“night off” oof whelp now i have the time
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I’m getting lit to Rasputin being played on an organ so…
Summary
So… As we see Kaz enter, we identify him as male. Why is he called “person” here?
Are we in Texas?? Midwest grammar has made this a rather obscene use of words to me…
Period…After…You…?? Please god these coding grammatical errors are starting to take their toll…
Good sounds so… bland… Maybe add/replace options such as this… “I don’t feel so good…”
AND
And… Replace and.
Comma after alright.
… should be within the quotations, after thing.
So, add a comma after the end quotations after “your thing…” and make the and before you lowercase.
Now, I’m no genius at writing dialogue, but this sentence seems abrupt. Maybe a period or 3 after go? Maybe rewrite it… “let’s go” Kaz says as he opens the door. Or something…
Ah, now it’s “Pack up your troubles in the old kit bag”…
Why is male lowercase? Why are the stats screaming at me?
Americaner spelling is color. And why is “colour” lowercase, when all other stats are capital?
At 25… Wow, this is the only time I’ve accomplished anything! Well, there was that one time where I got a 98 on a final… In middle school…
Who? Now this is a rather severe immersion-breaker, if you ask me. Seeing as we, oh, I don’t know, haven’t even met Greg yet?
Uh… What? No weapons and yet…
Kaz my boy, just put the man in a choke-hold.
Please tell me that if it’s a critical fail we hit Kaz…
So… Telescopic?
Oh look, now it’s a hardbass remix of moskau…
That… uh… ok then… I’m just gonna… Clean my eyes…
Period after holster… Unless it’s one of those code errors.
Period after silently… Unless…
Do we wield a nightstick or a baton?
Capitalize “it”
Add period after port.
Yeah Bain, you can say that again! Oh… That’s not Bain… sniffle
Period after whisper.
Why… A comma?
What… The… Fuck… I know I’ve seen these before, but… Good God man…
now you listen here buck-o I want that Raquel path NOW.
Ed… I like Ed, more than Ave, even… He’s a lad, I tell you.
You see that blue line? That’s a comma. Add one.
I now want to make a feudal age nobleman MC.
But… That’s not how it works… Unless the conditions are right…
Saying it’s awkward doesn’t make it less awkward…
Uh… That doesn’t seem right…
Why are we all here? Just to suffer?
Hmmmm…
scuttles to ms paint
TA-DA
Wrong eye, I know…
Anyways… Yeah, that’s it. Sadly, I had to do… personal things.
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Sorry, I was a little bit loopy while writing that…
I’ll do all of it once I get my morning motivation…
I had a dang good sleep afterwards…
RA RA R… nevermind… Nuzzles my face onto the pillow and groans
I… don’t know what that is…
Well, good luck!
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frowns
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I really like the game so far!
I just watched this music video and it reminded me of this game.
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I don’t know what that is, but it’s good if you like it. So it can make you play more!
Lol we used to have and sell that kind of skull mask. But covers your hair too.
Shooting with Hayne is still buggy with a fixed dice. You pull the trigger and hope for the best. BANG BANG BANG BANG BANG ! (rolling D20 ( 9507508 )
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I wonder if we can cut a deal with our Handler in Detective Path. He gets to arrest Gabriel and I Get to kill Michael and Raquel.
Michael shot My girlfriend if I remember right ( even if he meant it for me) Raquel has to die because she’s too dangerous to live .
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That’s because I haven’t uploaded the fix yet…
Whoa… Ookay then. I’ll… um… figure something out.
Yes… yes he did…
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Ok I’ll compromise. Unmasking Raquel and exposing her identity to the public.
But Michael has to die.
The Trio need to suffer what would be their worst nightmares? What would leave them psychologically broken?
Also I’m going to have to kill ALOT of people. When you’re an undercover cop in an organization when EVEN THE GUY WHO RAN YOUR LOCAL FRIGGIN GROCERY STORE is in the organization you can never know who to trust. Is that mailman delivering you mail or a bullet? Going to McDonald’s? That person at the register might be an Archangel associate. Etc. You’ll never be able a to live in peace.
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I am not a real fan of the suits i would rather wear proper combat gear.
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You kinda can. A tact vest plus cargo pants is basically what your aiming for.
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I still need a cargo shirt knee pads and elbow pads and a helmet then boom i am done.
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Get the juggernaut suit
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Oof… alright then.
Gabriel is pretty easy to figure out…
Michael is… well… you can’t break someone who’s already broken…
Raquel… well, you pretty much saw her worst nightmare come true.
Ah… the beauty of the Archangels. Ordinary people doing extraordinary things…
You never know when your local gardener might pull out a 12 gauge and start mowing down the local drug den.
Don’t do drugs, kids!
This is one of the things I’ve wanted to put into the games before I realized that the paddings are rather hard to code in and basically provide no technical advantage when it comes to codes.
However, once you start working with the FBI, you get to have whatever kind of tactical gear you want…
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Sure thing. Have fun!
That’s merciful! Who wants to live in this era!?
Steal their food whenever you’ve got the chance. It’d piss anyone off!
Yesssssssss, kill everyone!
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Sir @MichaelMaxwell i assume this is a problem.
This is what happens when you try to tale rook’s pistol after killing him
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