Huh it still works for me 
On a side note ( donāt know if I or someone else has asked) but who are the ROās currently in the game (not planned for future but just now)?
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Our adorable little biscuit Mouse is one.
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Wellā¦ alrighty then 
I donāt advise using it though, for it may cause unwanted bugs that only you can see and cannot be fixed
This was removed ages agoā¦ I didnāt want to sound sexist, so I added one for all the men too, but I decided to remove them all togetherā¦ though not permanently
I actually base people off of numerous characters and actors and actressesā¦ sometimes one character can be based off of more then three real life people.
ā¦ Iāve answered this way too many times 
Currently, itās only Mouse and Hayneā¦
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Ohā¦ Iām playing the public alpha i guess and it was in there until the most recent update you must have only updated the public one recently? Could that be it?
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Who is Gabriel based off of?
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Oh, that may be, but Iāve uploaded the full one eversince August.
The actor heās based off of is (voice wise) George Clooney or Keith Davis, and (physical wise) Asaiah Mustafa, or Jude Law as Alfie
But his personality is based off of a whole lot of different people, so I canāt exactly pin point one person. And theyāre not all famous, some of them are just people I personally know, and most of it is actually just myself.
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So when people want to kill Gabriel ā¦ouch
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Yeahā¦ apparently a lot of people want to kill me
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But a lot of people wants you to be their daddy as well o_o ā¦
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And I imagine some want both.
Though in Detective Path I donāt really bear any grudge against Gabriel for what happened. Itās Michael and Raquelās fault he more or less just let it happen. I like to believe if Michael hadnāt figured things out as quick Gabriel would have given us a chance to betray the FBI.
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-Chief
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W-what? 
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Raquel is an RO right? Is there any special route or choices i need to choose to get closer to her? 
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All i want is revenge on both of them.
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Gabriel canāt die because he has to go all Law Abiding Citizen in the sequel. (Or Kingpin from Netflix Daredevil)
Detective Path Anthony arrests him we get a commendation for helping and things are set up.
Criminal path we become the new Gabriel while he orchestrates things from his cell.
Sequel Detective: when Gabriel Escapes weāre back on the case to bring him down for good.
Criminal Path: We have to help Gabriel escape.
Ending of sequel. Gabriel believed dead in detective Path or retired in criminal path shows up to wrap things up with the MC.
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Found some mistakes and whatnot.
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You could say: Filling the interior with soft guitar and piano music playing at the start of the song.
Or possibly: Filling the interior with a soft guitar and piano instrumental playing at the start of the song.
See him open up, or just see him opening upā¦
You could remove the a and put security instead, or just remove the a as it doesnāt need to be there.
Triangular pane of glassā¦
Second floor walkways.
Some of them empty.
The you doesnāt need to be there.
Since youāre talking about multiple CCTV cameras, it would be donāt show much, instead of doesnāt show much.
Goes on to showā¦
Either you meant having or their breakfast was really bad.
It should be The Don because I donāt think it was stated earlier in the conversation that they were referring to him.
He loses receptionā¦
What have we been doingā¦
The we have a is repeated twice.
You could say mouse points over to, or mouse moves over to, or indicates to, etc.
Alright thenā¦
Beaten up on all limbs.
You could say blood pouring from his arms, or dripping from his arms, or streaming from his arms, etc.
The to doesnāt need to be there.
Assess.
Blood and drool going down his chinā¦
Neck as he groansā¦
Iād like you to answer something for me.
Thereās a sudden riseā¦
There is an extra the.
A suburban neighborhood outsideā¦
Both of them areā¦
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Fools, thinking that I was to post last Friday! I never specified which Friday, ha. So, itāll happen. Eventually. Next Friday? The Friday after next? Who knowsā¦
Anyways, I got called in on my day off, therefore upsetting every plan that I had on Friday.
