Well if im now the Persona 3 Protagonist i’m now going to do this. agility binds you because Persona Q!
you’re having fun with this aren’t you?
Yes I am. It is distracting me from reading/playing this game however.
ah my apologies I’ll stop then.
Nah its fine. Apologies for being weird. bows
“Who was the operative? A” Uhhhhh… I just noticed that, it is kinda weird. Im going to assume that was a mistake.
Other than that, I have no huge complaints (Other than personal preferences)! I have a suspicion about our main character, but that’s it!
It was honestly quite enjoyable. Personally, im not a huge fan of changing perspectives in regards to interactive fiction games (or 4th wall breaking, at least not by default, but more an unlock-able bonus feature), but its alright. It’s more of a dislike due to personal playing preferences (I like to try to restrict myself to only knowledge my character would know [Or in the case of repeated playthroughs, what they would know at the time], and seeing things from another perspective can give you knowledge [That then influences your decisions], that your character doesn’t have.), but not one so major that I can’t for the most part still enjoy the game/story. (As the story is paramount. And the ending to the story, and the story in general.)
The story looks like it’s off to a good start. Please keep up the good work.
Will you be adding more stats to the stats screen as time goes on like piloting, repair skill, mechanical knowledge, health bar, reaction time/reflexes etc.?
Will we get to choose the MC’s appearance like hair and eye color?
I have a feeling that the MC either related to this Abel in some way, like his son or possibly another relative or even his clone. Because I don’t think the MC is Abel since the Singapore conflict started 8 years ago in the story when the MC was 10 unless OUR makes a habit of sending 10 year olds into battle. Well either that or humanity in this world has found a way to de-age people.
Is it possible that the MC no matter his relation to Abel or maybe even Abel himself are OUR sleeper agents? It could explain how Abel’s could disappear without a Trace with only a few OUR higher ups knowing the truth.
The cut offs are driving me insane I want to know what happens next!
@Hellfire So you like the story so far?
In any case I apologize if you or any of the other fans of this WIP find the consistent cliffhangars annoying, but my schedule prevents me from updating in large bursts so I have to do it in these small increments.
I hope you’ll all bear with me.
On an unrelated note: When I re-read what I wrote W.Y.W.R.A entry in the codex, I realize that it doesn’t give off the meaning I intended and I’ll edit accordingly later, but…
When I said that the minimal age requirements for certain professions were lowered in order to help fill labor requirements for the construction of space colonies… I didn’t mean it like that 14 year olds fresh out of high school were given space suits and a torch… then sent to work.
Much like how it’s illegal for those under the age of 18 to travel across country or internationally without permission, the same applies to orbital travel.
With that in mind by lowering the minimal age requirements for certain jobs as mundane as flipping burgers and sweeping up trash to important jobs like joining the force or the military… it “frees us” the work force by having employers take advantage of impressionable teens instead of the adults with family’s to feed.
These now out of work talented healthy young men and woman are drawn to the job opportunities in the colonies encouraging their immigration. Taking a job in it’s construction ensures a steady paycheck for several years, and living expenses are taken care of, discount on colony housing once the space colony is complete.
Then of course there are businesses in the completed colonies that need workers like again guys who flip burgers or sweeping trash to things like teaching or joining the force.
This coupled with the increased interest in education by teenagers due to the piss poor paychecks from their minimum wage jobs and the drop in gang violence resulted in an economic boom.
Animal line 74: Non-existant command ‘you’
1 Like
Oh god it’s been a while, is there a new update to the game or still in progress for the next chapter?
@Xero_Espadas The game has been updated to include a new update to chapter 1 as well as the game’s preliminary codex. Play it when you get the chance and find out yourself.
Ok finishing playing the first chapter it’s pretty good so far but I noticed some Grammer and spelling error during the pages and also an error on the codex you can see in the picture below
@Xero_Espadas Ah then what did you think of the codex itself grammar errors aside?
Anyways I’ve made a note of all of the grammar errors pointed out to me and plan to grammar check it with a fine tooth comb once chapter 1 is complete and before I start on chapter 2.
I like the detail of the info on each of the characters, along with more details on the Breakers units and the warships involves. The whole codex is very well detail with the history of their world involving organizations and certain points within their timeline that show breaking points of conflicts, drawing me to the story.
Also is there away during the after the first chapter you can set up the status on each of the characters
Like if they are alive, dead or MIA?
@Xero_Espadas After looking at the code I could.
Sweet looking foward to it and the next chapter
