I’ll take a look into that and make the correction. Thank you 
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Hi, thank you ,glad youl like the demo and Hayden 
And…
I plan to have a maximum of 7 or 8 chapters, and they will be quite long. As for how many books, for now the plans are for 2 books. Could there be a third? Yes, there is a possibility, I’m still figuring it out, but the maximum would be 3. The question of being born as an elemental depends on the parents - if any, or both, or even other family members are elementals, there is a high chance of being born as an elemental. Conversely, it’s more random. And no, a child cannot have both powers of two parents. That would be both dangerous and unheard of, and there has never been a child like that, even if both parents are elementals with different elemental abilities. They only inherit one.
And I’m sorry about this, but I deleted the old demo and ended up losing the files, except for chapter 3, which I still have. Later, I can try to put it back for you to play if you want to reminisce. But for now, the link is deleted.
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Hi! and I simplified at the time because I didn’t have much time at that moment to add the scenes. But I’ve been having more time recently, and what you said gave me ideas. They are great suggestions, and I will add more varieties of reaction options when I bring the next update. To solve this, and not seem too out of nowhere, depending on the MC you all play.
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New demo is looking fine, nice work
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Thank you Glad you like it
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I liked it.
Notes are, Eris still calling me a psychopath when didn’t kill anyone. Versus there slaughterhouse fest. She called me a psycho but killed lots of guards versus my zero, pre imprisonment.
Those that said they did get enslavement tats. Yeah, I did not by trying to resovle peacefully it seems. Though there may of been intent eventually.
Curious to what that ends up doing.
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did the linear demo… does it end when E arrived at village ?
because it keep looping back to the training scene
hmm… this one kind of a slow-burn at the start.
some choices feel a bit forced and of no consequence or rather inconsistent.
maybe it was as intended because mc can’t do anything being a child ?
but mc have too much of black/white personality by either obedient little heir or weak crybaby. why can’t a gentle guy being brave or sarcastic too ?
thing start to get better after M died though which is bit deep into the story.
btw. the the cover reminded me of dragon age ಠ ‿↼
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There are bobs and bits missing as timeline shift changes that gotta be reordered and put back in.
Yep that is a mouthful!
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Ehh not really MC can be obedient but sometimes can show that MC dislike the way things being done.
Since MC is still a child obviously some option is no go, MC can be emotional as well but still can be strong or be weak rebellious crybaby, MC could also be calculating and ruthless or just straight psychopathic and indiscriminate.
Some option also open up cold unapproachable MC while choosing specific interaction would shape MC to be stoic and apathetic.
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Is their a update or did you accidentally mark it as updated or something because if you go to dashingdon it’s on the front page
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The update is available! I didn’t warn before because I was busy. But I warned and talked about it in the post on patreon (To which I talked about some things ,any member, free or paid, can access) and discord (which I need to update the link), I’ll respond more properly later, I need to do some things here and then I’ll notify on tumblr.
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Attention, the updated link was the one with flashbacks, not the linear one, okay.
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Great update, it’s getting juicy now! Urg Hayden pisses me off, why do I love him so much? 
Can’t wait for more!
Typos:
Summary
You notice prince looking at your shoulders, not your eyes. prince seemed almost… curious? he was… Of course, your scars. (the prince)
The prince seemed to realize that too, judging by the way him shrunk back. (him should be he)
but the concern is still present in prince’s posture
(the prince)
“Here. It must be cold.” prince takes one of the gray blankets and offers it to you as he sits. (the prince)
“You’re welcome,” The prince says, taking another cup and spoon for himherself. (himself)
“The court jester.” Hayren stares at you. he’s serious… (Hayden)
The elf swallows hard as he stumbles and is pulled, so that both are face to face. “You filthy, I’ll teach you to obey your superiors!” (need a noun after filthy)
“He won’t.” Your father gives the lord a glance, who falls silent under the attention. “your majesty has a reputation to maintain; asking for help won’t make him appear as powerful as he claims to be.” (should be his majesty instead of your)
“Damn!” Kori swore, laughing. "Would prince accept being with me too? (the prince)
“I am Sir Jefferson Alves, and this is my nephew, Eris Alves,” the man said, raising his gaze to you and so did the young (young either needs a noun after it or be changed to youth, which is a noun)
“And will you do that?” Eris furrows her brow, but there was no accusation in her voice, just curiosity and confusion. (wrong gender for Eris in this passage)
“No one helps my ! If I see anyone offer help, they’ll join the corpses. (missing variable, should be son/daughter/child but is blank)
Edit: More typos from different playthrough:
He shrugs. “I don’t know, you Gael seem to have a habit of poking your noses where they don’t belong. Usually threatening someone in the process.” (I believe the MC should only have one nose unless I have seriously misread everything lol)
You looked at them before you began to descend the steps.
You looked at them before you began to descend the steps.
As you come before the crowd, having descended the steps of Aldior Vul’s (repeated text)
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Hayden, Hayden… My girl, why do I get the feeling that my Gael is going to have to punch a lot of people to get your adventure-seeking ass out of another mess? Guy’s got enough gray hairs as it is.
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It seems the saves files are fucked every time an update happens because every file I have, it only takes me right to the beginning so I think it should be fixed because it’s kind of killing my interest in this WIP.
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Saves can’t be “fixed” if new variables are added, it’s impossible. That’s just part of the whole “in progress” part of WIP.
But for the record, mine all worked fine so it might be something on your end.
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No, I had a new save file after the update came out due to having to run errands but it did the same thing. Just took me back right to the beginning
I think the coding for save files was screwed up somehow and it haven’t been fixed.
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Found a bug that wont let me proceed any further in the demo.
When arriving in Volka and trying to choose the gender of the one who stops you from coming to blows at the gate, theres an error saying something to the effect of “cap1 line 6975 non existent variable ‘nephew’”
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I feel you if you’re having issues, but to be clear, it’s not an author issue. The dashing don save code is literally one line, five words. If it’s correct it works, if it’s wrong, it gives a message something like “sm init bad save” (I don’t remember the actual words, but close enough). It is working perfectly. There is also the infamous glitch that sometimes takes you to the stats menu instead of progress (also not an author issue) but that doesn’t seem like what you are experiencing, there is no glitch that is taking you to the start that has anything to do with coding, it’s something else. I have no idea what but it’s not coding.
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