I really enjoy the demo. However there are parts that should have a bit more story to it. Especially after being uncovered as a cop and joining them again. After getting found out and after the assault, things went back to normal. I think the archangels should be colder to the protagonist and slowly get better again, which will make the story more immersive. I did read it twice and felt that it used the criminal story line, but I think another path of story line and slowly merge it into the criminal plot line.
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After all, itās a demo! Though I did reminded him regarding character.
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Yey!!!
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Out of curiosity have yall ever considered the zombie exodus approach for the next game? Like release it in big parts so you guys wont feel rushed to release content?
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Hahahahahahahahaahahhh. I donāt know why @MichaelMaxwell does it either.
In a few days, Iāll be releasing a crossover, non-canon spin-off parody fanwork of Breach and the other thing.
Itāll be fan-stuff with a quite mainstream mobile game. The franchise itself has existed for about 2 decades. I like some characters there too, and letās hope weād get more people to put their interest on the original game.
Maybe Iāll post a sketch of it here later. And if someone here does recognize them, shh.
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This is mostly because of how tiring it was when I was writing that divergence scene. I had ideas to put in for reactions if the MC turned criminal after being found as an informant. Some did make it into the game, but Iāve stashed most of them aside and completely forgotten about it because I was too lazy to implement it.
I will however implement those if I do get around to reviewing the game from the start, but for now, I am doing my best to finish the game as a whole.
It has come across my mind numerous times, but with the arch of the game, I canāt think of a place to cut the game without leaving the players/readers hanging in an uncomfortable cliffhanger. (I know cliffhangers arenāt meant to be comfortable, butā¦ I just hate to disappoint my players by releasing part by part)
I remember being somewhat disappointed when I played Zombie Exodus Safe Haven and it ended on part 1, and I had to wait to buy the next part.
In shortā¦ I donāt want to release short parts of stories because I do not wish to disappoint anyone by giving them something so few and leaving them wanting more. Itāll be easier work for me, but it wonāt be much of product for you.
Unless cliffhangers were an essential part of the story, I donāt wish to have them in my stories.
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Iām on self imposed computer exile. It does wonders for my stress. Anyway, found a rather strange bug involving the nerf pistol and the gatling gun.
Yeah Iām cheating. I needed to test some of those glorious goods.
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Try the golden bat
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I would say itās a feature, not a bug, but yesā¦ Iāve fixed it 
I mean, who wouldnāt want a toy pistol minigun?
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The main problem is that isnāt what I purchasedā¦
Hereās another bugā¦
Iāll do the golden bat tomorrow, @Jeruspi
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Can someone replace the first sentence with: Raquel applying first aid
Breach memes. Wow. How far have we fallen.
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Finally the good stuff
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Gabrielās real Identity is James Bond. Specifically James Bond is an Alias MI5 gives to itās greatest Agent (or Jane Bond if the agent is female) After being left for dead on an OP that went bad he formed his own organization. With loyalty at the core. Raquel was a young woman who was enslaved having been sold to a terrorist. Gabriel killed the terrorist even though he was badly injured and unsure of what to do with her freedom followed Gabriel. Michael was an CIA operative who was burned because if his questionable tactics. He was drinking himself into a grave when Gabriel found him. They had worked together on Joint American Britain OPs . Mouse is an Agent of mI5 sent to track Gabriel down and report back whether he needs to be eliminated or not.
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SOMEONE MAKE A JOHNNY JOHNNY MEME WITH THE MC BEING AN INFORMANT
Like, āRaphael raphaelā
āYes Gabrielā
Iāll finish it later but itās gon b lit, I tell you.
Anyways, have some scattered thoughts:
Huh. Michaels mask is canonically black? I pictured it as the bourbon flagā¦
Iāve noticed a lack of smgs and machine pistols. Any plans to expand those?
But yeah Iāll do a playthrough for the sole puropse of getting harmed to see that Raquel pathā¦ when itās added. Iāll see what I can make do with right nowā¦
So Gabriel and bootleg dead pool and bishop and all of those lads were in the same special forces outfit? Tf were they, the professional equivalent of my friends playing Siege?
A note on rook. What is his double pistol modelled after? 2 1911s? 2 M9s?
Aand a note on Gabriel. Is he really a human? I mean, really? Is it divine intervention? Is it some super soldier program? What is that ladās secret?
So I played leadfootās intro. Geez man chill with that. Never driving near alleyways again.
What elseā¦
Oh, that bit where we went into velvet cuts with mouse was cute.
A note on mouse. She reminds me of Dva.
And a note on hayne, as I think of the ros. What accent does she have? I know itās Canadian, but Iāve heard that the accents can differ in Quebec? Idk, never been there much. There was that one time that I had to drive to Washington from Alaska, but I didnāt see anyone.
And finally, when will the small bank heist be finished?
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If he was British, sure.
Close, but no cigar.
ā¦This wouldāve made a considerably much more different story, but I like it 
This may not be the closest, but itās the best guess so far.
ā¦ The fluer de lis. Yes, itās in the middle. The surrounding mask itself is Dark grey.
Yes and no. SMGs will be expanded quite a bit, but as for Machine Pistols, I still have to do some research if Iām going to expand them.
Raquel is the only RO in the game that has itās romance path being the most literally painful one to go through.
Theyāreā¦ some other kind of special forces. Actually, theyāre not special forces at all, theyāre just a task force that doesnāt operate by normal standards. Likeā¦ far from the normal standards.
The Arsenal AF2011ā¦ Look it up.
Lots of training, lots of determination, and lots of lots of failures. And a whole bunch of surgeries
Yeahā¦ it was written under the influence of Whiskey and apple juice
She was born in Winnipeg, but moved and was raised in Toronto (Despite her Stats Screen biography showing Toronto as her hometown, which it technically is) She speaks with a thin Ottawa Valley English accent.
She also speaks Quebec French with an Canadian-English accent.
Whenever I finish planning the big bank heist, I will start making the small one. (I know it sounds weird to start big and downscaling them, but it just works better for me somehow)
ā¦ Oh my cheesus god, yes. Have my like.
I need this in my lifeā¦ people have started making memes about my gameā¦ I feel like Iāve finally done something worth it in life.
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Seriously though, I canāt find it and Iām too lazy to replay the whole game just to find it.
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