That’s correct though…
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@Crow Aren’t “he’s” and “he has” the same thing?
The only reason why I’m keeping track of it is because I don’t want Michael to kill my MC if her stats with him is too low…
Um, I wasn’t the one that reported it, I think it was @SenorBurrito?
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Yeah… um…me no habla ingles runs away
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Say “He has done his research” out loud, then say, “He’s done his research.” The English language is a funny thing, but three Hs that close together doesn’t sound…correct. Alot of occasions dialogue looks wonky, but when you read it out loud, it makes sense
No worries, you can take my glory lol
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It’s fine, English is an extremely confusing and complex language
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Oi, no actúes cómo tu sabes Español! 
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Yeah in my mind i kept on saying “he is” then i searched it up i was wrong went back in the forum to change it before anyone can see it like a smooth ninja but you guys are way too fast kek
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Wow, epic ninja fail?
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That is actually quite possible 
Y-Yeah, I should keep track of that…
Oh, right, sorry. Damn, I get things mixed up on a regular basis… very sorry…
Rook: *inglés
Aaah, English~
sips tea
Rook: Ay, chica!~ Estás hablando el idioma de mi corazón~
… Rook! Heel!
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My asian heritage would be ashamed of me.
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Really? Yo soy Puertorriqueña y Española… most people don’t like that combination 
Don’t worry, most people doubt I’m Puerto Rican because I don’t like Puerto Rican food… and because of my pale skin… and because unlike most Puerto Rican women, I’m usually quiet in real life (unless I get used to someone, then my crazy spanish side start showing 
)
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Rook: Yo soy un asesino internacional~ Mi arma son los cinco idiomas que hablo, y mi cucu~
The fact that I know very little Spanish makes Rook’s vocabulary very limited…
So instead of flirting, he will now flex his muscles…
Rook: *Flexes muscles in Spanish*
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As per request, I shall commence the nit picking.
In the start of the game you have the date and the time in hold at the top of the page: July 4th 2016 at 1:06 a.m.
Later on you say your boss picks the perfect night as the fireworks will mask the sound of gunfire, what doesn’t make sense is Fireworks probably wouldn’t be going off in the morning of July 4th but in the morning of July 5th as would be the tail end of Independence Day celebrations.
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In my neighborhood, some people are setting off fireworks 3 days before the 4th, and when the 4th arrives at midnight, they go haywire with the fireworks, so not actually that far off
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Am back. With more nitpicks. Some are kinda spoilery. Beware, I have hidden only some of the spoilers.
Summary
This one could just be due to me being rather out of it atm (colds, am I right?).
But I feel that there should be a comma after infiltrate. Then it should (imo) read as gain reputation, infiltrate, and apprehend.
Missing period.
Sorta redundant, could just be combat and deception.
I’m calling this a fault for making me laugh as I was sipping coffee.
In could just be through.
This could just be the engine roars on with a vroom.
Past tense, looked should be look and parked should be park.
Realized should be realize. Maybe use “Upon realizing your hands are still cuffed to the table, you resign yourself to the chill.” idk. that’s a sentence I’ve used once or twice. The main nitpick is the use of realized.
Could just be “you hastily pull out your keys.”
I know this is rather nit-picky, but and isn’t typically used to start a sentence. This is the prime example of nitpicking.
A comma after reading could work.
I believe there should be a “he says” before “as”.
comma after hands
Up down left right? That up down left right?
Transparent would be a better word choice, imo.
Serial should be lowercase.
Makes should be make.
Law enforcement, remove s. Missing period.
Missing period, after undies.
“right next to yours to the right” That seems a bit…
Yep, that’s it for today.
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Is the game officially out yet? WHY DOES IT JUST END FOR ME. (Or is that a private beta.)
(PS: new here, love the game, one of the best I ever seen)
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That’s all the author has written so far. He hasn’t finished the game yet.
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WoOOOOOO… logic time… actually pretty nice logic. I guess that Ski mask only cover, but still have air holes? since we wont want gabriel suffocate
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