# Caught in a Reverie (Halloween Edition is finally up) **URL:** \ **Category:** Works In Progress\ **Tags:** gender-choice, modern-fantasy\ **Created:** [September 9, 2016, 8:51am UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/caught-in-a-reverie-halloween-edition-is-finally-up/20348 "2016-09-09T08:51:38Z")\ **Posts on this page:** 20\ **Page:** 41
**Author:** ![Vattena](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/choiceofgames/user_avatar/forum.choiceofgames.com/vattena/32/126702_2.png) [@Vattena](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/u/Vattena)\ **Post date:** [November 22, 2016, 10:29am UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/caught-in-a-reverie-halloween-edition-is-finally-up/20348/807 "2016-11-22T10:29:35Z")
YAAAAAAAY!!!😀 ---
**Author:** ![Curious\_Boy](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/choiceofgames/user_avatar/forum.choiceofgames.com/curious_boy/32/109853_2.png) [@Curious\_Boy](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/u/Curious_Boy)\ **Post date:** [November 28, 2016, 7:49pm UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/caught-in-a-reverie-halloween-edition-is-finally-up/20348/808 "2016-11-28T19:49:52Z")
trying to play straight Male MC **His** had a slender figure that was definitely **pleasing to my eyes**. His dark black hair was well-kept and tidy,nose perfectly symmetrical, lips slightly full. He could definitely give Touya a run for his money. What kept me looking the most was his eyes. His piercing golden eyes. (_ **He** _) so, why did MC find Kioshi pleasing to his eyes ? 😜 ---
**Author:** ![Tristin\_McComas](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/choiceofgames/user_avatar/forum.choiceofgames.com/tristin_mccomas/32/178400_2.png) [@Tristin\_McComas](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/u/Tristin_McComas)\ **Post date:** [November 29, 2016, 3:04am UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/caught-in-a-reverie-halloween-edition-is-finally-up/20348/809 "2016-11-29T03:04:06Z")
Im not going to lie it needs a spell check and im not big on the names in it or the anime feel it has but I enjoyed it. The wroting style is pretty darn good and even though i dont like the anime feel it was still pretty darn good. The story is very interesting and if i can read all of it by some miracle i would love to finish the series and see a branch off from it. Very interesting in a good way to say at least ---
**Author:** ![Figurine-Skater](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/choiceofgames/user_avatar/forum.choiceofgames.com/figurine-skater/32/20341_2.png) [@Figurine-Skater](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/u/Figurine-Skater)\ **Post date:** [November 29, 2016, 12:01pm UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/caught-in-a-reverie-halloween-edition-is-finally-up/20348/810 "2016-11-29T12:01:56Z")
Your character is straight, not blind. Just kidding, I swear ^^ ---
**Author:** ![AwkwardNature](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/choiceofgames/user_avatar/forum.choiceofgames.com/awkwardnature/32/230158_2.png) [@AwkwardNature](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/u/AwkwardNature)\ **Post date:** [November 30, 2016, 1:54am UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/caught-in-a-reverie-halloween-edition-is-finally-up/20348/811 "2016-11-30T01:54:10Z")
😂 you never fail me lmbo ---
**Author:** ![Ros\_e](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/choiceofgames/user_avatar/forum.choiceofgames.com/ros_e/32/18310_2.png) [@Ros\_e](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/u/Ros_e)\ **Post date:** [December 5, 2016, 3:47pm UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/caught-in-a-reverie-halloween-edition-is-finally-up/20348/812 "2016-12-05T15:47:46Z")
Ooooops~ x’D coding errors~ Thank you~~~ ---
