Hello! I started working on this story a few months ago, etching out the major plot lines/branches and details. It's been more of a passion project than anything else. Here's the basic stuff:
You are a Demigod, the child of a member of the Trinity (Zeus, Poseidon, and Hades) and a mortal woman named Priscilla Angelis. You are also the reincarnation of the Essence, the most absolute and violent source of power in the Universe (or, in short: you are the Big Bang itself).
Just a few months shy of your 18th birthday, you are taken to the legendary Mount Olympus to partake in the Hero Trials. The Hero Trials consist of several mental and physical obstacles that you must successfully complete in order to win, and the final test will be a battle against a formidable ally. If you succeed, you will be named a Hero of Olympus, like those before you (Hercules, Odysseus, Perseus, Achilles, etc) and be granted immortality by the Gods. If you succeed, you will also be the head of the Greek army in the effort to stop the bloodthirsty Titan, Cronus from taking back domain over the Universe.
Along the way, you must learn to master your selected skill, gain intel on Cronus's plot, form alliances, and uncover the mystery behind your past lives.
The game is very character driven but also centered around your skills and relationships. I plan to give the MC a wide array of customization regarding appearance, personality and intelligence. Personality, especially, will impact your reactions to several situations.
-Update introduction chapter
-Additional gender options
-Different kinds of magic: dark, light, spiritual, etc.
-Set up Hero Trial system based on "energy" points.
-Story-mode status screen
What I need:
What I'm looking for are grammar/spelling corrections, coding errors or just general discourse about your feelings towards the game.
I will also answer any questions (continuation wise or content-wise) that you have about the plot, the characters, the game itself. I know there's a whole lot of information given in the first few scenes, so if you need further clarification, don't hesitate to ask.
Link as of (10/24): https://dashingdon.com/play/rohie/children-of-the-gods/mygame/