I know that I still have many previous comments to work on, but I wanted to move forward a bit with the story. Basically, added one extra “side-mission” (more like training really…)
@Hearts, incorporated your suggestions, thanks! (but, for the default abilities, like flying, these are extra powers you have to choose…). Also, incorporated a comment by captain villardi to reassure MC that there is no tracker.
@Yaya1213, changed latino to latina (thanks for typo!). However, I’m reluctant to introduce accents, as they may not show up properly in the final game (I know have a french character also, and have left all the accents out of that too). Regarding the suggestion not to go… yes, I guess this is a clear case of railroading, as not going would cause so many structural problems in the story. I am reluctant to implement this, sorry (it would mean lots of coding and make the whole structure confusing). However, in the second half of the story I’m thinking of introducing more branching, and this is something I have in my mind (evil route!). However, it is possible to get the stone, with the right powers/abilities. Let me know if you can’t manage (I think some other reviewers mentioned they could, so I don’t think there is a bug…)