**Author:** ![Ros\_e](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/choiceofgames/user_avatar/forum.choiceofgames.com/ros_e/32/18310_2.png) [@Ros\_e](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/u/Ros_e)\ **Post date:** [December 6, 2016, 1:11pm UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/caught-in-a-reverie-halloween-edition-is-finally-up/20348/813 "2016-12-06T13:11:55Z")
Halloween Edition is finally up~ x’D It;s more like a Christmas thing now than Halloween hahahaha So sorry for the long wait and delay~ C: but I do hope you all would enjoy this little piece ~ The short special edition has around 15k words in total. The link can be found on the first post. c: PS. Rainer route has some bugs that are being smoothed up now, so play at your own risk~ And to all my beta testers c: The beta build is also upcoming up soon but most probably after Christmas TwT ---
**Author:** ![Curious\_Boy](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/choiceofgames/user_avatar/forum.choiceofgames.com/curious_boy/32/109853_2.png) [@Curious\_Boy](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/u/Curious_Boy)\ **Post date:** [December 6, 2016, 1:17pm UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/caught-in-a-reverie-halloween-edition-is-finally-up/20348/814 "2016-12-06T13:17:32Z")
> [@Ros\_e](#): > > Halloween Edition is finally up~ x’D DION!!! 😍 im coming to you now~ > [@Ros\_e](#): > > And to all my beta testers c: The beta build is also upcoming up soon but most probably after Christmas TwT just take your time 😁 we (at least me) will be here waiting patiently~ alright, time to check it out~ 😂 ---
**Author:** ![Curious\_Boy](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/choiceofgames/user_avatar/forum.choiceofgames.com/curious_boy/32/109853_2.png) [@Curious\_Boy](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/u/Curious_Boy)\ **Post date:** [December 6, 2016, 2:07pm UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/caught-in-a-reverie-halloween-edition-is-finally-up/20348/815 "2016-12-06T14:07:51Z")
> [@](#): > > I shouldn’t have let rock-paper-scissors decide who could be the top. Now I was stuck as the bottom. hillarious!! 😆 > [@](#): > > “There’s my other half!” Dion laughed when he saw me aww~ 😊 where do i sign for it to be official XD > [@](#): > > “You know I would never leave you hanging, buddy.” He winked. “Plus, we looked good together.” He chuckled. wow… of course we are~ 😍 > [@](#): > > Many were gathered in the front, awaiting their turn to get up **the** (ehm… did you miss something there or that “ **the** ” isn’t supposed to be there ?) > [@](#): > > Of course, I was going to have Dion’s back on this. I’m his best friend correct it, im his other half~ 😋 😁 [quote] “Scared?” I teased Dion. “With you here, nope.” Now I wasn’t sure whether I was the one being teased instead.“But, if you’re scared, I’m always here for you.” [/quote] im melting right now~ 😊 😍 didn’t know Dion could be so damn romantic!! 😘 there is an error after the bathroom scene no matter what i choose (choice) Run towards where we came from > [@](#): > > startup line 2250: bad label end (choice) Try to look for another way out > [@](#): > > startup line 2225: bad label end and just want to say i cant stop grinning when reading this halloween edition… my MC already far too deep in love with Dion coz this short date story 😂 ---
**Author:** ![Ros\_e](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/choiceofgames/user_avatar/forum.choiceofgames.com/ros_e/32/18310_2.png) [@Ros\_e](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/u/Ros_e)\ **Post date:** [December 6, 2016, 2:13pm UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/caught-in-a-reverie-halloween-edition-is-finally-up/20348/816 "2016-12-06T14:13:20Z")
You read really fast xDDD Now you can go and try all the outfits for different reactions. Aren’t you surprise there’s not much typo in this one? Ohohoho I felt like I just earned an achievement x’D And I fixed the error \>ww\< ---
