Can you romance raquel if yes can someone tell me how please
Yes, you can. You have to not romance or havenāt flirted with any other character, and must have at least 70% relationship with her. You may gain relationship with her through numerous things, two of which are rooting for Gabriel, and getting shot and letting her heal you.
As soon as I finish Hangout 3, youāll have your chance.
Rook really is a gentlemen somewhere deep inside of himā¦ deepā¦ deep inside.
It really is fun to write them
its all good Rook you have alot of āfansā
Rook: I've been blown up by IEDs multiple times, getting friendzoned hurts more...
Thx for telling me but i cant figure out how to get the scene that starts the romance
Its a the end of chapter 3, Gabriel comes to check on you, dont invite him in, if you have 70% with Raquel you will get the opportunity to invite her.
Thx
So even when they first met, they got along like a house on fire? On the job theyāre two people Iād rather never see in an alleyway (or otherwise for that matter) but itās amazing to see how chilled they are off the job - not so much Sweeto Burrito?
Would it help if I said it was a term of endearment?
Please make my day and tell me Sweeto Burrito is a tsundere! I canāt tell if deep down heās a really sweet (and dangerous gun wielding) teddy bear or heās just deadpan.
After seeing the man in action I donāt doubt it! I think it just because heās so utterly precious when you get to know him thatās difficult not to! That being said, pretty much every single one of your characters seems to have secrets and/or dark pasts. Will there ever be time or space for MC to discover them?
Extra content for the content we already have? I keep telling you youāre too early for Christmas!
Rook is agile, and has near superhuman stamina regeneration. His hands move incredibly fast, though not as fast as Kaidan, but still fast enough to exert enough energy to crush your ribs and disrupt your heartbeat in a single punch. Heās fast, eager, and somewhat insane.
Bishop on the other hand has the near superhuman endurance. He could take an incredible amount of injuries and still continue to walk and fight for as long as he could still breathe. He complements Rookās fast-paced firefight nature with his own patient and resilient mindset.
A fight between Rook and Bishop would last for daysā¦ with no probable winners.
Rook: Then yes! I like it!
Bishop isā¦ a very interesting person. His story is actually quite sad and can be a bit creepy.
Which brings me to my next point:
All of the character backstories will be somewhat explained in the hangouts except for a select few.
However, I do plan to make short stories for every last one of the crew members and especially for Rook, Bishop, Kaidan if necessary, Gabriel, Raquel, and Michael. Howeverā¦ if Iām going dedicate my life to this game, Iām going to need patreon
Honestly itās getting harder and harder for me to do that (with my MC)! I just have to keep reminding myself of Gabriel. I mean, my MC has to keep reminding herself of Gabriel!
I kind of like his weirdness
Iām pretty sure Gabriel wouldnāt care (heās lucky I like him so much!)
So does this mean Raquel doesnāt need us to be her wingman/woman?
Love this game and canāt till it comes out youāre a really great writer
I donāt think Gabriel would mind.
Yep
Yes, and no. Gabriel and Raquel will be together either way, but without the MCās help, never in a romantic way.
Thank you! Iām glad you enjoyed the game!
Rook reminds me of a certain character from an old tv showā¦ Hereās a quoteā¦
āBut you stole this pillow.ā
āYeah, but itās the thought that counts.ā
āHe doesnāt want me dead, he just wants to me to sufferā She explains. "He doesnāt want me to testify against him because he knows I know everything about him
He just wants me to suffer*
And the tire pop on annaās side story at chapter 3 isnāt bold.
- Off-read capable
Road
Where would this be?
I have no idea who that is, but nice
If Iām reading correctly, the use of this instance of pop is an onomatopoeia. Youāve used these before, in words such as bang and snaps and clicks. It signifies a sound being made. Then again, Crow could be meaning something else entirely. Havenāt played much of Annaās route.
Car chase with the investigator when you shoot his car tires the pop should have been bold i think.
Exactly that but i cbf copying because i was eating some chipsā¦chiiiips~
Misconstrued where as why. oof. Shouldāve known.
Well itās been fixed.
Donāt worry, just a few edits here and there. Nothing major.
Summary
So, hereās the second character. Iāve always played a smiley, or a shotty on occasion. Anywaysā¦
So I chose to skip chapter 1, and chose the ācops killedā option.
Iād add a hyphen between mid and twenties
Comma after house
Hey wait, wasnāt there an old intro with our mc in an apartment and then the SWAT breach the room? When was that, pre-phase 2? Anywaysā¦
Should be 2 men
Iāll be eagerly awaiting that car chase. Slammed might work better if it was slam, given the amount of present-tense nouns in this sequence.
Turned may be turn, as this is present-tense, right?
Yo but like, isnāt it illegal if you canāt actually hear your miranda rights?
BTW, can we just feed the feds misinformation, as they know so little about the Archangels?
Should be the man says, leaning back in his chair. Or whatever.
But he didnāt cut her off. She finished her sentence. Maybe replace the last period with a hyphen? And why is Reville constantly referred to as āthe manā? We have seen his name.
Add a after picture.
Capitalize ātheā
add ātoā after you.
add a space after the comma.
Add period after woman.
Change see-through to transparent. Or clear, or something.
Remove the space before the apostrophe
āVeryā
Ok, so we just hold up the feds at gunpoint, and they casually ask me for information? Why arenāt cops flooding the room, and sending me straight into a cell?
Remove the period after suddenly. Replace with ā¦ or -. Change before to when.
Add a period after seat.
āIāll tell you a joke. Your interrogation skills.ā
āThe only real joke here is your hairlineā
idk if you want to add these, dialogue options seemed a little sparseā¦
Why would she ask me if I was shot?
Add a period after tie.
Yeah, let me have some escargot
Make C lowercase, add period after coffee.
Wouldnāt this me mademoiselle?
Who?
This kinda contradicts her earlier statementā¦
Easy, just look for anyone shorter than 5ā4"
Remove the period
Should be āwhatās the design gonna be?ā
Thatāll be all.
Jazz from the Fresh Princeā¦