# Bloodbound **URL:** \ **Category:** Works In Progress\ **Created:** [September 13, 2012, 4:33pm UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/bloodbound/751 "2012-09-13T16:33:29Z")\ **Posts on this page:** 20\ **Page:** 1
**Author:** ![kkuomi](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/choiceofgames/user_avatar/forum.choiceofgames.com/kkuomi/32/379_2.png) [@kkuomi](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/u/kkuomi)\ **Post date:** [September 13, 2012, 4:33pm UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/bloodbound/751/1 "2012-09-13T16:33:29Z")
(Not entirely sure if this will work) [https://dl-web.dropbox.com/get/dfabulich-choicescript-23e5605/web/mygame/index.html?w=54b182c9](https://dl-web.dropbox.com/get/dfabulich-choicescript-23e5605/web/mygame/index.html?w=54b182c9) –will do much editing later on. Its pretty late here atm so some of it may sound a little weird:p Call me absolutely evil for starting a new CoG when I haven’t finished the last one (or gone anywhere relatively far in it), but this idea was just too much for me to pass on it! :C I’m not promising anything this time, but I feel as though Vampires \> Zombies just a little bit, at least, and I just wanted to add to the vampfandom. I’m new to dropbox and it befuddles me because it wont take any of my .zip files, but I tried to mess with it, and here is the final result! Cx Story outline (I promise it is more interesting than the other one you may have seen 😛 I wanted to do a cliche historical fiction with that one…) You, as you may have earlier guessed, play as a vampire in this game! Your family of vampire hunters are killed one day, after your father gets into some trouble with a clan of some really hardcore vampires. You and your family try to get away, but no! Oh no, you are turned into a vampire and welcomed into a clan(different vampires). You can decide whether to: 1. Follow in your parents footsteps and slay your (now) own kind 2. Rise to the top of the vampires and become their new King/Queen/Leader 3. Seek revenge on those jerks that killed your family or choose your own path whatever that may be. (As you can see, I am still working on this D8) I am posting this early on because I have taken advice, and posted my first little seedlings of ideas out into the world to be judged and so, if there is anything I can do to make it better, I can change it without much hassle. Enjoy! 😃 Remember, I love criticism. If you have any comments/questions, please tell. That would be fabulous I also love flames. Thank you! C’: ---
**Author:** ![817819](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/choiceofgames/user_avatar/forum.choiceofgames.com/817819/32/260870_2.png) [@817819](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/u/817819)\ **Post date:** [September 17, 2012, 8:22pm UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/bloodbound/751/2 "2012-09-17T20:22:00Z")
my suspiscions were correct this is quite badass ---
**Author:** ![Fujin](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/choiceofgames/user_avatar/forum.choiceofgames.com/fujin/32/675_2.png) [@Fujin](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/u/Fujin)\ **Post date:** [September 17, 2012, 7:46pm UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/bloodbound/751/3 "2012-09-17T19:46:36Z")
I like it. It’s pretty cool so far 🙂 ---
**Author:** ![13ventrm](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/choiceofgames/user_avatar/forum.choiceofgames.com/13ventrm/32/579_2.png) [@13ventrm](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/u/13ventrm)\ **Post date:** [September 13, 2012, 4:38pm UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/bloodbound/751/4 "2012-09-13T16:38:05Z")
I’m not being allowed access to the game when I click the link. ---
**Author:** ![wolfwriter20](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/choiceofgames/user_avatar/forum.choiceofgames.com/wolfwriter20/32/716_2.png) [@wolfwriter20](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/u/wolfwriter20)\ **Post date:** [September 13, 2012, 4:39pm UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/bloodbound/751/5 "2012-09-13T16:39:46Z")
Neither am I, comes up with a 403 error ---
**Author:** ![Antitorpiliko](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/choiceofgames/user_avatar/forum.choiceofgames.com/antitorpiliko/32/761_2.png) [@Antitorpiliko](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/u/Antitorpiliko)\ **Post date:** [September 13, 2012, 5:01pm UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/bloodbound/751/6 "2012-09-13T17:01:55Z")
error 403, seems fun though ---
**Author:** ![CJW](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/choiceofgames/user_avatar/forum.choiceofgames.com/cjw/32/111787_2.png) [@CJW](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/u/CJW)\ **Post date:** [September 13, 2012, 5:14pm UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/bloodbound/751/7 "2012-09-13T17:14:35Z")
The game needs to be inside the public folder of dropbox and you need to provide us with the “public” link ---
**Author:** ![AlexCosarca](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/choiceofgames/user_avatar/forum.choiceofgames.com/alexcosarca/32/68977_2.png) [@AlexCosarca](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/u/AlexCosarca)\ **Post date:** [September 13, 2012, 5:15pm UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/bloodbound/751/8 "2012-09-13T17:15:14Z")
Try doing this: 1. Place your “web” folder in the “Dropbox/Public” folder. 2. Go in your “web” folder inside the “Dropbox/Public” folder 3. Right-click the “index.html” file, go to the “Dropbox” menu and click “Copy public link” 4. Paste the link here. This way, we’ll just playtest the game online. ---
**Author:** ![kkuomi](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/choiceofgames/user_avatar/forum.choiceofgames.com/kkuomi/32/379_2.png) [@kkuomi](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/u/kkuomi)\ **Post date:** [September 13, 2012, 5:22pm UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/bloodbound/751/9 "2012-09-13T17:22:01Z")
Ok! I will do that! 😃 thank you all so much! 🙂 it seems that my last comment didnt post but I am on my phone at the moment, so I must do it tomorrow after school ':c Thank you all for trying though, and I’m terribly sorry about the delay! ☹ ---
