# Breach: The Archangel Job - Private Beta Sign up (Closed) **URL:** \ **Category:** Works In Progress\ **Created:** [October 20, 2016, 9:41am UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/breach-the-archangel-job-private-beta-sign-up-closed/21313 "2016-10-20T09:41:09Z")\ **Posts on this page:** 20\ **Page:** 1
**Author:** ![MichaelMaxwell](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/choiceofgames/user_avatar/forum.choiceofgames.com/michaelmaxwell/32/68271_2.png) [@MichaelMaxwell](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/u/MichaelMaxwell)\ **Post date:** [October 20, 2016, 9:41am UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/breach-the-archangel-job-private-beta-sign-up-closed/21313/1 "2016-10-20T09:41:09Z")
This topic is for those who’d like to sign up for “Breach: The Archangel Job” Private Beta. If this topic is not supposed to be here, please tell me and I’ll put this somewhere else. Private Beta will start (hopefully) at the 30th of October and will be updated at the very least monthly, if possible weekly. But I will reply to the topic as often as I can. 😄 If anyone wants to sign up, here’s the place! So far here are the people who’ll be on the list(that I know of) @CaesarCzech @Curious_Boy @Voldy @Kungfuboom @LaReveuse @Aerin @Eiwynn @InsanityRun (I’m sorry, I just remembered you sent me a PM XD) @kai229 The game so far.. > [@BREACH: The Archangel Job - (Released! | Discussion) New Discord](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/breach-the-archangel-job-crime-thriller-wip-updated-16-oct-2016/19446): > > This thread is for discussion, questions, bug reports, and feedback. Alternatively, bug reports could be sent to support@hostedgames.org with the subject Breach TAJ - Bug report. To avoid spoilers, jump straight to 4900 to the game’s release. Don’t be afraid to post here, constructive criticism helps! smileFor those wondering whether or not Breach 2 is a thing, yes, it’s a thing, [the WIP is out.](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/breach-chicago-war-zone-wip-first-public-upload/88934) ==STORY OUTLINE== | Word count = 820,000+ (Including codes) Breach:… P.S: If this topic is in the wrong place, I’m terribly sorry. I will put it somewhere else if so P.P.S: I’m mostly hoping to get your most honest of opinions on the game most of all, story progression, pacing, and overall your thoughts on it. Besides that, I would love to get your reports on the bugs, typos, and grammar mistakes… and I’m very sorry, CaesarCzech, but are going to be a LOT of grammar mistakes… I’ll be sure to watch it, but if you find any, please do tell me if it of your convenience thank you all! for participating! 😄 P.P.P.S: There are no requirements for participating, anyone can sign up! but only until the 30th, then I’m probably gonna close it ---
**Author:** ![Voldy](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/choiceofgames/user_avatar/forum.choiceofgames.com/voldy/32/146053_2.png) [@Voldy](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/u/Voldy)\ **Post date:** [October 22, 2016, 1:18am UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/breach-the-archangel-job-private-beta-sign-up-closed/21313/2 "2016-10-22T01:18:01Z")
I would love to sign up. This game is my favorite. The characters, weapons, customization, story…even the real life references. I love you. Also, hey. This is my first post. Long time lurker, first time member. 🙂 ---
**Author:** ![MichaelMaxwell](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/choiceofgames/user_avatar/forum.choiceofgames.com/michaelmaxwell/32/68271_2.png) [@MichaelMaxwell](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/u/MichaelMaxwell)\ **Post date:** [October 22, 2016, 2:32am UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/breach-the-archangel-job-private-beta-sign-up-closed/21313/3 "2016-10-22T02:32:07Z")
Why thank you! Glad to know you like it! ---
**Author:** ![Voldy](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/choiceofgames/user_avatar/forum.choiceofgames.com/voldy/32/146053_2.png) [@Voldy](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/u/Voldy)\ **Post date:** [October 22, 2016, 1:53pm UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/breach-the-archangel-job-private-beta-sign-up-closed/21313/4 "2016-10-22T13:53:18Z")
You’re very welcome! I’m guessing you could immediately tell where my name came from. 🕶 ---