**Author:** ![Curious\_Boy](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/choiceofgames/user_avatar/forum.choiceofgames.com/curious_boy/32/109853_2.png) [@Curious\_Boy](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/u/Curious_Boy)\ **Post date:** [December 6, 2016, 2:18pm UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/caught-in-a-reverie-halloween-edition-is-finally-up/20348/817 "2016-12-06T14:18:24Z")
> [@Ros\_e](#): > > Now you can go and try all the outfits for different reactions. will do that~ > [@Ros\_e](#): > > Aren’t you surprise there’s not much typo in this one? Ohohoho I felt like I just earned an achievement x’D And I fixed the error \>ww\< well, i noticed… i cant find any typo in my 2 playtrough, now i’ll lose my typo-hunting job 😜 lol jk. and this is worth the wait~ thank you, for the chance to ~~date~~ spending time with Dion 😋 will playing it again for several times~ cant stop grinning 😂 **EDIT** : I just shrugged sheepishly. I knew Dion was going to be a werewolf, and I just happen to “accidentally” picked the same costume. **Don’t we look cute together?** now im sure you are ~~teasing~~ spoiling me!! 😊 damn, this is too cute, cant move on and trying another RO route for a while 😂 im dying of happiness!! XDDD~ ---
**Author:** ![Ros\_e](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/choiceofgames/user_avatar/forum.choiceofgames.com/ros_e/32/18310_2.png) [@Ros\_e](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/u/Ros_e)\ **Post date:** [December 6, 2016, 3:02pm UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/caught-in-a-reverie-halloween-edition-is-finally-up/20348/818 "2016-12-06T15:02:34Z")
Hehehehe~ I’m so happy to hear this from you ~ 😊 PS. Rainer’s route is now fixed. ---
**Author:** ![Lyanna](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/choiceofgames/user_avatar/forum.choiceofgames.com/lyanna/32/5162_2.png) [@Lyanna](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/u/Lyanna)\ **Post date:** [December 6, 2016, 3:24pm UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/caught-in-a-reverie-halloween-edition-is-finally-up/20348/819 "2016-12-06T15:24:43Z")
![](https://global.discourse-cdn.com/choiceofgames/original/3X/9/3/93c8a6b766c9e34b0d5a760911ec944f890c4b2a.png) Found this on Kioshi’s route ---
**Author:** ![Ros\_e](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/choiceofgames/user_avatar/forum.choiceofgames.com/ros_e/32/18310_2.png) [@Ros\_e](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/u/Ros_e)\ **Post date:** [December 6, 2016, 3:27pm UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/caught-in-a-reverie-halloween-edition-is-finally-up/20348/820 "2016-12-06T15:27:22Z")
Alright c: fixed. It’s so strange cause the game had passed quicktest x’D yet all these little things still pop out ---
**Author:** ![Zeus](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/choiceofgames/user_avatar/forum.choiceofgames.com/zeus/32/157861_2.png) [@Zeus](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/u/Zeus)\ **Post date:** [December 6, 2016, 4:01pm UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/caught-in-a-reverie-halloween-edition-is-finally-up/20348/821 "2016-12-06T16:01:50Z")
I absolutely loved tsubasa’s reaction when you choose the mermaid costume I also liked the supervillan outfit nice Easter egg for persona 5 ---
**Author:** ![Lyanna](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/choiceofgames/user_avatar/forum.choiceofgames.com/lyanna/32/5162_2.png) [@Lyanna](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/u/Lyanna)\ **Post date:** [December 6, 2016, 4:03pm UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/caught-in-a-reverie-halloween-edition-is-finally-up/20348/822 "2016-12-06T16:03:56Z")
Kioshi is just too adorable 😊 I loved his reaction to the samurai costume ---
