I’m proud to announce that I’ve finally finished Trial of the Demon Hunter’s sequel :D! Now I just need to have it beta tested to make sure it’s the highest quality before I submit it to CoG. Mainly, I’d just like to hear about any typos or continuity errors you encounter. However, I’m open to any other suggestions you may have; I’d love to hear them! Specifically, I’m also looking for:
1.) Suggestions for more achievements. Right now, I have 2, but I want 9.
2.) Weeding out excessive purple prose. I like to write detailed passages, but I acknowledge that many of them are too florid. Recently, I’ve begun to tone my writing level down a little, but many of this was written when I hadn’t done so.
3.)Before encountering the ogre, I want to make a little dangerous scene where you have to pass an obstacle. However, I want your boggart to be HEAVILY involved, but at the same time I want there to be choices. As of now, I’m stumped on what to do. @poison_mara gave me some good suggestions based off my old idea of a magical boulder field, but I decided I’d toss that idea since it was too close to the geyser field in book one. I’d also like for this to be like a puzzle
Here’s the link enjoy!