So, Iām writing this on Tuesday (october 2nd), from school. Now home, 2 hours later. Iāve copy-pasted this in emails to myself to keep updating this post on the go, between home and school.
This is from the new update, postedā¦ 4 hours ago.
This will go up whenever. Probably before the homecoming dance at my school.
Still no Raquel route, eh?
Neyh, whatever. Good luck writing it.
Also, Iād like to petition @MichaelMaxwell to add the payday crew as cameos, if they arenāt alreadyā¦
This is currently just an assorted list of random thoughts.
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Now, letās get down to breachingā¦
Glanced should be glance, right? This takes place in the present? But this entire chapter is being re-written, eh? And Iāve gone through here many a time.
And defeat the Corpā¦
Andā¦ āAndā and us go way back, huh?
Did they send me informants?
Prepare should be prepared, as this is in the past tense.
When I asked, for thugs?
Boy, was that a sentence. Maybe shorten it? Nah. Do whatever.
Youāre the saddest thugs Iāve ever met
Forgive me if this isnāt a fault, Iāve little knowledge of British slang.
But you can still join the crewā¦
āwhats crakalackinā ?ā
āMy bones dearā
Somehow Iāll make an archangel out of you
Period after says? Forgive me, but guys donāt really giggle? Theyā¦ chuckle?
Tranquil as a kitten
But under fire within
Andā¦
Once you roll a 20
You are sure to hit
Iāll just get to the second part and ignore all ands from here on out.
Youāre a spineless crew, bound to be caught
And you havenāt robbed the jewels
So, can we get colored contacts? If we havenāt already?
Somehow Iāll make an archangel out of you
Just like could be replaced with as.
Iām never gonna escape this bank
Say goodbye to those who shoot me
Boy was I a fool in school for cutting gym (get it because low fitness stat haha ok Iāll show myself out)
This heistās got me scared to death
Hope he doesnāt see right though me (seeing through a facade? get it guys? cuzā¦ Speech and all that?)
Ok ok here Iāll stop the song parody. I might do more lyrics? If people found that enjoyable?
That Vanzetti? Or is that a fairly common surname?
Haha sike yāall thought it was over now Iām going to parody hellfire
Archangel Gabriel, you know I am a loyal man
Of my marksmanship I am justly proud
Archangel Gabriel, You know Iām so much more loyal than
That irrelevant, gunslinging (haha get it because we can accuse michael as being the informant), self-loyal crowd
Then tell me, Gabriel,
Why I see her applying first-aid there
Her deafening silence still piercing my very soul
I feel her, I see her
Sun caught on her feline mask
It is clawing me out of all control
LIKE BREACHING
ROOM CLEARING
THESE CLAWMARKS ON MY SKIN
THIS STINGING
DESIRE
IT IS TURNING ME TO SIN
Ok ok for real this time
Hah. Thatās unfortunate. For the kid. Imagine being the son of criminal scum like this.
Add period after possibly
sheās got that THICC accent
-_-
So here, right. How about you add a snarky comment like
MC:āWhy are you hereā
Outfit:āWe just want to talkā
MC: āHow many of you are there?ā
Outfit: ā4ā
MC:āTalk to yourselvesā
How can we hear them whispering if a bomb has just gone off?
Yeehaw itās wednesday. Iāll just post this now.
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Given how strong Gabrielās mask is what caliber firearm would knock him out? I like to imagine in the end of detective Path us shooting him in the face knocking him out because of how powerful the mask is along with the round of the firearm and shrugging as if to say. āWhat? I didnāt kill him.ā
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Probably one of these, Iām assuming he has an equivalent of the model we can buy at Gregās specialty shop:
Or, you know, the highly modified toy pistol. Those things can be rather dangerous without the proper protection.
Hell, maybe even the ultra knife.
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Iām thinking if i can land a hit on him with the gold head explodey bat ( thought that the description was an exaggeration. Nope it actually explodes heads) then it might knock him out.
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