**Author:** ![MichaelMaxwell](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/choiceofgames/user_avatar/forum.choiceofgames.com/michaelmaxwell/32/68271_2.png) [@MichaelMaxwell](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/u/MichaelMaxwell)\ **Post date:** [October 22, 2016, 2:07pm UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/breach-the-archangel-job-private-beta-sign-up-closed/21313/5 "2016-10-22T14:07:41Z")
Yeah, it was one of the options for the name, right? You’re like “The Archangel Who Shall Not Be Named” I don’t really know how though, but since I love Easter eggs so much, I’m planning to have everyone who participates in the private beta as an Easter egg of their own in the story. ---
**Author:** ![Voldy](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/choiceofgames/user_avatar/forum.choiceofgames.com/voldy/32/146053_2.png) [@Voldy](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/u/Voldy)\ **Post date:** [October 22, 2016, 4:38pm UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/breach-the-archangel-job-private-beta-sign-up-closed/21313/6 "2016-10-22T16:38:11Z")
That would be absolutely splendid! I love that idea! Jim Datillo kind of did that, if I recall correctly. I would kill to have something of me in your game! ---
**Author:** ![Kungfuboom](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/choiceofgames/user_avatar/forum.choiceofgames.com/kungfuboom/32/86217_2.png) [@Kungfuboom](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/u/Kungfuboom)\ **Post date:** [October 23, 2016, 11:41am UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/breach-the-archangel-job-private-beta-sign-up-closed/21313/7 "2016-10-23T11:41:00Z")
Sure I would love to test this one out ^^ What are the major things your looking for us to tell you basically? ---
**Author:** ![MichaelMaxwell](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/choiceofgames/user_avatar/forum.choiceofgames.com/michaelmaxwell/32/68271_2.png) [@MichaelMaxwell](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/u/MichaelMaxwell)\ **Post date:** [October 23, 2016, 12:04pm UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/breach-the-archangel-job-private-beta-sign-up-closed/21313/8 "2016-10-23T12:04:02Z")
The game will basically circle around the journey of the MC going through their time in The Archangel crew. I really wanted to make a nice balance between realism and fun. So I’m mostly looking to hear your most honest of opinions on the game’s progression. How you think the story is so far, what would be good for the story, suggestions, criticism, everything you got, lay it on me! Constructive criticism and nitpicking is encouraged… Second would be bugs, typos, and grammar error… I’m gonna be typing codes, fast, so there will be some that I miss and there will be bugs, there will be Typos, there will be a LOT… and I do mean, irritatingly a LOT of grammar mistakes. If you find any reports or suggestions, I would love to hear them! 😄 Thank you! ---
**Author:** ![LaReveuse](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/choiceofgames/user_avatar/forum.choiceofgames.com/lareveuse/32/200664_2.png) [@LaReveuse](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/u/LaReveuse)\ **Post date:** [October 23, 2016, 2:47pm UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/breach-the-archangel-job-private-beta-sign-up-closed/21313/9 "2016-10-23T14:47:06Z")
May I also join the private beta? 🙂 ---
**Author:** ![MichaelMaxwell](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/choiceofgames/user_avatar/forum.choiceofgames.com/michaelmaxwell/32/68271_2.png) [@MichaelMaxwell](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/u/MichaelMaxwell)\ **Post date:** [October 23, 2016, 6:33pm UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/breach-the-archangel-job-private-beta-sign-up-closed/21313/10 "2016-10-23T18:33:21Z")
Sure why not! 😄 ---
**Author:** ![MichaelMaxwell](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/choiceofgames/user_avatar/forum.choiceofgames.com/michaelmaxwell/32/68271_2.png) [@MichaelMaxwell](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/u/MichaelMaxwell)\ **Post date:** [October 31, 2016, 3:16am UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/breach-the-archangel-job-private-beta-sign-up-closed/21313/11 "2016-10-31T03:16:16Z")
Currently setting up Private Beta, sorry for the delay! 😅 ---
