Huh. Yeah, I guess I read it as a text instead of envision how the character would say something. Makes sense, though. I, personally am fine with the damage system.
But you mean to tell me that my nitpicking has actually done something?
Cool.
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Yesā¦ Itās a tedious task already, but honestly, if it makes the game better, itās worth itā¦ unless itās too much work to re-code some things, in which case Ben is just not gonna have itā¦
Rook: Nah, I mean like a TRUE sidekick. Not like Batman and Robin, but like Booster Gold and Blue Beetle, maybe or-
Bishop: I told you I'm not your sidekick. I'm your-
Rook: Best friend?
Bishop: Partner...
Rook: ... Like Cosmo and Wanda from Fairly Odd Parents?
Bishop: Like the Blues Brothers from Blues Brothers
Rook: ... Wow you're old. But that is a good movie.
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BUT WAIT THEREāS MORE
@MichaelMaxwell Now that I know about the coding and all, some of these may be redundant.
Summary
Should be play really loud music. Or you blast the old doom soundtrack.
Period after precinct.
Period after call.
Replace with either thereās very loud music or thereās a very loud song.
Add comma after Sir.
Add period after trust.
Add period after mole.
Add period after down.
Uhā¦ Huh. Wellā¦ Iāll just leave this here. Iām not even wearing a suit?
There is a Dr. Murdock, who discusses the bible on television. Is there a connection here?
Period after church.
Period after him.
Period after ask.
Period after man.
Period after there.
After the last it. Maybe remove the last it all together. āItās been paid for itā doesnāt uhā¦ sound natural?
Period after would.
Period after them.
Period after us.
Period after guy.
Period after place.
But nowā¦ I cannot go on. My eyesā¦ They burnā¦ I havenāt eaten since lunch, some 9 hours agoā¦ Iām fading outā¦
Iām sorry, for failing you all. Tomorrowā¦ Tomorrow will be the day.
Yeah.
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Youāve done everything but fail meā¦ Thank you for your contribution! Go get some sleep while I do too! 
ā¦
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Mike Murdock?
God no. Gregās much less religious and much more in it for the charity work.
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Oh my catnip, Iām kinda ignoring it bec I always thought tht their relationship was nothing more than friendship (just like me mouse) butā¦now I kinda feel guilty about romancing Gabe. These two just have this silent and unique camaraderie that Iād feel so left out. Thereāll prolly be some angst from the cat(w/c I like) and alsoā¦ I kinda feel like they really belong togetherā¦ Just like me and mouse. Oh Raquel I like you, but I aināt gonna hand my senpai to you without a fight even tho youāre closer to him (am burning of jealousy ryt now geez)
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Thatās what Gabriel seesā¦ 
Donāt be so guilty, Raquel has another love interest, but sheās fixated on trying to get Gabriel to notice her so much more.
Depending on your relationship with her, sheāll either give you the sigh, the stink eye, or the clawsā¦
Evil laugh my plan is working~
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I always thought more closer to the Golden Girls
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Babe, wtf are you doing?
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Youā¦evil evil tease grrrrrr!!
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Yes!!! I hve a real chance!!! 
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Justā¦ thingsā¦
Mhmā¦ just becareful around Raquel afterwards 
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Are you just enjoying all the people going insane over Gabriel and Aria?
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ā¦ Maybe
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At least youāre honestā¦
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This reminds meā¦ I should add an option for the MC to pet Raquel.
WARNING: Pet at your own riskā¦
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More of your fans would want options to pet Rook and Gabriel as well. Just saying. 
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Gabriel might look at you weird, but I think he wonāt mindā¦
Rook on the other hand, might need a bit more heavy pettingā¦
Rook: Touch-a, touch-a, touch me~
ā¦ No.
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I have returned. I shall commence my nitpicking. Grab a coffee or something, @MichaelMaxwell.
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