BREACH: Chicago War Zone (WIP) (1 Million Words UPDATE! 23-April-2024)

Author mentioned this is the second of the 3 books in the first post of the thread, just to cite a source.

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Would be cool, but i dont think so. The main three, or at least Gabriel and Raquel are some sort of specialists ((they hint at this when they mention an old unit)), and are all skilled in multiple fields. It isnt easy just becoming a Raphael like the MC.

Plus, that isnt even bringing into consideration that in the FBI arc she can potentially die. Mouse just doesnt have the nerve. :person_shrugging:

If anything, itd be more likely that she’d be given a unique title; since she is the only one with no angel codename so far. And we haven’t really seen any other tech expert than her.

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Maybe you’re right, but when I was playing the book 1, Gabriel said to Kaidan to promote two people from his crew to become the next Raphael/Raquel, and to hire two recruits to substitute their places.

Sure, Mouse isn’t ready yet to become the next Raquel/Raphael, but with some training provided from us or the Trio, they can become one (same goes for the Raphael and Raquel of LA’s crew, but under Kaidan’s supervision).

Also, Mouse had shown some traces of leadership, at least during this demo. But I won’t discard the fact that Mouse can get an unique title for them too.

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Two people. Kayden or w.e was one, and MC will be the second.

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Can someone tell me how the hatori chisa katana looks like?
I googled it and it shows pics of diffrent katanas but none has the name.

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Can we perhaps become Michael :eyes:

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It’s Katana but smaller

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Unfortunately no, Mouse cannot be come Raphael, nor would they want to :sweat_smile:

It’s a rather stressful position to be in, and Mouse doesn’t handle pressure too well.

I will do my best, osteoporosis will not stop me from writing. At least I hope not… I will write so long as I scan still mash my keyboard keys.

But yes, there will be a lot of choices and branches getting thicker and thicker, Breach 2 is basically two stories mashed into one game, Breach 3 will be three stories… I have no idea why I’ve done this to myself, but I have little regrets.

All I can hope, is that I can deliver this to you all for you to enjoy it. That is all I could ever ask for.

Hopefully three:
Breach 1: The Archangel Job
Breach 2: Chicago War Zone
Breach 3: (Title to be determined)

in between 2 and 3, plan on writing Afar: Mad World, a different universe set in a dark fantasy wasteland, based off of mostly DnD 5e but, still using the MISC engine that currently runs on Breach 2.

MC will be able to choose amongst the crew member who will be Raphael, but Mouse will still be with you, no matter where you choose to go as Gabriel, or, as something else.

It’s more of a Wakizashi than a Katana, actually it’s sort of in between, in a way.

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Sounds like a story that involves someone who wields a fish as a weapon.

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All I can think of is the song Mad World :face_with_hand_over_mouth: :face_with_hand_over_mouth: :face_with_hand_over_mouth:

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Breach: Chicago war zone will be on play store when it’s released? Please say yes :pleading_face:

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Yes…

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It’ll hopefully be on the base release platforms, Apple store, Google Playstore, as well as the HG omnibus app. Hopefully it’ll also be available on Amazon and Steam as well.

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I should probably do more progress update on what’s been going on more often here than in the Discord server.

So, to keep everyone in the loop, I have been busy going back and forth on keeping myself sane amongst other things. The house I lived in is currently going through some renovation cause of the many years of flooding, and I had to move out and temporarily live away. I brought all of my stuff with me so I am still able to work but, it’s been exhausting going back and forth, and dealing with the family issues surrounding it.

To be perfectly honest… I feel like vomitting. But, I’m still working on getting the FBI update through to testing first before moving it onto the public, it’s nearly done so most likely next month will have the update through.

I am very sorry for the delays… there’s been, so many things going on and it’s hard to keep track of everything and stay on top of it all…

Much love, and I hope everyone here stays safe. :heart:

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Ay it will come out when it comes out. No pressure cheif

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Hey Michael,
No pressure! Thank you for sharing what is going on!
You don’t owe us anything, we can only thank you for giving us such a great story…
Much love and good vibes to you and your family!

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You don’t need to apologize for any delays: as your audience and supporters we have no right to demand that you dedicate any of your time or wellbeing to us, far from it, you have every right to take all the time in the world.

We all love the story you’ve written and the one that you’re dedicating yourself to right now, but I think some people have forgotten that there is a living, breathing person behind these stories with a real life and all the problems that come with it.

So take your time, take breaks, and most importantly, take care of yourself. We’ll support you in all that you do

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We are slaves to the government

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mad respect for you max, take care.

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Update 10 is now going through it’s private testing phase, around the middle of the month, or nearing the end of the month, it will be made public with extra fixes and update.

For now… I need to rest…

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