@trollhunterthethird I call them ‘repulsive-contrivances-of-which-the-very-notion-of-wearing-is-abhorrent’.
My bad. I thought the pun was from one Brakes songs.
https://dl.dropbox.com/u/101514702/Drawings/Kel.JPG
So…
@Roslyn_samalt06 I made it darker to hide dirt and grime, practicality lol
But really since this character has kind of an dark edge, I wanted to make it a bit darker image
But I’m still open to change
@Headhunter180 a wink huh…nah to anime but its a small change erase eye draw line done lol
I would make the shirt a lite color , so it will stand out better against the background. Other than that the picture is wonderful.
Hmmm I, I love it but I also wonder how it’d look if he was winking at you…
Am I doing it in the death note art style ?
But if Farside wants a wink ill do it
No, I’m just sayin’ (no pun intended) that the death note art style sticks very close to Realism so it wouldn’t just be a line like in a “chibi” drawing.
Ok now I’m lost, we went from Kel and winks and colors to Random verses from Marvin’s room by Drake. …What?
No, it was actually a DBZ pun, (sayajin= sayin’)?
Huh, I’m not into dragon ball z so I guess that’s why I didn’t catch that. Anyways, I didn’t mean to get off topic. Sorry @Farside.
Don’t worry about it guys. A little off topic is fine between updates. I’ll let you know if I feel like it dominates the thread too much. 
Can you guys do me a favor and post your end stats for your MC?
No problem. Give me a sec to play through. By the way I haven’t gotten a confession from Carmelle yet and I think I’ve done everything right.
I’ll check that, because I think somebody else said something about not getting her confession as well.
Make sure you have at least 3 influence with her.
what page is the latest link on?
This is a link to Update 2.5. It’s buggy as hell though and not very long. https://dl.dropbox.com/u/54501502/web/mygame/index.html
You can always find the link to the latest update on the choicescript wiki page.
I actually got Carmelle’s confession. It requires a little work, however.
*spoilers*
When you wake up and notice Carmelle in bed beside you and she gets up, your MC should pull her back down and choose the option that says “I love you.”