**Author:** ![Antitorpiliko](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/choiceofgames/user_avatar/forum.choiceofgames.com/antitorpiliko/32/761_2.png) [@Antitorpiliko](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/u/Antitorpiliko)\ **Post date:** [September 13, 2012, 5:25pm UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/bloodbound/751/10 "2012-09-13T17:25:01Z")
dont worry about it. however I will be driving tomorrow to see a girl who I love very much, so idk when I will play it. ---
**Author:** ![CJW](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/choiceofgames/user_avatar/forum.choiceofgames.com/cjw/32/111787_2.png) [@CJW](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/u/CJW)\ **Post date:** [September 13, 2012, 5:28pm UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/bloodbound/751/11 "2012-09-13T17:28:04Z")
^TMI ---
**Author:** ![817819](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/choiceofgames/user_avatar/forum.choiceofgames.com/817819/32/260870_2.png) [@817819](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/u/817819)\ **Post date:** [September 13, 2012, 9:05pm UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/bloodbound/751/12 "2012-09-13T21:05:07Z")
the game sounds badass ---
**Author:** ![DonkeyKong](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/choiceofgames/user_avatar/forum.choiceofgames.com/donkeykong/32/605_2.png) [@DonkeyKong](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/u/DonkeyKong)\ **Post date:** [September 13, 2012, 11:02pm UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/bloodbound/751/13 "2012-09-13T23:02:07Z")
I’m a sucker for romance and I would like to know if there will be any. ^.^ ---
**Author:** ![djma46](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/choiceofgames/user_avatar/forum.choiceofgames.com/djma46/32/2711_2.png) [@djma46](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/u/djma46)\ **Post date:** [September 14, 2012, 3:23pm UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/bloodbound/751/14 "2012-09-14T15:23:24Z")
the demo don’t work or more correctly has an error when you click the link :-? ---
**Author:** ![ice](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/i/aeb1de/32.png) [@ice](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/u/ice)\ **Post date:** [September 16, 2012, 6:05am UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/bloodbound/751/15 "2012-09-16T06:05:03Z")
403 error i dont belong :S ---
**Author:** ![kkuomi](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/choiceofgames/user_avatar/forum.choiceofgames.com/kkuomi/32/379_2.png) [@kkuomi](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/u/kkuomi)\ **Post date:** [September 17, 2012, 6:02pm UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/bloodbound/751/16 "2012-09-17T18:02:31Z")
I am so overdue on this :’) Oh dear. Before anybody says anything… I have my excuses… \<.\< \>.\> The first day… I… Went… Surfing… Then… I was hungry. Then I had school. ':a [http://gossamerthreads.webs.com/Bloodbound/web/mygame/index.html](http://gossamerthreads.webs.com/Bloodbound/web/mygame/index.html) Here is the link. Dropbox is not for me XD I overwrote my last CoG, but I saved the data elsewhere C; (if you can call it that) So you may notice that I haven’t changed the Stats page from Freydale XD I will do that later. Enjoy/pretend 😃 \<3 ---
**Author:** ![kkuomi](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/choiceofgames/user_avatar/forum.choiceofgames.com/kkuomi/32/379_2.png) [@kkuomi](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/u/kkuomi)\ **Post date:** [September 17, 2012, 6:09pm UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/bloodbound/751/17 "2012-09-17T18:09:34Z")
@817819, I can’t help being naturally badass 😕 its how I roll, bro. (kidding) c; thanks! @DonkeyKong, I also love romance! 😃 and I would love to put romance in it, but we’ll have to see because I’m not exactly the greatest writer ever, so I will try and Try to (not) make it soppy/bearable/painful (delete as appropriate) c: @djma46 @ice hopefully the new link will be okay! 😃 any problems, just say! C: @Antitorpiliko, aww hope that went well for you 🙂 and read it anytime! XD no rush 😛 ---
**Author:** ![wolfwriter20](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/choiceofgames/user_avatar/forum.choiceofgames.com/wolfwriter20/32/716_2.png) [@wolfwriter20](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/u/wolfwriter20)\ **Post date:** [September 17, 2012, 6:17pm UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/bloodbound/751/18 "2012-09-17T18:17:00Z")
I had no trouble with the new link 🙂 I thought what you have so far is very good. I liked how it transitioned from “oh everything is happy and we are singing” to “oh no! Run!” in about a second. Really worked well to draw me in. I find myself wanting to know what happens to my character and his little sister. There were one or two sentences that I found confusing, but I could have just misread them. I will go back through and see if I spot them again. I wonder, if our parents survive and we turn into a vampire…will they hunt us? That would prove an excellent conflict. Anyway, good job! ---
**Author:** ![Pace675](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/choiceofgames/user_avatar/forum.choiceofgames.com/pace675/32/10543_2.png) [@Pace675](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/u/Pace675)\ **Post date:** [September 17, 2012, 6:18pm UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/bloodbound/751/19 "2012-09-17T18:18:35Z")
I like what I have read so far. Just a note on the stat screen, it is not showing the player’s name or gender… Leep up the excellent work XD ---
**Author:** ![Antitorpiliko](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/choiceofgames/user_avatar/forum.choiceofgames.com/antitorpiliko/32/761_2.png) [@Antitorpiliko](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/u/Antitorpiliko)\ **Post date:** [September 17, 2012, 8:36pm UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/bloodbound/751/20 "2012-09-17T20:36:31Z")
It did not end well for me. Liked the beta! Want to become a vampire though, they are better then humans [Next page](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/bloodbound/751.md?page=2)