BREACH: The Archangel Job - (Released! | Discussion) New Discord

[InsanityRun]

Persistent but fascinating to read.

[MichaelMaxwell]

@Voldy

Sorry, mate. It came to mind and I simply had to put it out there. Will be watching for the sign up thread like a hawk.

Then make sure to be awake tomorrow (Or tonight if you’re somewhere in the American continent)[quote=“CaesarCzech, post:399, topic:19446”]
Going to school to get my Proof of succesfully completing exams so in two hours you can expect me to delve into this
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I’m looking forward to it! Mainly because my neck hurts I can’t look back… Seroiusly though, my neck hurts all of the sudden… I don’t know why.[quote=“RagEgnite, post:401, topic:19446”]
I want to join the Phase 2 sign up, but I’m unsure how much free time I actually have for the coming months.

Decisions, decisions…what would my MC do?
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You don’t have to be on throughout the whole Private Thread, just post something to make sure I know you’re still alive

@RagEgnite

Oh. Right. I guess I’ll be looking for that phase 2 thread then.

Awesome! Looking forward to how many people actually still likes the game, let alone know it

@Curious_Boy

hmmm… i guess you didn’t miss anything (though i already forgot about it im not really good with history )

Well, I’m in Indonesia to study it’s history, so I’m obligated to know. It’s also funny that me, a foreigner, knows more about your country than you, a local [quote=“Curious_Boy, post:402, topic:19446”]
dont forget to include me again (i’ll keep both my eyes out, nobody get near my slot as a tester )
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Don’t worry, you and a few others are already on the list I’m going to invite

[MichaelMaxwell]

@CaesarCzech

Okay seems you went back and really worked on the grammar, And the scenes do flow more naturally.

I like to keep my readers happy, after all it’s why I made this game in the first place

@CaesarCzech

Still the scene about mouse joining with you could use a bit more meat. it seems like she isnt character of her own so a bit fleshing out of there might be in order.

Which part are you talking about exactly? If it’s the warehouse scene, then yes. I really need to work back on my previous interpretation of Mouse. Because… my process of writing is a bit… primitive… but it somehow works.

When I started making this game… I had absolutely no idea what I’m doing. And then, as time progresses, I get better (Which is why the prologue is easily the worst, and Chapter 3 is probably the best so far) So I really need to go back and re-work nearly everything. (Which I will do at the end of phase 2)[quote=“CaesarCzech, post:404, topic:19446”]
Got a bit of idea. Will you add Pistol calibrated for sleeping rounds ? i think that while it would be expensive Hey if you can buy armored van you sure as hell can buy other things.
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… Hmmm… I don’t think that’d be efficient. However, you COULD! use a sleeping dart pistol (Don’t know when I’ll implement it, but I’ll work on it)

Also… are you posting the variables so you can show me your progress? Or did you actually encounter a bug?

[MichaelMaxwell]

… I’m starting to think I was drunk when I was writing some of these variables…

“MCsexcount”? I did NOT remember making that…
“bang BANG” What the hell does that even mean?!
"nolastname " and "yeslastname " are completely redundant, why did I even bother making those?
“rellover” … what was I even trying to type? It’s not even used at all in the game!
“improvisation” This and Tactics have the same use. Should I just delete improvisation?

[Curious_Boy]

@MichaelMaxwell

It’s also funny that me, a foreigner, knows more about your country than you, a local

well, unfortunately its not unusual today that foreigner know more about indonesia than the local (mostly young generation) themselves (including me) . fortunately thanks to jacic’s game sea maiden (and all of the awesome WIP i’ve been playtested so far --including your awesome Archangel), im inspired to make choicescript game based on Indonesian’s folklore. though i still didn’t make any progress about learning Choicescript and it didn’t help that my grammar kinda suck as of now… so maybe in the near future.

@MichaelMaxwell

Don’t worry, you and a few others are already on the list I’m going to invite

sweet!! sleep is for the weak anyway

[MichaelMaxwell]

@Curious_Boy

im inspired to make choicescript game based on Indonesian’s folklore.

I’m glad… somewhat… be of an inspiration! Oh! I have a friend, he’s Indonesian (His English is so perfect, he can copy my British accent… Don’t know about his grammar) He’s the current Co-Author of the game. Writer of every single relationship story, and he’s very good at it (He’s responsible for most of the romance, especially Mouse)

When we were writing together in Depok, he came up with this idea of a game, based on this awesome Indonesian movie called “The Raid” the first one. I was like “Nah, the story is too small”

So he made a draft, and called it “Breach: Hotel 44”… which is basically a small version of “The Archangel Job”. It’s based in Bali, where a group of international cirminals have gotten together called “The Crusaders”. And a group of special police from all over the world, including Indonesia, dubbed "Detachment 88 ", is tasked to apprehend all the known criminals in the Hotel. The only problem is, everyone in that hotel, is a criminal.

