And did you see Gabrielās reaction when you call him senpai ? It was so cute
Judging by how weāre at the start of 4th chapter, and we have 2 more chapters to go with a shit ton of endings and epilogue which has 5 different versionsā¦ Iād say itās possibleā¦
Like I saidā¦ this game is as much written by the community as it is written by meā¦
Oh shush, Gabrielās the deadliest person in The Archangel as of the Archangel Job timelineā¦
The mc doesnāt know who are their parents, so for me Gabe feels like the dad that I never met
Really enjoyed the game!!! Planning to play the demo continuously until I can somehow admit to being an informant and still survive/protect Edwyn with the help of allies and/or skills (highly doubtful on the latter lol)
Errors (warning: spoilers)
This was the scene where Gabriel offers the sapphire necklace; my MC tried to accept (tried both options of saying thanks and saying nothing), but this popped up instead. Iām not sure if it was an error or if I simply needed enough persuasion points? Thought I should bring it up, just in caseā¦
As much as Iād enjoy 3x the sweetness, not sure what happened there XD
I made sure to keep the siblings together (albeit on Kaidanās team) but it seems like theyāre separating in this scene?.. Charlie doesnāt show up in the fight afterwards, though.
I believe this is the last one. I was confused here because I told Edwyn that I was an undercover cop since the beginningā¦ Unless he was bluffing for my MC, but it didnāt seem like it?
I really enjoyed this game Some of my favorite parts had to be when Gabriel was sneezing throughout an entire mission, literally every Raquel and Gabriel interaction (can I say I love their dynamic? Even with Michael? I love it!!!), every Rook and Bishop interaction , and this reference:
A+ content right there among others!
Looking forward to when you complete it!!
Alright Iāve been busy for bit but itās time for to delve into the belly of this beast. If I donāt come back, my will is in my sock drawer.
I donāt know how you do it but you keep making me come back to this. Not once did I ever lose interest in this game and the day that this game is complete will be freakin awesome. BTW, I forgot to take a screenshot sorry at the jewelry store heist, I kept getting a bug saying something about persuasion when I click on the option to accept the necklace Gabriel gives MC. You are awesome
@MichaelMaxwell I just replayed the game an now I was able to romance mouse, I stumbled on an bug though while replaying it Iām not sure if anyone has already mentioned it but hereās the bug anyways!
Hi, iāve finished the demo and i just wanted to say it was great
I must have done something wrongā¦ I got killed along with Mouseā¦ Is is possible at this time to do your work as an undercover agent and not end up dead, without turning on FBI? I wonāt shot a LEO, nope.
Also, although by now I have no idea where it was - somewhere with Kaz at a bar, him asking about me and me telling him a little? - I found the wrong pronoun here:
Soā¦ Gabriel is now unintentionally a dad. Got it.
Thank you! Good to know people are having fun with the demo!
Also donāt worry about the playtest ending of the Undercover cop. Thatās just a placeholder ending for now. Donāt worry, youāll get more content for it soon!
Wrong variable. FIXED!
Iā¦ Donāt know whatās going on Hopefully FIXED!
also Iāve fixed the rest! ā¦ hopefully Benās not here so Iām trying my best to do the fixes.
That is intentional, yes.
Iām so glad people are finding all the references and easter eggs!
It makes writing the game so much easier knowing people are actually enjoying it so far.
Thank you! And I too am looking forward to see what this game will becomeā¦ because honestly, not even I or Ben know how itās going to end up being. We never intended to have a toilet armour, or any mini-chainsaws whatsoever. The very idea of a group of associates and Angels and other Archangels was born from the fact that people in the private thread (and some in the public ones) wanted to contribute to the game, and so I let them in the best way possible, by being part of the gameās actual storyline.
Thank you so much for everyone whoāve contributed!
Looking forward to it!
Not looking forward to it!
Fixed!
Same thing for @C_B
Fixed!
In order to prevent people from losing their save Iāll refrain from updating anything until something big or gamebreaking comes up.
Phew! Thanks, and got it. I do enjoy the game, sweating over decisions - must be purgatory for actual undercover agents, for sure. How far do you go before you lose yourself and your goal, not to mention potentially befriending some of those you are to betray in the endā¦
But that is why I like that option, so thanks for including it.
I wonder if Gabriel is ever romance able? Or Kaidan?
Already fixed, but only will be implemented later on.
Thereās 4 possible outcomes at the end of the FBI branching where the playtest ends. Iām still writing them all.
And yes, the choices do matter, you can do everything from keeping your mouth shut, yell uncle that youāre working for the FBI, or even have Michael be suspicious of Gabriel to a point where they will actually fight each otherā¦ Anything can happen, anything can be.
Youāre welcome! And thank you for enjoying it!
As it has been said, Kaidan will not be romancable, however, Gabriel and Raquel are romancable.
This game is amazing canāt stop playing all the the different outcomes
Okay, Im in love with Mouse, She is so adorable lil brit bisquit
I was playing the demo and I going one grammar mistake:
It should be on his shoulder not in.
Iāve also encountered these two errors when I try to accept the necklace from Gabriel:
And:
For both accept necklace options but I can refuse it just fine.
Hi! Hejsan Svejsan! Hola! Hallo! ā¦
So, I read the demo today, Iām not sure whether I reached the end or not, but it suffices to say that it was aā¦ fabulous, exciting, thrilling creation. Are you sure that you are not a part of the Archangels, @MichaelMaxwell? Because your writing might give somebody that idea. Either that, or you gobbled up spy thrillers pretty well. The whole story has great intensity, and the pace never slacked a little bit. I was feeling like Leo DiCaprio from āThe Departedā, almostā¦
Itās great to see that each and every character has its own background story. Thereās a good sense of humor as well.
Just a few things, I think, need clarification. The relationship stat is pretty slow to grow, especially the FBI, Criminal, Hero ones. Then thereās the option of asking Megan House out, I couldnāt figure out what it was there for. It probably doesnāt have any influence or mention further in the story, does it? The gameplay seems a bit easier than the last time, is it just me, or has there been a bit of tweaking with the parts?
Anyway, itās a great story in the making, and whatever time it takes to end the story perfectly is worth it. Iām so looking forward to the completion of the story.