible for the Hegemony’s fleets.

Ennearch Thneton, responsible for the Xthonic Ecclesiarchy.

Ennearch Hesychios, responsible for Theurgic research and development.

Ennearch Hypatia, responsible for an unknown portfolio.

Two as yet unnamed Ennearchs, with unknown portfolios.

This is the list I just put together for the Discord, digging up every named Ennearch I could find (not counting Sarcifer). @Havenstone would you be willing to confirm if this is still accurate and (fingers crossed) would you be willing to tell us who the missing two are (plus Hypatia’s portfolio)?

Also, do the Halassurqs have plektasts?

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The fact that each Ennearch has a specific job, that Kleitos does not take a noticable role in administration, and that it is hard for the Diadoch to get funding for their farming projects, makes me think that the Ennearchs act very independently and barely communicate with each other.

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Speaking of the title Theurge-Bane, I went back to check something, and:

Yebben’s voice takes on a faraway tone. “Have you heard tales of Salareo of Aveche, ${addressu}? From the last great Halassurq War before our current one. Salareo Mage-Bane, who once killed more than a dozen magi of Halassur in a single great battle.”

Something tells me Theurge casualties are about to skyrocket over what they’re accustomed to on the border. If a dozen is enough to render one a historic Mage-Bane, a number we can near match in our first battle… well, I dread what they’ll come to call us. (Also Theurge-Bane should be an epithet for the MC :pleading_face:).

Also, seeing that Salareo was a Mage-Bane, because of his work against Halassurq magi, it makes me wonder: are they not considered Goetes? Is it acknowledged by the Hegmony that Halassurq derive their power from a source other than Xaos, or do they still see them as demonic in nature?

Also also, very niche variable I was reminded of @Havenstone, it’s possible that there are a sizeable number of Breckslanders aligned with our rebellion (keyed off the uthwen variable), potentially inundated with our heresies. This group should probably get a mention when we cross over the ward, even if just in retrospect as we enter the Southriding proper.

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What is the lykeion and mystikon?

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The Lykeion is the Thaumatarch’s school for learning Theurgy. The Mystikon is the headquarters of the Kryptasts. Both are in Aekos.

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Idk why but i have this hunch feeling that the Mystikon headquarter of Kryptasts will mysteriusly combust with all its agent papers being burned beyond recovery once we get to the end.

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I would like to warn that each Hegemonic social class has significant tensions with the rest, so uniting multiple classes will get exponentially more diffcult (I think that 3 social classes is the oractical limit). For one example, if the MC ends price caps, yeomen and the free urban poor will be upset, but if they don’t, then the merchants will be furious. Thus, any MC that befirends both the merchants and the yeomen/free urban poor will need to abolish price caps and find some major way to please the yeomen/free urban poor, because the price caps are a cornerstone of the merchants’ hatred of the Hegemony.
For another example, any MC that promises 4 acres of land to each yeoman will completely antagonize both the nobility whose land they take and really anger the helotry that live on it. It will be possible (though very unlikely) to keep the helots friendly without giving them land, but it will entail costly, uncertain actions that many MCs would prefer not to make

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What advantage(s) will a player with a transferable save have over a player with a freshly created G2 character?

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