**Author:** ![Eiwynn](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/choiceofgames/user_avatar/forum.choiceofgames.com/eiwynn/32/221334_2.png) [@Eiwynn](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/u/Eiwynn)\ **Post date:** [October 31, 2016, 3:17am UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/breach-the-archangel-job-private-beta-sign-up-closed/21313/12 "2016-10-31T03:17:59Z")
I can help as stated previously - just send me an invite when ready. ---
**Author:** ![MichaelMaxwell](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/choiceofgames/user_avatar/forum.choiceofgames.com/michaelmaxwell/32/68271_2.png) [@MichaelMaxwell](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/u/MichaelMaxwell)\ **Post date:** [October 31, 2016, 3:31am UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/breach-the-archangel-job-private-beta-sign-up-closed/21313/13 "2016-10-31T03:31:22Z")
Alright thanks! I’m currently talking with my friend I’m currently working with so we can figure out what we wanna do in the Private Beta 😌 ---
**Author:** ![Tuhin\_Subhra\_Maity](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/choiceofgames/user_avatar/forum.choiceofgames.com/tuhin_subhra_maity/32/86079_2.png) [@Tuhin\_Subhra\_Maity](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/u/Tuhin_Subhra_Maity)\ **Post date:** [October 31, 2016, 4:30am UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/breach-the-archangel-job-private-beta-sign-up-closed/21313/14 "2016-10-31T04:30:11Z")
I would like to sign up for the private beta as well. As a long time reader of interactive fictions hopefully I will be able to assist on this ---
**Author:** ![phantom1321](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/p/e47c2d/32.png) [@phantom1321](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/u/phantom1321)\ **Post date:** [October 31, 2016, 4:42am UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/breach-the-archangel-job-private-beta-sign-up-closed/21313/15 "2016-10-31T04:42:36Z")
may i also join the private beta ---
**Author:** ![MichaelMaxwell](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/choiceofgames/user_avatar/forum.choiceofgames.com/michaelmaxwell/32/68271_2.png) [@MichaelMaxwell](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/u/MichaelMaxwell)\ **Post date:** [October 31, 2016, 6:00am UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/breach-the-archangel-job-private-beta-sign-up-closed/21313/16 "2016-10-31T06:00:00Z")
@Tuhin_Subhra_Maity @phantom1321 Added! ---
**Author:** ![Bobmegogo](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/b/3d9bf3/32.png) [@Bobmegogo](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/u/Bobmegogo)\ **Post date:** [October 31, 2016, 8:22am UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/breach-the-archangel-job-private-beta-sign-up-closed/21313/17 "2016-10-31T08:22:15Z")
i wouldn’t mind being in the private beta either ---
**Author:** ![MichaelMaxwell](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/choiceofgames/user_avatar/forum.choiceofgames.com/michaelmaxwell/32/68271_2.png) [@MichaelMaxwell](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/u/MichaelMaxwell)\ **Post date:** [October 31, 2016, 10:41am UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/breach-the-archangel-job-private-beta-sign-up-closed/21313/18 "2016-10-31T10:41:22Z")
@Bobmegogo Added! Quick question, does anyone here use Discord? ---
**Author:** ![MichaelMaxwell](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/choiceofgames/user_avatar/forum.choiceofgames.com/michaelmaxwell/32/68271_2.png) [@MichaelMaxwell](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/u/MichaelMaxwell)\ **Post date:** [October 31, 2016, 11:04am UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/breach-the-archangel-job-private-beta-sign-up-closed/21313/19 "2016-10-31T11:04:45Z")
New Batch of tester list (Because I can only mention 10 people in 1 post…) @Bobmegogo @Tuhin_Subhra_Maity @phantom1321 @Tragik_Ending @Imhotep @PotterStinks @Reaper_General @Ixionos16 @122B @Colt_WB ---
**Author:** ![Tragik\_Ending](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/choiceofgames/user_avatar/forum.choiceofgames.com/tragik_ending/32/42115_2.png) [@Tragik\_Ending](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/u/Tragik_Ending)\ **Post date:** [October 31, 2016, 11:24am UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/breach-the-archangel-job-private-beta-sign-up-closed/21313/20 "2016-10-31T11:24:11Z")
Would love to join private beta. [Next page](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/breach-the-archangel-job-private-beta-sign-up-closed/21313.md?page=2)