I was hoping to wait a little bit longer until releasing the WIP “Birth of a Hero”, which won the 4th place at the CSComp 2017. However, I’m planning to join Nanowrimo and finish this game in November, which means that it might be better for me to get a little bit of feedback to see where the game is going.
The story is that a meteorite disintegrated as it entered the atmosphere, granting superpowers to anybody who touched one of the fragments. The first half of the story is completed, though I had to cut short what I had in mind in order to manage to submit to the CSComp (I ran out of time, currently it is almost 50,000 words, with a playthrought length of 15,000, I expect the final piece to be ~120,000 in total, with average playthroughts of 30,000 words)
So, for those that want to play it the link is here
However, I won’t be significantly updating that link (aside from some extra content that is already in my head and that is needed for the second part to function), and all the new content (i.e. the second part of the story) will go into a private beta.
Only those who help in the development of the game will be invited to participate in the private thread.
In order to be invited into that thread, you must post (or PM) me with suggestions about the game.
These can be (but not limited to)
-Typos, suggestions of grammar improvements
-Indications of places where you felt you should have been able to use a power, but were not given the option to do so
-Additional actions that you felt you would have liked to perform
-Other comments, suggestions, etc
Finally, I might accommodate some requests for extra powers to be added (though the list is already quite extensive…). In order for that to happen, you need to tell me specifically which power to be added, and in which scenes you would expect to be able to use it (and the expected results. It should be able to use each power at least 3-4 times within the first half of the game alone)