Thank you! I did intend Gabriel to be a main focus, but the game was supposed to be an ensemble of interesting characters.. at least, that was the plan
Fun fact: He learned baking from a female Syrian sniper, who in turn, he taught her how to snipe. And she is now (In the canon world) the deadliest mother in Syria.
Found and fixed!
I know, I know.. It's a really bad habit of mine I usually read the narrations in my mind.. and whenever there's a pause(usually for a dramatic effect..), I add ellipsis to the text.
I try to limit it as best I can..
This reminds me... I should learn how to bake.