**Author:** ![Curious\_Boy](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/choiceofgames/user_avatar/forum.choiceofgames.com/curious_boy/32/109853_2.png) [@Curious\_Boy](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/u/Curious_Boy)\ **Post date:** [December 6, 2016, 4:57pm UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/caught-in-a-reverie-halloween-edition-is-finally-up/20348/823 "2016-12-06T16:57:16Z")
some report from Touya route 😁 and sorry for bringing some bad news to ruin your “typo achievement” celebration 😇 > [@](#): > > “The ocean’s great.” I smiled at Touya. I liked how he always tried his best in making conversations out of the surrounding or weather. “I’ll be right back! I’m gonna go get the others~ We’re gonna be the first few to get off this boat~~!” **She** ran off as soon as she finished her sentence. as MC were talking with Touya before, you could change **She** to **Sibyl** so we will not confusing that She is refered to Sibyl and not to Touya XD im literally confused at first and notice the mistake later XD [quote] “Protect me Touya.” I teased. “You know I will.” Touya bowed lightly. He was my own knight in shining armor for tonight. “What about me?” Dion was pouting over my betrayal. [/quote] awww~ poor Dion, are you jealous ? \*wink~ or not (as he was already discussing about a team pose with certain witch 😢 \*getting jealous myself 😜 [quote] “I’m glad to have you here with me.” I smiled. I was overjoyed to have Touya with me. **He just smiled and said nothing**. [/quote] i know that just Touya being _“Touya”_ but i cant helped myself for being hurt 😜 > [@](#): > > I grasped the intricately carved brass door-knocker and banged three times. To my great shock the door receded from view and it was fully open to let me in. I tried hard to walk away from it, but I couldn’t. **It was if** another force was controlling me. it will be better if you add _“as”_ before if, so it will be like this : “_it was **as** if bla bla bla…_” > [@](#): > > This was my chance to get closer to Touya, and I wasn’t going to let it slip. I wrapped both my arms around him, burying my face into his chest. He smelled just like the fresh morning dew; a little minty but also spicy. that sneaky bast\*rd MC 😏 good job!! 👍 Some Error (i assumed it from indent or code or something like that) after Touya and MC finish the haunted house the scene jump to when they failed it and then jump to Rainer scene, even if it was supposed to be Kioshi at the group. > [@](#): > > “I expected nothing less from Touya.” Kioshi nodded firmly without a doubt. > > “Game over.” > > The PA system announced once the figure laid a finger on me. According to the rules, as soon as we are caught by any of the “ghouls” it meant game over. The body just chuckled and lead us out of the house. > > She directed us out of the house. > > “What!? You two lost?!!” Dion and Kioshi both screeched in unison. “How is that possible?!” The scene playing in-front of me > > I felt responsible for our failure, if it was up to Touya we would have definitely won. > > “Enter at your own risk,” the gatekeeper uttered. The heavy door made creaking noises that brought chills down to my spine. The door was the gray of unburnished silver, dull and spotted with years of damage. Where there should have been some fancy matching handle was only a square shaft of dark cold metal. It was purposely weathered was added effects. > > “Time for some fun.” Rainer motioned me to follow her. and i decide to take that as a chance to bug hunting Rainer route and i met the _jumping scene_ error at the end as well > [@](#): > > “The others should be coming out soon.” > > Touya and Dion ended up creating a whole new record, well, we are talking about Touya here, and he’s good at everything. So no surprises there. > > Tsubasa and Sibyl were the last to joined us. > > “Game over.” > > The PA system announced once the man laid a finger on me. I shouldn’t have ran back here. “Oops, better luck next time.” The man guided us out of the haunted house. > > “Don’t sweat it! Let’s do this again next year.” Rainer gave my back a pat of encouragement. > > “Awwww, too bad you two didn’t make it.” Dion greeted both of us. and i noticed while there is a scene after i choose Touya for the pair like this one : [quote] “Protect me Touya.” I teased. “You know I will.” Touya bowed lightly. He was my own knight in shining armor for tonight. “What about me?” Dion was pouting over my betrayal. [/quote] there is nothing at Dion scenes, when i choose Dion it just jump to this scene : > [@](#): > > “Enter at your own risk,” the gatekeeper uttered. bla bla bla… is that intentional ? 😟 oh, there is another “weird scene” that i notice at the begining, some costume doesn’t trigger any reaction from the group, i might take a note for which costumes that happend later while im checking Kio route 😁 ---
