Castaways (WIP)

[Sailendranath_Murmu]

Decided to go explore solo
Went to the North
'You are frustrated that this happened to you’re
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And an error occurred

[Shinanigansen]

Thanks! I did note that down before and it’s already been fixed, just that I would rather release the whole re-done prologue instead of just uploading the old code to fix this.

[Shinanigansen]

Hi! I did mention somewhere that I did a nearly complete text overhaul, so there’s no worries about that! The new prologue will be uploaded as soon as my beta readers give it a scan through.

And I’ll definitely make a note of that, I’ll work on giving them more defining dialogue soon.

[Shinanigansen]

You should be the go-to for advice then! I have little to no survival experience aside from basic camping and all the videos I’ve watched on it but I’ll be researching more into it as I develop the story.

There are indeed a tribe of natives.

That may or may not be spoilery! You’ll have to see for yourself when I release that bit!

[Ragnock136]

Yeah, I was basically raised in the wilds, My Maternal Grandfather was a unofficial member of a ragtag group of Dutch rebels in Nazi controlled Netherlands, that started him on the path, he later immigrated to the small country of new Zealand, the country I live in, my Grandfather raised me when my mom was unable to. I inherited his love for the bush and ocean as a result, the Property we lived on had a large forest behind it, but there’s this place in the southernmost part of the northern island, it’s a great place to Hone ones survival skills.

Of course having a New Zealand Hunting Icon as An Adoptive Uncle doesn’t Hurt.

Regardless, If you need any advice on the bush or certain situations your unsure of feel free to message me.

Actually, I might have a few ideas you’d be interested in

[Shinanigansen]

Hi! I decided it was about time for me to release the re-done prologue, so I’ve uploaded it and it’s been bug tested, hopefully there’s none left, go ahead and give that a look over if you like!

Regarding some of the ideas/suggestions given, I decided not to implement them/have yet to implement them based on where the story’s going.

As always, feel free to give me some feedback!

Cheers!

[nauhziy]

Wow a fellow Singaporean! Just read through the prologue, I like the premise - sounds very robinsoe crusoe inspired.

Personally, I felt that there’s a bit more development that could have happened on the ship/during the accident. I think its a great opportunity to build in some tension and some personal drama, for example if someone didn’t make it onto the lifeboat, or people panicking and being hysterical. In a way, the sinking of the ship is expected, so I do feel its more about milking the emotional tension than anything!! Otherwise, good job and I look forward to the next chapter

[Victoria_Princess_An]

Hello! Your story is really interesting and im curious on how it’ll go, I was wondering though, when we asked the other survivors questions about themselves they didn’t ask any about us… Are they just not curious about us?

[Shinanigansen]

Very nice! Hoping to have the time to check out your game soon

I’ll take note of that for a revision when I make one, thanks for checking this game out!

[Shinanigansen]

Oops, I get what you mean! No worries, I have plans for that to change in the next chapter

Thanks for reading!

[peaches]

Helllllo finally got the time to write this thing.

I just want to tell you that the game is good and I’m looking forward to seeing what happens next! You have a cool cast of characters and I’m looking to getting to know them better!

Especially Alex

Also just a small typo I found.

[Shinanigansen]

Hi!!

No surprise there, Alex is probably a standard fav!
Thanks for checking it out, I’ll put that in my notes for future revision

[Shinanigansen]

Hi!!

No surprise there, Alex is probably a standard fav!
Thanks for checking it out, I’ll put that in my notes for future revision

[Logan_T]

Hey, great game! I really like the premise, just got a couple of suggestions. I think everyone goes into survival mode a bit to fast. Like, I know stuff has got to be done, but they had just gone through an extremely stressful event and are now on a deserted island. May need some more time to process things. Also, I’d like to see the PC become their own person. Like have some dialogue choice between characters and allow personality to show in a more meaningful way. Finally I would be interested in seeing more detail on how they actually survive. Adding some realisim would make the game even more interesting than it already is! That’s all I got for now. Keep up the good work!