BREACH: The Archangel Job - Crime Thriller WIP (UPDATED! 15-May-2018!)

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#1814

Well finished reading the update an I must say I liked most parts you changed but all I was thinking was what happened to the extra scenes with mouse???!! :cry: :cry: :cry: That’s the only part which was a little disappointin. But keep up the good work you’re guys are awesome :tada: :star_struck:


#1815

Did you receive an error? Or… did it just crash?

Thank you! And I hope the best for you in your finals! Good luck!

I did say that I would rather die than to see this puppy abandoned… and I mean it.

ELIZABETH!~ Drops to the floor, spazzing out

Looking forward to hearing your feedback!

Which scenes are you talking about? I don’t remember taking out any scenes apart from ones in Chapter 4…

Thank you very much! I’ll try to keep this mind! … god knows I’ll need the motivation :sweat_smile:

Also welcome @Fonex! I’m happy (and quite nervous) to have you here!~

As everyone knows, she is the newest addition to the writing team, and if everyone here would please kindly send all of your reports and feedbacks to @Fonex for the sake of prganization, and my sanity, thank you! And much love! :heart:

I hope everyone has a great day!


#1816

Good news everyone! We’ve reached the …

600,000 Words milestone!!

*Including codes

As of currently the exact number is 645,042 words!

… Wow, good god. What have I been doing with my life?


#1817

Jesus christ…you’ve been having fun obviously


#1818

Wow, now in the Big leagues eh?


#1819

I wouldn’t say so yet… :sweat_smile: I still have a lot of work to do before I can even consider this game to be in the big leagues…

Yeah! With you!~


#1820

Who are all the ROs?


#1821

Avelyne/Edwyn = Both (Available)
Annabelle = Both
Charles = Both
Justin = Male
Carly = Both
Hayne = Both (harder for males)(Available)
Kazton = Female
Megan = Male (debatable)
Rook = Both (debatable)
Gabriel = Both
Raquel = Both


#1822

I don’t think you can romance Megan in the first book right?


#1823

No, you can actually romance Megan


#1824

How do you kiss Mouse and start her romance? I was able to before the update after escaping the police station, but now that option doesn’t show up anymore.


#1825

Really? I get her number but don’t get to hang out with her


#1826

Apparently you can’t romance her before the hangouts. You’ll be able to hangout with her when you have free time in chapter 2 and 3, but not before. When you hang out, you’ll gain the ability to confess to her that you love her on the first hangout (unlike other characters who can only be romanced at the third hangout)

The option is yet to be implemented because we don’t know which of us is going to be writing for Agent House, but we will implement it soon


#1827

Why was it changed? I miss the scene where they falls asleep and you can share the bed with them :sob:


#1828

I would honestly miss it too, and I don’t know why it was removed, it was Ben’s decision, not mine.


#1829

Oh, something popped up, but I don’t recall what and at the time I didn’t think to note it down either… If I was to hazard a guess, something about label? :confounded: Sorry. I’ll play again when I have a chance and see if it happens again and make note of the error. :blush:


#1830

I believe this is the error @Taylor_Enean was talking about


#1831

Ah, I see… FIXED!

There will be an update shortly!~


#1832

SMALL UPDATE!

DEVELOPMENT LOG#31.2 (15-May-2018) (Public Testing)

(3.O23.18.05.15)

  • (31.2 update) - Fixed all reported typos and grammar error.
  • (31.2 update) - Fixed all fixable errors
  • (31.2 update) - Fixed a few breaking issues
  • (31.2 update) - Fixed a game going out of line at chapter 4

#1833

I got this bug