**Author:** ![Ros\_e](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/choiceofgames/user_avatar/forum.choiceofgames.com/ros_e/32/18310_2.png) [@Ros\_e](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/u/Ros_e)\ **Post date:** [December 6, 2016, 5:01pm UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/caught-in-a-reverie-halloween-edition-is-finally-up/20348/824 "2016-12-06T17:01:57Z")
Thank you so much!!! And about Dion’s scene, nope TwT there’s suppose to be something like that as well~ I just found out the error and I’m fixing them right now ~~ @Curious_Boy do tell me which costume reactions doesn;t trigger later \>www\< I’m checking the codes too but I might miss something 😄 EDIT Everything should be alright now c: I forget to add in where the scenes should properly end for Touya and Rainer. x’D so sorry guys!! * * * > [@Lyanna](#): > > Kioshi is just too adorable 😊 I know right 😉 > [@Zeus](#): > > I absolutely loved tsubasa’s reaction when you choose the mermaid costume I also liked the supervillan outfit nice Easter egg for persona 5 Hehehehe Yup! It’s such a shame that P5 is getting a delay TwT ---
**Author:** ![Gred\_and\_Forge](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/choiceofgames/user_avatar/forum.choiceofgames.com/gred_and_forge/32/22013_2.png) [@Gred\_and\_Forge](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/u/Gred_and_Forge)\ **Post date:** [December 6, 2016, 5:15pm UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/caught-in-a-reverie-halloween-edition-is-finally-up/20348/825 "2016-12-06T17:15:28Z")
> Knock.Knock. There should be a space after the punctuation. > “We’re one of the lucky ones, to be able to materialize our subconscious or dreams into beings **call** Reveries.” ‘Call’ should be ‘called.’ On another note, I couldn’t see the new content. Can anybody help me? @Ros_e? 😰 ---
**Author:** ![ParrotWatcher](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/choiceofgames/user_avatar/forum.choiceofgames.com/parrotwatcher/32/49963_2.png) [@ParrotWatcher](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/u/ParrotWatcher)\ **Post date:** [December 6, 2016, 5:18pm UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/caught-in-a-reverie-halloween-edition-is-finally-up/20348/826 "2016-12-06T17:18:03Z")
> Touya brows furrowed, his eyes narrowed. “Won’t you attract unwanted attention this way?” > “But you’ll protect him right Touya?” Sibyl giggled. > “Of course!! Without a doubt. I will make sure no harm comes into his way.” He bowed lightly. Ah, Touya. It’s good to be back being vaguely confused about exactly how you feel about me. > “You can suck my blood anytime.” I winked. He was a gorgeous vampire and I didn’t mind playing his victim. My mind was running wild with images of his teeth sinking into my skin, the way he was lavishing me, gave me a certain thrill. > “I **wouldn’t possibly** do that.” His brows narrowed into a worried expression. My heart fell, my fantasy poofed, looks like my attempt at flirting has failed. “Wouldn’t possibly” doesn’t really make sense. It would either be “couldn’t possibly” or just “wouldn’t” (“would never” might be even better). Also, daw, Touya. So naive. 😊 > “I love the breeze.” I smiled at Sibyl. The way her short hair sway against the wind, made my heart flutter a little. Wait, why am I flirting with Sibyl now? Undo! Undo! > “Kioshi, I’ll be with you.” Tsubasa trapped Kioshi in her clutches. I am suddenly terrified for the poor boy… > the interior was themed similarly like our dorm room; **victorian**. “Victorian” should be capitalised. > Touya wrapped his slender fingers around my hand. “I won’t let anything happen to you.” 😊 No comments, just 😊 [Previous page](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/caught-in-a-reverie-halloween-edition-is-finally-up/20348.md?page=40) [Next page](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/caught-in-a-reverie-halloween-edition-is-finally-up/20348.md?page=42)