But then again, I said “It’s too short” so he came up the idea, that you can play as either the attackers “Detatchment 88” or as the defenders “The Crusaders” While still having the idea that the police can betray their members and join the cirminals, and vice versa.

However, since I’m probably going to be off to Canada in the next couple of years… I’m starting to think that that game would actually be a good idea… What do you think? If this sounds like a good game to you, I’ll give him the go word to start making an outline.

However, The Archangel Job still needs to be our priority

P.S: Ben plays Rook, basically every dialogue you will hear him say, are all written by him, because he IS Rook

[Drakeye]

Just curios what is that from?

[MichaelMaxwell]

I think it’s Panty and Stocking (With Garterbelt)

… Don’t ask how I know

[Curious_Boy]

@MichaelMaxwell

His English is so perfect, he can copy my British accent… Don’t know about his grammar

when i go to kampung inggris in kediri before (to improve my english skill). someone told me that indonesian have a tounge that can easily adapt to foreigner accent, the downside is most indonesian can’t understand and differ grammar as easily as they pronounce the words . and in my opinion… that is so true XD

@MichaelMaxwell

However, since I’m probably going to be off to Canada in the next couple of years… I’m starting to think that that game would actually be a good idea… What do you think? If this sounds like a good game to you, I’ll give him the go word to start making an outline.

@MichaelMaxwell

He’s the current Co-Author of the game. Writer of every single relationship story, and he’s very good at it (He’s responsible for most of the romance, especially Mouse)

he should focus with the romance, he is so damn good *cough err, well… i mean im not really a “criminal vs police & action” type of guys and more of “fantasy-action-drama-angst-sci-fi”, and to be honest im kinda surprise myself that i like love Archangle !! and thanks to you i know something new about how to be a criminal (why did when i put it like that, its sounds like a bad thing ). so im not really sure i can judge about his story like an expert i dont know much about the genre… if you think he could pull it off why not you give him a go

@MichaelMaxwell

Ben plays Rook, basically every dialogue you will hear him say, are all written by him, because he IS Rook

wow… can’t wait to read it he did a great job with mouse scene… im so looking forward

[MichaelMaxwell]

@Curious_Boy

“criminal vs police & action” type of guys and more of “fantasy-action-drama-angst-sci-fi”

Oh wow… Then you will love my VAM series. The current series I’m working on is the Breach Series, which focuses on realistic action of cops vs robbers based in current years (2016-2018)

The VAM series is much different, it’s basically a sci-fi action crime thriller (More or less) based in the year 2052-2201 (It’s… about twice as big as the Breach series)[quote=“Curious_Boy, post:414, topic:19446”]
if you think he could pull it off why not you give him a go
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Well… I guess I’m gonna just wait until this game releases and we’ll see…[quote=“Curious_Boy, post:414, topic:19446”]
someone told me that indonesian have a tounge that can easily adapt to foreigner accent
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He can only speak english… but he can speak english in a Russian, Italian, British (Scott, Irish, Posh, Cockney), Canadian, Spanish, Mexican accents… And he loves tounge twisters.

[Voldy]

@MichaelMaxwell

Don’t worry, you and a few others are already on the list I’m going to invite

Wait, am I on this list? Should I be expecting a message from you? It’d be helpful to know.

[MichaelMaxwell]

Oh, you’re definitely on the list. Don’t worry. You’ll see it on the sign up thread later…

[Curious_Boy]

@MichaelMaxwell

The VAM series is much different, it’s basically a sci-fi action crime thriller (More or less) based in the year 2052-2201 (It’s… about twice as big as the Breach series)

sounds interesting when will you put the demo for that (but i agree you should focus with Archangel for now )

@MichaelMaxwell

Well… I guess I’m gonna just wait until this game releases and we’ll see…

that is wise

@MichaelMaxwell

He can only speak english… but he can speak english in a Russian, Italian, British (Scott, Irish, Posh, Cockney), Canadian, Spanish, Mexican accents… And he loves tounge twisters.

i love tounge twisters (who doesn’t love tounge twister ) and wow… that is impressive, not many people that i know can speak that many accent. even my friend that understand Russian never try that many . and as for me, in my highschool years i can speak German, Japan, and Italian… but now i forgot how to do it… i can only try American and British accent when speaking english now. (and im not really good as the other when speaking in my local languange --sundanesse and javanesse-- )

[RagEgnite]

@MichaelMaxwell is right, despite the bizarre nomenclature.

As far as I can tell, Breach is, oh… 2% Panty and Stocking with Garterbelt, 30% Saint’s Row, 10% Payday 2, 8% thinly-veiled product placement, and 50% “totally my idea” stuff.

It’s a pretty good recipe for a Greg mask, if memory serves me right.

[InsanityRun]

Can’t wait to do my Saints Row playthrough

payday 2 pre planning in a nutshell

[MichaelMaxwell]

@RagEgnite

As far as I can tell, Breach is, oh… 2% Panty and Stocking with Garterbelt, 30% Saint’s Row, 10% Payday 2

So many wonderfully awesome names in one sentence with my game… Thank you

@RagEgnite

8% thinly-veiled product placement,

Some of them don’t even exist…

@RagEgnite

and 50% “totally my idea” stuff.

I would like to thank Red Bull, Whiskey, and Coffee for this contribution…[quote=“RagEgnite, post:419, topic:19446”]
It’s a pretty good recipe for a Greg mask, if memory serves me right.
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20% Gay pride, 10% priest work, 70% badass, 0% discounts[quote=“InsanityRun, post:420, topic:19446, full:true”]
Can’t wait to do my Saints Row playthrough
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One of the things I love about the jobs are, no matter how hard you plan… it’s always 1 dice roll away from pure chaos

[InsanityRun]

@MichaelMaxwell

0% discounts

Damn Greg that cheapskate.

[MichaelMaxwell]

Aaand the Sign up thread is up!!

BREACH: The Archangel Job - Phase 2 Sign Up (Closed)

This topic is for those who’d like to sign up for “Breach: The Archangel Job” Private Beta. If this topic is not supposed to be here, please tell me and I’ll put this somewhere else. Private Beta will start (hopefully) at the 2nd of June, 2017, and will be updated at the very least monthly, if possible weekly. But I will reply to the topic as often as I can. If anyone wants to sign up, here’s the place! This thread will be closed at the very least 10th of June. (If I can help it…) Here…

[MichaelMaxwell]

UPDATED!

Ben (Co-Author) Just sent me a few of his codings… and guess what… he made a DUAL WEILDING SYSTEM!!!

So, a little update for you all!

DEVELOPMENT LOG#22 (25-May-2017)

(Public Testing)
(1.O14.17.05.25) <== Check to see if it’s the same!

• Dev notes B: Possible dual wield melee weapons… need to rewrite melee labels and gosubs…
• Dev notes B: randomhittop and randomhitbottom (MISC) not working properly. Need to revise
• Dev notes M: Need to find out how to make custom masks, I.E: Leatherface mask, Bulletproof mask, Ronin Ballistic Mask.
• Few critical bugs fixes
• Added! Chapter 1 new image
• Added! New Sharp Melee Weapons!
• Added! Simplified shooting and taking damage (Only for chapter 3)
  – Tigress Tactical Karambit (Imported directly from Southeast Asia…)
  – Tactical Chisa Katana (For when you feel the urge to slice up your enemy…)
  – D6 Tactical Tomahawk (For when you feel the urge to go ape-shit on your enemy…)
• Added! New Blunt Melee Weapons!
  – Z4P Stun Baton (Imported directly from Southeast Asia…)
  – Brass Knuckles (When it’s personal…)
  – Doorbell Breaching Hammer (Because, why the hell not?)
• Added! Images for melee weapons! (Will be black and white for release, due to obvious copyright reasons)
• Added! DUAL WIELDING (secondary weapons only)!!! YAAAHHHSS!! It was a bitch to figure out, but I finally found a way!
• Added! A Chance to look at the tier 2 weapons at the end of chapter 2, after the heist (So you can see what you can use in chapter 3 :D)
• Deleted! Improvisation checks and a few other useless and/or redundant variables
  OPERATION: Chapter 3: The Outfit and The Corp (23%)
  OPERATION: Input a phone feature into Choicescript_Stats to review info (72%)
  OPERATION: Gregory’s Glorious Goods (Every Robber’s One-Stop Store) (94%)

… My Co-Author is currently working on how to make dual wielding melee weapons work. We may see dual mini-chainsaws in the future

https://dashingdon.com/play/Maxwell121415/breach/mygame/

[InsanityRun]

Images for the M4a1, Ruger Mini, Mac 10, Glock, Beretta 8000, both revolvers, UZI and the Dragunov are missing.

Also the game seems to be a Beretta over M1911 kinda person
MISC line 3235: invalid indent, expected at least one line in ‘if’ true block (appears when buying an M911)
(Scratch that, gunshop might be a bit broken in general)

MISC line 3235: invalid indent, expected at least one line in ‘if’ true block
(Revolver Purchase)